Okay, I hated that chapter, So I have rewritten it but left the authors note. I would also like to give Sharnorasian Empire a round of applause. He reviewed within 10 minutes of me updating the last. Well done

I know that it has been a month and a half since I updated, but I have a very good excuse. While not updating I was practicing for a national competition which I have gone to. On the 30th of June I and 3 other people from my school went to Nottingham and won the Warhammer 40k British school league. I am an international champion at something age 14. Result! Now using that information you people who read my story can find my school and a picture of me on the games workshop web-site on the school league review. I am the camera shy retard who won the 40k. I look so stupid. They had to pick the photo where I am looking at the ground out of the 3 that they took. I also had a massive English test to prepare for. Well I need to stop ranting and answer some questions.

Hollow Mashiro: the reason that Murtagh didn't use magic was that, you should never use magic on someone who's mind you haven't broken into yet.

Sally the Sunflower: tell that to my English teacher and I have no idea as to which of the many stories that have no storyline in my head. It will probably be someone going on a rampage. Either Eragon or a random space marine ruining a form of flawed civilisation e.g. hunger games or if I use the space marine Alagaesia. That or something to do with music changing a fiction world. Avatar with iron maiden. Hmmmmmmm, I wonder.

Eragon looked at the man who had just fallen asleep in front of him. Obi-wan had just fought a dragon and now had fallen asleep in the stifling that had descended on the night. How anyone could do that Eragon had no idea.

Then again maybe this is cold for him Eragon mused. Saphira… typical. Saphira had also fallen asleep, the heat having no effect on her. "Why am I always the last awake?" he asked a nearby tree. The wind blew making the tree seem like it shrugged its branches. Eragon groaned and lay down next to Saphira. He closed his eyes and sent his mind to Saphira's, using her mind to calm his. It was a trick he had learnt while travelling in the desert, where it was extremely uncomfortable. Brom had always wondered how he got enough sleep during the cold nights. He lay back, closed his eyes and waited for unconsciousness to take him. It was twenty minutes before his mind drifted off into dreams.

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Eragon awoke to a blue wing over his head. He didn't want to wake her so he gently lifted her wing up and slid out from under it. He got up and blinked in the harsh sunlight. Groaning, he looked to where the jedi had been sleeping, to find him gone.

"Where's he got to now," Eragon muttered to the trees in the hope that they would answer him again. They didn't. He sighed and spread out his mind to find the lack of anything. He found it a few hundred meters away. As he walked to him he started thinking about breakfast. I could either hunt something here, or just wait until we get back to the Varden. I'll ask Saphira and Obi-wan, I don't each way. He walked into a clearing to see Obi-wan sitting on the floor with objects floating around him.

He seemed to be meditating so Eragon didn't interrupt him, as he knew how annoying it was. The number of times he had been meditating in his tent when a random Varden member had run in to get him. He had been sitting next to the meditating jedi for 10 minutes when Obi-wan opened his eyes and all of the floating things fell to the floor. Obi-wan stood up and offered his hand to Eragon and helped him up.

"So, how are you today?" Obi-wan asked Eragon.

"Fine, fine," he replied, "how are you? It's your first morning on a new planet."

"I have had better but nothing to really complain about?" Obi-wan said looking in the direction of Saphira. "So what do we have planned for today? Are we travelling to the Varden."

" Yeah, that's what I was planning on doing. You need to meet all of the people in charge of the war against Galbatorix and they need to meet you." Eragon replied. "By the way, why were all the things floating while you were meditating? Was it a training technique?"

"Yes, it was. Meditating calms my mind and helps me to concentrate on the force." Obi-wan answered. While they had been talking they had started to walk back to where Saphira was sleeping. When they got there Eragon stopped and turned to Ob-wan waving his arm to show him to step back.

"You might want to get out of her tail's range. She doesn't like to be woken." Obi-wan stepped back and Eragon walked up to her head. Gently he started to tap her snout, while quietly saying "Wake up Saphira. It's morning now. You have to wak arghhh!" Saphira's paw had cut Eragon off mid sentence. He was now on the floor with it on top of him. "up." He finished. "Saphira, I know that you are awake so get your paw off of me." Saphira didn't even acknowledge his request. "please." The paw moved off of Eragon and let him sit up. Obi-wan walked over and helped him to stand back up. Saphira opened her eyes and looked at the two of them.

Why did you wake me up? It's still early and I was up last night flying you here. I need to sleep. Saphira rolled over and closed her eyes again. "Saphira get up, we need to take Obi-wan to Nasuada. Wait... Saphira did we tell anyone that we were going? We didn't, did we. Crap. We now have a worried and confused resistance looking for us." Eragon turned away muttering under his breath. Obi-wan laughed and said.

"I'll get her up." Saphira's eyes shot open to find Obi-wan with his arms out in front of him and herself a metre in the air. After failing around for half a minute she looked at Eragon and sent him in a whining voice. Make him put me down. Eragon had been laughing at her attempt to get down but stopped when she asked him this.

Will you get up? He asked mockingly.

Alright, I'll get up. Just make him put me down.

"That's enough Obi-wan. Put her down." Eragon called to him. He turned to Eragon and asked.

"Is she going to wake up? " Eragon nodded at him and Obi-wan lowered her to ground. Eragon walked over to her and mounted. Then he saw all of the stuff that Obi-wan had laying around the campsite. "how are you going to get all of that on Saphira. Obi-wan raised an eyebrow at him and picked up the lighsaber next to him. A minute later and it was all attached to his belt and he was also mounted on Saphira. "That's a nice belt." Eragon commented.

"I know." Obi-wan replied. And with that Saphira took off. During the journey to the Varden they talked about things like, what were other planets like, and what the elves like. 20 minutes later and Saphira could see the tents in the distance. It was 5 minutes before Eragon could see them and another 3 before Obi-wan could. Obi-wan looked at the tents, each a different colour and with a different flag flying from the top. There people walking, running and training all around the camp-site making it look like a city without buildings. "so that's the Varden." Mused Obi-wan.

"Yeah, it is." Saphira got close and started to land. "here we go then." Said Eragon and they were surrounded by people.

Review and tell about the mistakes that I have made. Also tell me ideas for any crossover with Eragon or Warhammer in it. I need inspiration.

I made it longer and more happened in it. I hope that this version is better. Also if anyone can tell me how to do an actual line break that would be nice as I haven't figured that out yet.