Okay this is a little different. The number of min. above a section mean the amount of time after Mai was stabbed, so yea it will get suspenseful as you watch the amount of time go by.

Remember Mai only has 2 hours after she is stabbed before she dies

Enjoy the suspense!

Chapter 14

30 min:

the team arrived at the hospital and Mai had lost consciousness. She her breathing was already labored and she was throwing up blood. The doctor took blood test to determine the poison and find the antibiotic for it. The tests took 45 min

1 hour 15min:

The doctors identified the poison but the antibiotic wasn't strong enough. They had to make a stronger one which took half an hour. Naru got extremely mad and had to step out side when hearing this. He went out to scream and beat up a bush. Makoda followed him. She stood back and watched him as he let out his anger on the bush and the wall.

"You done." she said as she sat on a near by bench.

"...yes" Naru said sitting next to her

" You know Lin would be doing the same thing if he was in your situation."

"What do you mean."

"I'm pregnant too Naru. Lin asked me to marry him two weeks ago, after I found out. If it were me in there he would be going nuts like you are and Mai would be out her doing the same thing I am."

"I just have this feeling like she is gonna die, and it's my fault."

"it's not your fault, Mai chose to do this of her own free will. She didn't want you to die, she couldn't bear to lose some one else important to her... Naru if you want to cry it's okay you can cry if you want."

and for the first moment in his life Naru sincerely cried, in front of someone.

1 hour 45 min:

Mai went into surgery while on a antibiotic drip to kill the poison. Everyone was sitting together hoping she would make it. Naru could not sit. He stood staring down the hallway waiting for Mai to come back. Lin came up to his boss.

"Madoka said she told you about us." he said

"Yea she did. Congrats Lin. I'm sure you'll be happy together." Naru responded

"Naru, Mai will be fine, I'm sure she'll pull through."

"She pregnant Lin, it's not just her i'm worried about"

"they'll both make it. I talked to the doctor. He said the poison and the antibiotic won't effect the baby."

"What if they're wrong."

"I try not to think about it."

"very reassuring, thank."

Lin walked away after that and sat back down to wait.

1 hour 59 min:

Lin talked to the doctor as the rest waited. When he walked back over his face was emotionless.

"They were able to remove the poison from her system, and she's out of surgery. Her survival depends on her own strength now." He said

A huge sigh of relief came over the room. Naru walked to see her. When he reached the door he stopped. He had put her in danger, he couldn't face her after doing it again. When he turned to leave something stopped him. He heard Mai calling his name in her sleep. She need him now more then ever. If he left her now, she might disappear forever. He couldn't let that happen. He barely survived a month without her. Forever would be torture. He walked in the room and sat next to her. Pale and asleep, she lay there like a doll. She was paler then usual, and she seemed lifeless. He tried to imagine her like this when she got hurt on the last case. He just sat next to her till he fell asleep with his head on the bed next to him.

The next morning:

Naru woke up to someone shaking his shoulders. He lifted his head to find Mai awake and sitting up. Color had returned in her face, she stared at him emotionless.

"How long did you sit there for?" She said, her voice scratch like she had a sore throat.

"All night." He said to her not processing this situation yet due to grogginess of just waking up

"You shouldn't have stayed. I feel like I was hit by a truck, multiple times."

"you were stabbed and poisoned, it took practically all night to save you"

"No I remember that. But I feel like crap."

Naru finally seem to get what was happening and jumped up and hugged her, which made her wince in pain.

"Oh sorry." he said realizing he had hurt he when trying to hug her.

"Don't do that again." she said back

"Mai, I'm sorry about the last case. I didn't mean to hurt you. The thing is I felt guilty for sending you out when you were vulnerable to the ghost, please for give me. And please come back."

"naru, it's not that I don't want to it's just I... I don't want to be hurt again."

"Mai.."

"Please Naru. i don't even know what i'm doing. I have to help with stuff in town and hiroshi's funeral, and I don't know what i'm doing. Go back with the team tomorrow. I know they are tomorrow, Lin told me. He hoped I would come with, but I can't."

"Don't make me leave you behind."

"I'm sorry but you have to."

The next day the team left, without Mai. Madoka and Lin kept in contact with her. Then 3 month's later, Mai disappeared again.

Uh-oh where did Mai go, and hey Lin and Madoka are getting married. Nice right? But where did Mai go, when will she resurface this time.

I'm taking votes on what the baby's name should be and what kind of personality and if it's a boy or a girl

Here are the choices

A) Sakura- a fun loving and free spirited child like her mother

B) Hiroshi- named in memory of her friend who died, but is as narcissistic as his daddy

C)Gene- named in memory of his uncle who died, and is a perfect combination of narcissistic and fun loving

or

D)Twins named Hiroshi and Sakura- basically it combines options A and B so the reasoning and personality that go with the names are the same.

When the chapter comes I will tally the votes and which ever option has the most wins, I was gonna go with and narcissistic yet fun loving kid but I'm having trouble making a decision on names and personalities as the story progresses. So I leave it to you people, My fans, to help me decide. Just expess your opinion in the reviews