Thanks again for the review Fringal.

I probably won't be posting the next chapter anytime soon since school is starting

and my cat that I've had for 10 years passed away so I haven't really felt like writing.

Please review and tell me if I need to improve on anything


I am sick and tired of seeing dead bodies. I definitely don't need them flying at me. Jack asked if Kate and I were ok oblivious to the fact that Charlie almost got trampled over by a dead person.

"I'm fine by the way. Charlie's fine." He declared as Jack helped Kate and then me into the cockpit. I sat down by Kate as far away from the dead pilot as possible.

"So what does this transceiver look like." Asked Kate

"Like a complicated Walkie Talkie." I stayed down as both Jack and Kate started looking for the transceiver. Suddenly the pilot I thought was dead gasped and started coughing. Scared the hell out of all of us. Jack went over to the pilot.

"Hey can you hear me?" The pilot was breathing heavily and his face was all cut up. "I need that water." Kate handed him a bottle of oceanic water. Jack gave him some water but the pilot ended up spitting out most of it.

"How many survived?" Questioned the pilot.

"At least 48. Does anything feel broken?"

"No no. My head's a little dizzy that's all."

"It's probably a concussion." said Jack as he did his doctor thing like checking his eyes and stuff like that.

"How long has it been?" The pilot asked suddenly.

"Sixteen hours." The pilot looked dejected. Jack then told the pilot that nobody had found us yet.

"Six hours in our radio went out. No one could see us. We turned back to land in Fiji. By the time we hit turbulence we were a thousand miles off course. They're looking for us in the wrong place." No wonder it was taking so long for someone to find us. Everybody look a bit discouraged after that piece of information. "We have a transceiver."

"Good good that's what we were looking for." Jack tried to hold down the pilot as he tried to get up and get the transceiver. He pointed at it and Kate went and got it.

"Hey you guys. Where's Charlie?" I questioned only just now realizing I hadn't heard him in a while. The pilot was trying to get the transceiver to work as Kate went to go search for Charlie.

"It's not working." That's when we heard it. That thing was out there and it was close. I huddled closer into my little corner as Kate and Charlie quickly made their way back into the cockpit.

"It's right outside." whispered Kate as she huddled close to Jack.

"What what's right out-." the pilot was cut off when Jack shushed him. The noise outside continued. It sounded like it was growling and Just waiting for us to come out. Everybody got up and started looking out the windows. Except for me. There was no way in hell I was getting up.

"You guys maybe we shouldn't go near the windows." I protested. "You know since that thing is out there." but of course no one listened to me. In fact the pilot stuck his head outside on of the broken windows. "Dude I really wouldn't do that if I were you." He just kept going and then he was pulled out from the cockpit. I shut my eyes and covered my ears as I pressed myself into the little corner I was in. I couldn't bear to hear the pilot's screams. And then it was gone.

It was quiet for moment. I opened my eyes and regretted it the moment I saw blood all over the windows of the cockpit. Then it came back and it rocked the cockpit around. When it finally stopped I wasted no time in getting the hell out of there.

I was the first one out of there. I was surprised at how fast I was running. I could hear everyone else behind me but I just kept running. It was raining hard and it made the ground really muddy. I tried as best I could to not slip as I ran. I had absolutely no idea where I was going. I saw Kate run past me and into a banyan tree and I followed. I noticed that Jack and Charlie were nowhere to be seen.

"Kate where's Jack and Charlie."

"I don't know." She was hysterical. I couldn't blame her but right now really wasn't the time. We had to be calm . "Jack!"

"KATE! Shut up! You need to calm down. Ok?" surprisingly it worked. She calmed down a bit. Then she started counting. Why? I have no clue. Charlie popped out of nowhere and Kate tackled/fell on him. She started questioning him about Jack whereabouts and he repeatedly told her that he didn't know where Jack was. The rain stopped suddenly. The weather on this island was really starting to get on my last nerve.

"We have to go back for him."

"Go back? There? Kate there's a certain gargantuan quality about this thing."

"Then don't come." She got up and started walking towards the direction we had come from.

"She must have a death wish." I said as I helped Charlie up.

"Probably. But we can't let her go off by herself. Kate." Charlie ran after her and I of course followed. I didn't know how to get back to the beach so I had no choice.

We walked around for a while. Then Kate stopped and picked something up of the ground. It was the pilot's pin. Then she looked up. Charlie and I looked up as well and saw that there was a body up in the tree above us.

"It's the pilot." Jack said from behind us. Kate looked relieved as she walked up to him. It looked like she wanted to hug him. Maybe she likes him.

"Did you see it?" she asked.

"No it was right behind me but I dove into the bushes."

"Guys." Charlie interrupted. "How does something like that happen?" he questioned as he pointed up towards the pilot's lifeless and mangled body.