Well here's the 3rd chapter and I only got one review but I kind of expected that.
"normal speech"
"Thoughts"
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After there discussion over Xana's new strategy, the gang sat around there usual bench and continued talking about Xana's last attack and the cloaked tower.
"Hey guys" the others look over at odd "there he is" he says pointing towards a figure just under one of the trees. The figure jumped up grabbing one of the low hanging branches a pulled him self up into the tree.
"So that's him huh, he does look taller than me doesn't he" Yumi looked to the others who nodded in agreement.
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(…… P.O.V)
"well here I am again now lets see, that group of people are still there and so are those two, but my main targets are the ones who ran off into the forest, lets see" he looks at his watch, the headmasters daughter should be coming over in 3.2.1...... bingo there she is, I don't get it everything's the same, which means that that monster thing should will be right there in . . . . . . now. He looks out towards the corner were the 'creature' had come out, but to add to his confusion it didn't appear. "What the hell where is it?" He looks around again to make sure he didn't miss it, but there was nothing. Dam, huh maybe. . .
ah forget it. He leans back against a branch, pulls out a black ipod and a set of earphones, "at least I have my music, maybe today won't be so bad"
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Military base 40 miles outside France
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"Ok men listen up, today we will have a live fire exam to see how far you've advanced n your training." The captain was pleased for today he had six teams of highly trained tank crews almost ready to shipped out and today was one of there last tests, the live fire exam.
"Ok team one lets see what you got, mount up.
a group of soldiers compiled and headed for the tank to begin there final test. Aboard the tank, the electronics flashed and died out, before restarting and acting normal. The Tank rolled off toward the first position only to veer off wildly toward a chain link fence beyond the fence lay the many highway
"Driver just what in the hell are you doing" the captain was furious, but the soldiers confusion was more to ask
"sir there something wrong electronics, I can't get her under control, dam it, come on work you son of a …"(BUZZZZ) an electric bolt lashed out at the soldier and he was knocked out.
"Dam It, Everyone out of the tank NOW!!!"
the other members of the crew hulled ass and got out but before leaving retrieved there buddy from the drivers seat. As the captain exited, a black smog enveloped the man dragging back in. (CRASH) the tank blasted through the fence and turned down the highway
"Shit, the chief will never believe this" the other agreed.
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Kadic four hours later
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Nearing the end of there shorted day the gang find them selves in Ms. Huzt(sp?) class, but no one seemed to notices the soft sound of thunder rumbling in the distance, unfortunately it was worse than a little storm.
"FIRE" the sound of a cannon ripped through the air sending a shell slamming into the dorms. Thankfully no one was there. A second shell landed just feet from the science building, as students filed away from damaged parts of the school and down to the boiler room. Out in the forest a shade covered figure lay at the base of tree resting when an explosion rocked him, cracking an eye open he could faintly see parts of the school flying up into the sky just beyond the tree line. Lowering the earphones from his ears he reached up and grabbed a branch and quickly traversed the many gaps between trees as he moved closer toward the sound of what he though was thunder. As he neared the school he begin to get a sense of urgency, landing in one final tree before the path he looked in awe at the massive machine in front of him.
"Well this can't be good, what do you guys think?" he asked to no one in particular.
"Uhhh huh huh huh you're a dumb ass Uhh huh huh " a voice said before a second started
"heh heh yea, you're a nad heh heh" a notable slapping noise reverberated through his head followed by a yell of pain quickly followed by another laugh.
"don't forget you idiots if I go so do you" he says to the voices
"oh heh heh yea, sorry bot that heh heh" the second voice answered.
One of these days you two bakas (idiots) are gonna get me killed" With that he jumped down to the ground and advanced toward the tank. On the other side of the situation Yumi was running right across the line of sight drawing the attention of the sixty ton beast while the others ran for the sewer entrance. The gun tracked along before unleashing another shell, this time directed at Yumi.
"LOOK OUT" a voice shouted, Yumi barely had time to jump before the shell exploded sending fire and shrapnel everywhere.
"HEY TIN MAN" the turret swung round to aim at the voice but before it could get all the way round a student jumped onto the metallic beast. He traversed the metal structure like it was flat land to him, before jumping into the top hatch, but faster than you could say 'ouch' he was sent flying out by a blast of lightning. Landing with a bone crunching sound he lay motionless.
"ok. . . that hurt. . .i'm done I'll just lay here and hope he thinks I'm dead"
But even as he planed the leviathan of steel was not finished with him. The tank reversed getting in a better position before lowering the barrel and. . . .
"FIRE" (BOOM) the shell exploded where he laid, the student and along with part of the ground was gone. Satisfied with its destruction the tank turned 180 degrees and rumbled off.
Stowed away in a bush near the forest Yumi waited until she though it was safe, but it wouldn't matter due to the fact there was metal shrapnel in both of her legs and her left arm, she wasn't going anywhere. Her 'friend' wasn't doing much better, next to her a camo clad student laid, pain written all across his face. Somehow right before the blast the student had flung himself towards the forest, close enough for her to pull him in.
He cracked an eye and locked with hers, for but a second before he tried pushing himself upright. She was amazed that he was still breathing after the electric blast and then a ten foot fall let alone getting back up. But something caught her eye, a shimmer of metal in his arm, it looked like it was wedged in deep.
"So what's your story?" his voice was calm but defiantly retiled in pain.
"I was trying to get away from the school" she lied, she knew that she needed to keep the factory a secret.
"You can drop the act you know. . ." Her heart skipped a beat. "I've known people like you before, one, your hiding something and two, if your gonna run a diversion never run right in front of the target or this will happen again" he points to the metal in her legs, he reaches into one of his lower pockets, pulling out a small white box.
"Here use this to get some off that metal out of you" he hands her the box, she opened it revealing a stash of supplies, ranging from tweezers, cotton swabs, and bandages to chocolates and a bottle of vodka specifically labeled 'use on wounds only' she looked back at the kid, but as if he was reading her mind he said
"My mother was a highly trained nurse, she told me to always keep that box on me just in case", he closed his eyes and turned his head away,
"That was a long time ago, and I've restocked it ever since" Yumi looked a back at the box and then towards the factory, she could she the return coming, she looked back to the other student, "Thanks" she said, the student turned his head back and smiled
"good luck to you and friends your going to need it" he said then the return hit.
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So. . . now Yumi has meet this helpful new force but just like odd she doesn't know if she can trust him and how will this effect the future of Lyoko? All this and not much more will be reviled in the next chapter of the Untold Story
If I get at least one review I'll update this