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Chapter 5: Mesmerizing Stranger:

"Bella look whose here!" I hear Alice's voice come from behind me.

I turned in my chair and saw her leading a tall blond boy towards me. Not needing any confirmation I instantly knew that the boy was Jasper.

I smiled and stood up: "Hey Jasper how have you been?" I asked.

"Who is this Jasper you speak of?" he joked.

"Ha. Ha." I said

He laughed, answering my question; "Good Bella, and you?"

"After all the shopping and terrifying rounds of beautify Bella I guess I'm ok."

Alice hit me on the arm…hard. "Ouch!" I grumbled. She simply threw her head back and laughed. Pulling Jasper by the I had found a seat to sit on while I waited. Now I was seated in that very seat, hand she squealed; "Come on Jazz, let's go Dance!" And with that they were off.

I sighed and sat back down. After Alice had run off earlier I had found myself a place to sit whilst I waited for her to come back.

At this moment, a young boy walked through the entrance. He wore a simple black suit with a baby blue button down shirt underneath his jacket. His mask was a dark navy blue with a simple black pattern on it.

His skin was pale and his hair was golden, even underneath his mask I could tell that he was quite the charmer. His gaze scanned the room, until his eyes came to rest on me. I noticed that his eyes were like pools of gold and blood mixed together.

Besides his eye color, he reminded me perfectly of Alice's brother, Edward...But it couldn't be him, he was missing. I shook my head, trying to shake the thought out of my mind.

The young male began walking towards me.

When he reached me, he smiled mischievously and bowed.

"May I have this dance?" well that was unexpected I thought.

I looked behind me to check that he wasn't talking to anyone else; "me?" I questioned.

He nodded, smiling; "Yes."

I silently stood and took his outstretched hand as he led me to the dance floor.

Slowly we turned to faced each other. He placed his hands lightly on my waist and I put my arms firmly around his neck. Oh dear god, please help me get through without embarrassing myself. I contemplated

As the song started we began swaying slightly to the beat. The song was beautiful and yet had an eerie edge to it, like it belonged in a mystery movie.

What I couldn't understand is that of all the beautiful girls in the room, this perfect stranger seemed to come and ask ME to dance. it seemed that possibly just for a night, the tables had turned and my luck changed for the better.

I looked up and gazed into his eyes smiling lazily, was I in a dream? This couldn't be real. he returned my smile with a crooked one of his own. His smile made my heart melt, and I blushed furiously. I hadn't even been with this man for ten minutes and I was already mesmerized by him.

I hastily looked him up and down and found him too unbelievably handsome to be true!! (even if he was wearing a mask) seriously- How could he have wanted to dance with me???

Throughout the whole song our body gradually began to get closer and closer, until his arms were rapped tightly around me and our foreheads were almost touching. I could feel his cool breath caressing my face, and it made me feel dizzy.

Suddenly he stopped and gently took my hand.

"Would you like to go for a walk?" his voice was like velvet.

not trusting myself to answer coherently, I merely nodded

he led me outside and I shivered in the cool night air. Obvious to my shiver he took his jacket off and draped it lightly over my shoulder.

Somehow I managed to get out a quiet; "Thank you."

He simply nodded and wrapped his arm around my waist, leading me forward.

"what's your name?" he asked.

"huh?"

"What. Is. Your. Name?" he dumbed It out or me.

"oh- uh Bella. My names B-Bella." I began to stutter as he started intensely into my eyes.

"you're very pretty Bella, do you know that?"

"huh! Th-th- thank you?"

EDWARD'S POV:

She was the most beautiful, amazing creature I had ever seen. I thought this when I first saw her at my home, and I still think this now.

After dancing with her I led her outside for a stroll. Using all the strength I had I wrapped my arm around her waist and began to walk along the path.

Soon, I turned to face her and stared attentively into her eyes.

"what's your name?" I asked. Of course I already knew her name, but I couldn't let her know this.

"huh?" she seemed startled by my question.

"what. Is. You're. Name?" I repeated my question, only slower.

"oh- uh Bella. My names B-B-Bella." She answered, flustered.

"you're very pretty Bella, do you know that?"

"huh! Th-Thank you?"

I nodded and brushed her hair off her face with the back of my hand, then cradled her chin and tilted her head up so she could look at me. her big brown eyes gazed at me. Holding an unspoken question, they reflected the moon light.

"you're not as ordinary as you think, Bella." I whispered.

She jumped slightly shocked by my words. Even though I could not read her mind, I knew what she was thinking...all I could say is that she WAS worth it, and I couldn't hurt... I WOULDN'T HURT HER!

But the question was could I resist against the vampires power?

BELLA'S POV:

Had he really said that? He couldn't have. I wasn't worth anything. I was just ordinary…wasn't i?

I looked up at the male. He seemed to be fighting an internal battle with himself. Suddenly his gaze shot down to look at me…his eyes were coal black.

I swear a heard a growl rip through his chest, but I must have been imagining things.

He began walking towards me and with every step he took I took one back, away from him.

My back hit concrete and I realized I had backed into a wall…I was cornered.

What was happening? A minute ago he was fine, and now he wanted to kill me…'

"What do you want?!" I screamed. By breath was coming in short, painful gasps.

He simply growled and continued advancing towards me. I had no where to go.

Out of the blue he stopped dead in his tracks and fell to the ground clutching his head, panting.

"Go..." he whispered.

"What?"

"Go!" he roared. He looked up at me, and I realized that his eyes had turned back to the crimson/ gold color they had been earlier.

I began to walk away, when I heard his voice from behind me; "Bella, I'm sorry." He whispered. He sounded like he was in pain. I wanted to turn around and rush to his side, to help him but I knew I couldn't.

At this exact moment several things happened at once; a roar ripped from the boys chest as he turned to face me, eyes as black as night.

Alice came rushing out of the building shouting; "Bella!"

Then a big dark form crashed into the male with a sound like stone on stone.

And the fight began…

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