It's Going to Be a Long Night

by Tsuki Dream

Summary: The Akatsuki gang are on the city us at night, like they are every night, and everyone always gets off at the next bus stop as fast as possible, just like they do every night… Except what happens when the new girl in town doesn’t get off?

8. IMPORTANT UPDATE! PLEASE READ!

HEY GANG!

Sorry I know you were all expecting a new chapter but you won't mind when I tell you this…. (I hope…)

So I have been thinking… the other day I re-read this story and realized how truly plot less it seemed when I had written it. I also didn't very clearly describe Sakura's new technique, its limits and weaknesses or strengths, and I had briefly described some weaknesses which I later then didn't follow up with at all, making Sakura into an unrealistic character. So I am in the process of re-writing it AND IT IS EVEN BETTER! I am in the process of updating this story and also to make the chapters better! It is WAY better in my opinion. I also felt the need to re-do it as I could not think of a way to get to where I wanted to with this story with how I left it! I will need to re-post the chapters (I will just type them all up and post it all in one go so that it is less confusing for readers ) in order for it to all make sense! I am sticking to the main parts of the story that you all liked. I am just going to go more in depth and detailed and realistic and not plot jumping like I was doing….basically better writing all together…

I am NOT changing the first chapter…That was meant to be a one shot and I am not going to be changing it because I even still laugh at that chapter… it was good, but I don't think there will be any more buses or anything in the story... maybe a TV or something… but other than that I will stick to the main universe of the Naruto world! So I already have the first two chapters re-written and I will hopefully get them all re-written and re-posted along with the NEWEST CHAPTER by the end of the week! Please read the newly posted chapters and let me know if they are better than the originals (When they get put up!) I have nothing to do all weekend and this is my goal! I may even just try and post as many new chapters as I can to compensate for my lack of response to all of your requests for me to update!

Message me with any questions, comments, or concerns…and if I have frustrated you, please try to be calm and civil and I will send you a private message of apology. Thanks!

NEW CHAPTERS COMING TO YOU VERY SOON!

LOVE YOU ALL!

THANK YOU FOR STICKING WITH ME!

~ Tsuki Dream!