I can't believe I only got 2 reviews! I guess I'm just losing my touch. Anyway, to the people that actually reviewed...
Yemi Hikari- I've seen plenty of fanfics that use exact lyrics to songs, so I'm not all that worried to be honest. Thanks for the kind words.
xiaolinwind- Glad you liked it. Enjoy!
The song in this chapter will be 'The Way You Make Me Feel' by Michael Jackson.
Kimiko's POV
I glared at him. Did I mention that I really hate this guy? Well I do.
"For your information, I got 1st place for the past seven years," I said, trying to stay calm.
He scoffed. "But you always tie with me," he pointed out.
I shot him a look of pure venom.
"Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go try-out." He pulled out a C.D. from his pocket, and walked away.
I wanted to go back outside to enjoy the rest of lunch, but I really wanted to know if I could close up the show this year.
'Oh well,' I thought. I took a seat in the far back of the theater, and stared at the stage. Raimundo saw me back there, and smirked. I frowned. I was determined not to make him think that even I had liked his singing.
"The song I'm about to sing, is The Way You Make Me Feel." He looked at me in the back, and smirked again. "This one goes to someone that's here, because she knows I'm an awesome singer." Knowing he meant me, I rolled my eyes.
Judy rolled her eyes too. But I knew she didn't mean it, she liked to hear him sing. She started the music.
"Hey pretty baby with the high heels on.
You give me fever like I've never, ever known.
You're just a product of loveliness.
I like the groove of your walk, your talk, your dress.
I feel your fever from miles around.
I'll pick you up in my car.
And we'll paint the town.
Just kiss me baby and tell me twice.
That you're the one for me.
The way you make me feel.
You really turn me on.
You knock me off my feet.
My lonely days are gone.
I like this feelin' you're givin' me.
Just hold me baby and I'm in ecstasy.
Oh, I'll be workin' from nine 'till five.
To buy you things to keep you by my side.
I never felt so in love before.
Just promise baby, you'll love me forever more.
I swear I'm keepin' you satisfied.
'Cause you're the one for me.
The way you make me feel.
You really turn me on.
You knock me off my feet now, Baby!
My lonely days are gone.
A-acha-acha.
Acha-ooh!
Go on girl!
Go on!
Aaow!
Go on girl!
I never felt so in love before.
Promise baby you'll love me forever more.
I swear I'm keepin' you satisfied.
'Cause you're the one for me.
The way you make me feel.
You really turn me on.
You knock me off my feet now, Baby!
My lonely days are gone.
Ain't nobody's buisness.
Ain't nobody's buisness.
Ain't nobody's buisness.
Ain't nobody's buisness but mine and my baby.
Hee, hee!
Hee, hee!
Ooh!
Give to to me.
Give me some time.
Come on be my girl.
I wanna blow your mind.
Ain't nobody's buisness.
Ain't nobody's buisness but mine and my baby's.
Go on girl!
Aaow!
Hee' hee!
Ooh!
Chika-chika!
Chika-chika-chika!
Go on girl!
Hee, hee!
Hee, hee, hee!
Give it to me.
Give me some time.
Come on be my girl.
I wanna blow your mind.
Ain't nobody's buisness.
Ain't nobody's buisness but mine and my baby's.
Go on girl!
Aaow!
You really turn me on.
You knock me off my feet now, Baby.
Hee!
My lonely days are gone.
A-acha-acha!
Acha-ooh!"
The song ended, and Ms. Shanning applauded. Man, is that woman loud.
"Bravo!"
He took a bow, and looked at me cockily, as if he were waiting for my reaction. I started to pretend I was throwing up.
Ms. Shanning called him over, telling him he made it in, but there was more.
I rushed to where they were, he can't get to close up the show, he just can't!
"So who's gonna close up the show this year?" he asked before I even got there.
"Well," she said, "I have a few more try-outs scheduled. I need to see them before I can be sure."
"Like who?" I wasn't one to kiss-up, but I really wanted to close up the show this year.
She looked down at the clipboard she was holding, then said, "Well, my assistant over there, Judy, wants to try-out this year. Then there's Mr. Jake Long, who will be showing up momentarily. Ryan Conway will be coming as well. Robin Bird from the band that plays at the dances will also be showing up. Then, there's Mr. Jack Spicer.
That one took us both by surprise.
"Spicer wants to try-out?" we said in unison.
"Yes," she said miserably. "But I hope he has something other than singing."
I shrugged my shoulders, and left. While I was walking back, I thought about the information I was just given. Judy probably wants to show off some of her choreography, and maybe sing. Or maybe playing keyboard and singing.
Jake Long. He was one of Raimundo's jerk friends. Judy hated him more than anything on the planet, which was really saying something, she hated practically everything! I wonder how she would react if they had to share the stage. I don't know what Jake is even talented at anyway. I know that he is an awesome drummer. But I doubt thats all he's going to do.
Ryan Conway, another one of Raimundo's jerk friends. I don't know much about him. I do know that he's the goth in their group. He can play bass, but he never bothers to be part of anything. He looks a bit like Raimundo, but shorter, with brown eyes, and only wears orange and black. Almost completely the opposite of one of my best friends, Robin.
It was true that Robin was also a goth, and that she was told that she and Ryan would make a cute couple. But she had absolutely nothing to do with him. She wore purple and black, with extremely short black hair blown off to the side. Sort of like Rihanna's, except that Robin's was streaked with purple. One thing she absolutely hated, was being called 'doll,' she practically explodes when someone does. She is in a popular band called 'The Black Dragons.' She played guitar, DJed a little bit, the lead singer, and she wrote the songs. Since she, nor any other members of the band took part in the dances, they were in charge of entertainment.
Jack Spicer. Now that was a surprise. Spicer was the geek here. He didn't have any talent except annoying people, and science. But that was pretty much it. Out of classes, he hit on the girls, and failing hopelessly.
If all of them pass try-outs, then this is going to be the craziest talent show we're probably ever going to see.
Wierd, eh? Anyway, in the song, if you listened to it, you would notice I didn't put the back-up singers in. It's because he's all by himself up there! Did I describe the characters well enough? And yes to those that guessed it, Jake Long is from 'American Dragon.' He's a bit ooc, but I couldn't think of anyone else. I already have what the characters are going to sing for the try-outs, but beyond that, if anyone would like to suggest a small plot, and a song to go with it, review. It might end up in here! Thats enough for now. Ciao for now!
-xFireChickx out