Here's chapter 2 sorry it's a bit short. But I got a review (even if it was the person i wrote it with!)
Also going on in a place far, far away (well not that far but hey, when your writing you can put what you like!).
Harry spotted the castle that he had been looking for, for the past 8 hours. A high horse with no reigns came out of nowhere. Trotting with an iambic pentameter beat, with no rhythm.
"Aha," Screamed Harry excitedly " I see the castle!"
"Whoopee doodah!" Hermione muttered sarcastically.
"At long last" Ron murmured.
Even Ron had got bored with tele tubbies. Though Harry was definitely um, unusual. In more ways than one. Unique was one way of putting it. Completely off the planet was another, but hey he was the chosen one so who cared!
Soon Harry, Ron and Hermione had walked down the rest of the hill, Hermione and Ron finally saw the castle that Harry had been on about.
The castle stood proudly against the sky, Harry thought that this was strange, since when did castle's become proud? Oh well who cared, there was fun to be had.
Back at Hogwarts
Ginny was skipping along, after escaping from Snape, when she saw George her brother. She saw he had a jam in his hand. "Want some?" George asked with a manic glint in his eye.
"What flavour is it?" Ginny asked, ever suspicious of her brother.
"This jam is from the man who fell from 50 thousand feet without a parachute. Quality jam this stuff, half a spoon full is 50 pounds, but as you're my sister I'll give you it for 500 pounds, bargain huh." George grinned.
Ginny just ran shouting behind her, "Have you seen Fred?"
"Yeah in the Great Hall"
Ginny was running so fast, she barely saw the Klutzy penguin waddling along. However she did see the llama, hear might be a better way to put it, as the llama was singing, Songs of praise. To a cheering audience. She ran into the great hall, and promptly threw herself onto the floor and began crawling along.
There it is for you it is really short but it means i will update sooner! (in theory)