I finally finished editing chapter five. I tried to add more detail. More detail will be incorporated in future chapters. I will try to incorporate all of your suggestions to make my writing better.

I really appreciate the comments.

Special thanks to IcecreamSyndrome and Embersky! You were very helpful!

Also, thanks to pokémon platinum game lovers for first comment!

Chapter 5

Two Paths Cross

"I think we did pretty well for our first time. Four losses and one win against some kid with a pathetic level one piplup."

"No, that was horrible! I was defeated by a buisel! A water-type! We are going to have to train."

"We nweed twaining. Me no wikey bweing bweaten bwadly."

"Everyone hide!"

They all hid behind a tree.

"Wuts wong Euphoria?"

"Look there. See that boy with the black hair, and blue eyes? He a friend of mine from when we were little! He moved a little before my parents died."

"Well go talk to him!"

"Okay." Euphoria awkwardly stepped from behind the tree, her cheeks showing the slightest hint of red, and walked to the boy. Before she could say something he recognized her.

"It is really you! Euph! Long time no see! You look way different from when we were kids."

"It's nice to see you too, Felix"

"Come, let's sit down on that bench."

They sat down and Felix said, "I want to be a great and respected pokémon breeder, so I started my journey. I had hoped I'd meet you."

Felix owned a cute pichu, whom he had not nicknamed; he let out to play with Shayshay and Eve. Euphoria and Felix started in some friendly chit-chat, about recent happenings and about each other.

"Ow!"

"Oops! I'm so sorry that I stepped on you foot Euph!"

Euphoria's illusion wore off.

"What the heck? You're a zoroa!"

"It's a long story. I'll tell you."

Euphoria jumped back on the bench, and curled up in Felix's lap. "I'm hungry…"

"It's getting late. Shayshay, Eve, and Pichu should be hungry too. Wait, will you take pokémon food or what?"

Felix called the other pokémon from where they were playing with smiles on their faces. He reached over in to his bag, careful not to disturb Euphoria from his lap, and pulled some pokémon food out. He set three cans of pokémon food on the ground, and put one in front of Euphoria.

"What about you Felix?"

"I'm not hungry. Tell me your story. I am intrigued."

Euphoria began telling him everything that had happened.

"…and then we saw you, and that's what happened." Euphoria let out a yawn. "I'm tired."

Felix was stoking Euphoria's back.

"Your fur is so soft, Euph."

"Yup," Euphoria said tiredly.

Euphoria fell asleep.

Authors Notes:

Sorry this ending did not have as much suspense as the last few. I didn't want the chapter to be too long.

All comments and feedback are greatly appreciated!

If you are wondering they are not falling in love. I really can't write about love, especially from a girl's perspective, because I am a guy.

I didn't notice deleted all the asterisks (the star things) in my document, so the sections of the chapter no longer are separated. I just noticed that and I am looking for a solution.

Also the website removed the dashes, so authors note sections weren't separated from the story. I went back and fixed it.