Read me! (Don't read the one for 'Random Reader', or you will NOT want to read the rest of the story! (Spoilers)
Shiro-Chan: Don't let life get you down. Or let it get you down, your choice. It's a rule in my family that if you want to kill yourself, go ahead, but only if you can pay for your own funeral. Think of the people that would miss you. If you can't, then I will miss you, and mourn for you. But, like everything else, I will forget you in time.
So try to live untill you find someone to remember you for forever.
Keep holding on. I'm glad that I'm part of the reason for your life, though.
Modeus-Kun: Thank you. I am glad your so happy about my stroy.
Kitty-San: Ha ha. I don't know WHAT i'm going to do next. I might or might not split them.
DPShadow-Chan: That's not rude. I'm glad you commented.
Lovha-Chan: Bonjour! Cava? Merci boucoup! Je t'aime ton review! (I am very sorry that my french is so poor. I have been studting or two years and I'm still better a jappaneese.) I am glad that you are learning English from my story!
Quote time!
'I've seen a rich man beg
I've seen a good man sin
I've seen a tough man cry
I've seen a loser win
And a sad man grin
I heard an honest man lie
I've seen the good side of bad
And the down side of up
And everything between
I licked the silver spoon
Drank from the golden cup
Smoked the finest green
I stroked the daddy's dimes at least a couple of times
Before I broke their heart
You know where it ends
Yo, it usually depends on where you start'
Song: What it's like
Artist: Everlast
DO NOT READ UNLESS YOU ARE RANDOM READER!!!
Random Reader-Dono: (Picks barbs out of ass while crying softly) *SOBS* (Bows in respect)
I know what you mean about the threats. Somone else (Who will remain nameless *cough* Jeshica *cough* ) pointed it out to me. And I want to appologize to everyone, it was not right to try to force people to review, if they don't review, that means my story sucks. I hope everyone forgives me for being an ass. (When I tell them later.)
A am honored that you are sharing your experience with me. Since I have only done anonymous work before, I don't really have self control on the 'review' thing. I am glad I have someone like you here to beat me with words.
SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS (In case someone thought they would read this anyways.)
Random Reader, I really wish there were a way that I could talk to you without having EVERYONE see it. ;{
I thought that Luna was becomming a Mary Sue, but I didn't know how to stop myself from writing her as 'perfect', I also noticed that her team is beccomming it's own entity.
Therein, I plan to kill her later, or to tarnish her in some way. I actually think that I'm going to kill her and Apolomi off and have their team spilt, creating a war that will drag everyone in, killing some, scarring others.
(Or something like that. What do you think? )
I have no plan to set up Akito and Ikki. I hate that pair. I have no real plan of splitting them up. And even if I did, I would make it so that one of them (or both) would be unable to stand it, and have to be put back together. (Sorry if it's a chiche ;'{ )
About that whole 'Ikki was always gay' thing; Yes he said that, but at that point in time, he thought that it was wrong to like boys. He was trying to make himself believe that his feelings for Kazu were just friendship feelings, not actual boy X boy feelings. If he had sex with Agito, he would know that he liked boys, and would be unable to keep himself from telling Kazu his feelings, thus ruining (or so he thought) their friendship. Or somthing like that. I plan on going into that subject later. (You just come up with questions before I can thnk up logical answers. ;{ )
Sorry that was a long reply. (-_-)
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Tension was high as everyone waited for Akito to reply, some wondering if he would choose to split, some still too confused to think.
Kazu waited, hopeing and praying that, whatever they did, it would hurt either of them.
Akito's eye watered, unshed tears making it shine brighter than normal.
Kazu, just about to get up an confort him, was shocked senseless as Akito let a burts of laughter, almost a bray.
Almost everyone looked like they were about to die of shock, How the hell could ha be laughing at this situation?!
Only Luna was unaffected by his laughter, her face still a mask of pleasent-ness. Cool and lovely.
Kazu couldn't believe the day he was having. It was just too wierd. Fuck that; his whole fucking WEEK was being too fucking wierd for his tastes.
Akito let his laughter pass and looked at Kazu, his face sobering some, his eye slightly sad.
'Kazu,',he asked, voice not his usual chipperness,'do you want up to split up? I know that you must find it. . . ODD to have to worry if I can feel what you do to my Brothers body. Do you want to be alone with him?'
Kazu didn't even have to pause, his answer was already in his mind; 'Whatever Agito and you decide, I will still love Agito. Even if you two stay as one, that won't change the way I feel, or what I plan to do with that body. I hope you don't mind us. . . doing stuff, but whatevers whatever.'
Akito and Luna both gave Kazu dazzeling smiles, warmth in their eyes.
Ikki just bit his lip and looked the other way, the love that Kazu and his rival held for each other hurting him inside.
Akito kissed Kazu on the cheek and switched over, letting Agito back in control.
Agito looked at Kazu, his face uncertain, a slight blush on his cheeks.
Agito bent down and kissed Kazu on the lips, grateful that his love accepted him as he was, not as he could be.
Kazu smiled one of those smiles, you know what I mean, those smiles that some people do whe their in love, all out, hiding nothing. Open to the person they love. It was beautiful, and it made Agito's heart flutter.
Their lovey-dovey moment was broken when the door opened, Broken and a girl stood at the entrance, hesitant to enter the room, eyes fliching, heads bowing slightly.
Everyone tensed, even those on Luna's side of the table, waiting for something to happen.
As Broken and the girl started walking into the room, Kazu noticed something that shocked him; Broken wasn't hurt anymore. All of his wounds had closed and only a few bruised remained. Merely a faint reminder of what he had looked like not even an hour ago.
The girl was small, her vace pixie-ish, his black eyes and hair made a lovely contrast to her white face.
Even though she was lovely, there was a feral quality to her, as though she would pounch on anything.
They both kneeled down in the center of the floor, pressing their heads to the floor in the untimate display of submission, something Kazu couldn't believe that proud Broken to be able to do.
The girl was the one who spoke, her thick draw giving away the fact that she was the only who had threatened Agito and Kazu the other night,;
'We' come 'afore th' Goddess o' th' moon askin' fer forgiveness fer Broken. We plea'd wit' ya' ta let 'im free fro'm th' binds ya put on 'im. We also ask tha' ya' give yur mer'cy an let 'im stay witin th' group. Both 'is bru'ther an' I'am willin' ta speak on 'is behalf.', she said, her voice quavering.
Luna stood and walked to them, her face as hard as stone and about as forgiving.
She stopped in front of them and they both shrunk back, fear comming off of them in waves.
When Luna spoke, her voice came out like ice, cold and sharp,' You dare come before me and claim repentance? Alyssa, you are in no pososition to be asking for leanyance for someone else, you too are on the chopping block for the stunt with Kogarasmaru. You almost caused a blood bath this day. What makes you think you could beg for forgiveness for someone else when I have none for you?'
Alyssa flinched, bowing lower, her body almost lying on the floor, a small whimper escaping her lips.
Broken started to shake, small sounds escaping his lips as well.
Luna looked at him and her gaze softened a little. She kneeled and put her hand on his head, at wich ha cringed and whimpered.
Kazu was almost feeling nad for him, he seemed so, so BROKEN. Like a abused animal, not the defiant beast he was earlier.
Luna put a finger under his chin. lifting his face untill he could look her in the eys.
Kazu, Agito, and Ikki all gasped, noticing that it WASN'T Broken on the floor. True, he did look like the boy, but he was different. His face was softer, his bone structure slighter, more feminine. His eyes were green, unlike Brokens Black ones. His hair fell into his face more that Brokens did, his lips seemed fuller.
Kazu couldn't help but think him beautiful. He looked like a doll. His skin like porcelin.
The boy on the floor met Luna's gaze, almost flinching out of her grip.
Tears came to his eyes as he stared at her.
He finally spoke, his voice soft and hesitant, 'P-please. I-i-i know he did wrong. B-but, please. I-i-i- don't wanna go back. I'll t-take anything. P-please.', his stammering was more than Kazu could bear, How could anyone just sit and isten to this?
'If Agito and I forgive him can you let him stay?', he said, eyes on the terrifyed boy.
Luna and the boy both looked at him, luna's eyes were curious and the boys were a mix of hopeful and hesitant, like he expected a catch.
Luna tilted her head to the side, like a serpent eyeing it's prey.
Kazu shivered, not liking that look of hers.
Agito looked at him like he was a fucking idiot, but Kazu couldn't let the boy be terrifyed, not if he could help it. It wasn't pity, he just knew all too well what it was like to fear being alone, without anyone to lean on.
Luna stood, dragging the boy to his feet, her face hard and sort of twisted. when her voice came out, it wasn't the one Kazu expected, it was harsh and unfriendly;
'And what would it take for you to forgive him,hm?' she inquired, her hand moving from his hair to his exposed chest, where it tweaked one of his nipples.
The boy cried out and Aplolmi tensed, as though afraid of what was happening, his calm demener slipping.
'Do you like his look? Do you want to make him yours? Do you want to taste his flesh?', she asked, licking a thin line down his neck to make her point more clear.
The boy shivered and cried out, doing his best to stay still, to not run from her and risk her fury.
Kazu almost blanched. What was wrong with Luna?
'N-no. I don't have any desighn on his body.I just don't like to see someone suffer like that.', Kazu said, his voice wavering as thoughts of sex and sin flew through his head.
Luna smirked, a know-it-all look in her eyes. 'I know that you want to fuck this little piece of fluff here. I can almost smell the erection you have right now. Come on, come try him. He won't fight. And he's so TASTY.'
Kazu's blood ran cold; this was NOT the luna he knew. This was someone else- someTHING else.
'Why are you asting like this? This isn't you, Luna!', Kazu said, certanity in his voice.
Luna blinked, then blinked again, 'Your right.', she said, voice returning to normal.
She released the boy and put her hand over her eyes, seeming to count to ten in her head, regaining her composer.
When she calmed down, she took her hand away from her face and looked at the boym guilt on her face. She reached for him but he flinched away, cowering in front of her, one arm across his chest, the other covering his head, trying to fend off a blow he thought was comming.
Luna looked even more guilty, her face falling. She put her hand down and took a step back, giving him room to breathe.
Even though Luna was no where within striking distance, the boy just comtinued to cower on the floor, soft whimper escaping him.
Kazu couldn't stand it, he walked over to him slowly, not wanting to startle the boy.
Kazu knelled down next to him and lightly shook his sholder. At first the boy didn't respond, but then he whirled around and kissed Kazu on the lips, pushing their bodies together as he groped the unsuspection boy.
Kazu was so shocked, he didn't even respond untill he felt the boys hands near his crotch.
Kazu bolted up and tried to wiggle his way out of the boys clutches in vain.
Since the boy was still kneeling and Kazu was standing, that put a certain part of Kazu's body terriably close to the boy's mouth.
Just as the thought accured to Kazu, the boy had his mout on the buldge in Kazu's pants, licking him through his lose jeans.
Kazu shivered at the sensation, the feel of the boys toungue through his pants was different from what he had experienced.
It took Kazu a minute to think through the pleasure to realize that the boy was trying to unzip his pants with his teeth.
Kazu frantically pushed the boys head away from him, trying to maintain some symablence of dignity.
'G-get off of me!', Kazu shreaked.
The boy looked up, confused, untill he seemed to reason something out in his head.
'Please,',he said, voice a mix of sex-in-a-brothel and little-lost-boy. 'let me please you. I'll be good. Forgive me, master. We'll be good for you.'
Kazu almost olted right then and there, but he didin't want to hurt the boy.
'W-what's your name? Broken is your Brother, right?', Kazu asked, trying to distract him from any sexual thoughts.
The boy looked up, his green eyes haunted, his face slack with submission.
'My name is Branded. But i'll be whoever you want, master.'
Kazu couldn't believe what was happening. What the hell was wrong with this kid?
All through this extange, Luna stood a little ways off, watching, waiting to see if Kazu would fall to temptation, or rise up and help Branded.
Agito, on the other hand, was bust pretending to be pissed, but was actually trying to control his raging hard-on. The sight of his lover and the boy was almost too much to handle. This was going to be interesting.
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I'm sorry about the suck-ish-ness of this stroy. I'm out of time to be on the computer. I don't know when next I can get on, so it might be a while!
Review if you will. (It makes me happy.)
Oh! And from now on, I'm going to name the chapters after the people who review. I put all the names into a hat, and I picked Random Readers first.
(It really was just chance, so no one get offended.)