"Get to the gate!" Mitchell yelled as the scrambled toward the gate, away from the Larquists that were hot on their trail
Upon their arrival to P4N-782 everything had been peaceful. They made peaceful first contact with the Larquists and were greeted warmly. They weren't even sure why a lower ranking team couldn't do what they were doing. However, after saying something (they were unaware what it was that set them off) they started acting crazy and chasing them. The seemed to seek someone's blood. Their blood. They were not going to let that happen.
Vala was inches from the gate but turned back to see who was following her. She could see Sam, holding her GDO and pressing the buttons frantically while following. The gate had been dialed up by Mitchell who was now fighting off one of the eerie creatures because of his sudden halt and Teal'c stood a few feet away trying to ward off other attackers. Daniel was nowhere in sight. Vala tried not to let it bug her, and realized Sam had passed her and was going through the gate. Only hesitating long enough to see Mitchell get away from his battle and Teal'c follow him, she dived through the gate, escaping one of the Larquists grip.
Mitchell and Teal'c followed and then the gate shut down. Vala turned and stared up at the massive ring, now empty. "He's still there!" she shouted over the roar of the nurses running in. One of them yanked on her arm, "Please come with us, Miss."
"No! He's there! We have to save him!" She shouted as she was led away from the gate room. She would never leave her best friend behind.
I know it's short, sorry about that. Just wanted to update. Suggestions are good. =) This is back in time, btw. =)
Deborah Sloane