Disclaimers: I don't own warrior
Thank you everyone who gave me constructive critism.
Anyway last chapter was in Moonpaw's point of view and she fell sick to the ground with some strange illiness.
Jaypaw's pov
I padde into the apprentices, grumbling. It wasn't much of a den, there was just a bush and some boulders separating the warriors and the apprentices, the elders lived in a dip of land that we had built a shelter in, the Queens sleeped outside too but they had a clift along with some boulders and a dip of land over them and some litchen to give them privacy.
My mentor Emberfoot thought that I wasn't good enough at battle training to try the advanced move my brother and sister were trying. it wasn't even that hard.
I pounced into the air twisting like I was supposed to but landing wrong I landed on my shoulder and went tumbling back, I stood back up and tried again this time twisting to early and landing flat on my belly knocking the air out of me. I shaked my pelt and tried again this time it was perfect, but Emeberfoot wasn't here to see it.
I shook my head, and padded out pf camp. I padded onto the moor running loving the way the wind tugged at my fur. I kept running until I was tired my paws could drop. I looked over the Thunderclan border feeling some kind of longing but I shook it of. I padded to the stream to get a drink.
I was going to sip some water when someone called "hello". It was a she-cat.
I looked up to see a beautifull she-cat with honey brown fur and the most amazing blue eyes. "Hello, what's your name" I said
"Honeypaw, yours" She said
"Jaypaw, nice to meet you Honeypaw" I said
"Jaypaw, that's a cute name" Honeypaw said
"Yeah" I said splashing the water with my paw and wetting Honeypaw. She recoiled in surprised and then splashed back. I jumped across the stream and gently cuffed her around the ear. She pounced on me and we tumbled into the stram I stood up and shook my fur and Honeypaw did the same and jumped back into her territory. I looked up the moon was already rising.
I looked at her blue eyes and my heart melted inside me.
"Bye Honeypaw" I said
"Bye Jaypaw" she said
I padded home, thinking about Honeypaw. I padded to my nest and curled up smiling.
A paw prodded my side, I groaned and opend one eye. I saw my mentor looking at me. I jumped to my paws and shook my fur.
"Good morning, Emberfoot" I said
"Good morning, come on we're going hunting with Crowfeather and Haetherpaw" Emberfoot said
I padded after him leaving my nest.
We met with Crowfeather and Haetherpaw right outside camp.
Our mentors padded in front of us and we padded behind silently.
"Do you think that meeting in secret with a cat at night just as friends is wrong" she said unexpectedly
"No, not if your just friends" I said thinking about Honeypaw and noticing how Heatherpaw's eyes brightend.
"Thanks" she said
"Yeah whatever" I said
I noticed some movement near some bushes I told my mentor I smelled rabbit, which wasn't a total lie.
I raced into the bushes colliding with a cat. I stood ujp and looked at the cat, it was Honeypaw.
"Honeypaw, what are you doing here" I growled
"Jaypaw, I'm sorry, I just wanted to see you" she whimpered
"It's okay" I said letting my hackles down "but you can't just come here in plain daylight" I finished nuzzling her.
"I know but…." She started but didn't finish
"Look how about we meet near the steam at dusk" I asked her
"Okay" she said
"Bye" I said licking her check
"Bye" she said sprinting away into her own territory
I scented the air looking for rabbit, I found one near some boulders I walked closely to it and then sprinted to catch it, it leadep and landed on its back I bit its neck sending a thanks to starclan for the prey and padded back to my clan mates.
After catching some more rabbits and a thrush we went back to camp were we practiced battle moves until sundown then I ate and took a quick nap until dusk and then I left to see Honeypaw.
We met at the stram we played and laughed and swam because we felll in and then we went back to our own camp on the way there I saw Heatherpaw walking back to camp.
I catched up with her and asked her what happened. "Are you okay"
"No" she said
"Why"
"Remember when I asked you this morning, do you think that meeting in secret with a cat at night just as friends is wrong" she asked
"Yes" I said slowly
"Well I had been meeting inn secret with Lionpaw from thunderclan, but then today he said we shouldn't meet anymore because he just wanted to be a loyal warrior and he couldn't be if he was meeting in secret with me" She said
"Well why do you care there a better cats in our clan and you're too good for him anyway"
"You're right and your brother is cute" she said happily
"Okay thanks but Breezepaw is not cute" I said when we arrived at camp
"Yes he is, but okay" she said bounding away
I shook my head and curled up in my nest. "Good Night Honeypaw" I whispered falling asleep
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