Just a quick Authors Note (I know how you hate them!) explaining a few things.
First off Hermione acted like that because I decided that having dealt with a werewolf when she was younger slightly helps her remember things during her change BUT the war got to her and she may, later on in the story, explain the change (without her potion) feeling like the Crucio curse and that is why she reacted as such because she is traumatised.
OBVIOUSLY the ministry gave her information but failed to notify her about the Cullens because they haven't caused any irregular HUMAN killings so that is why she reacts to Carlisle as such and she's OK with the wolves because she felt a connection to them BECAUSE of her lycanthropy.
The second chapter was without much detail because:
A) It was slightly rushed
B) I'm preparing for Christmas and I'm getting busier.
I will NOT be updating for the next 3-4 weeks but I will try and write the next few chapters in DETAIL during my time off (Christmas Break) so that way they will not be rushed and perhaps have a great deal more detail AND they will hopefully all be ready by the time I return.
I know there will be many more mistakes to come so I'm considering either
A) Getting a Beta IMMEDIATLY
B) Getting a Beta after I've finished the story so they can make it prim and proper
or
C) Revising carefully myself after I've written it and then RE-POSTING it as a new and improved version.
See you readers AFTER Christmas.
Love you, Amanda.