This time is gonna be short, but this is due to me working at an original writing thing, which may/may not be published at some point.
Soul watched the Iceberg lounge burning, he grinned. He liked fire, fire purifies anything it touches, fire was powerful. Fire gave him birth.
*Flashback, The Spectre, twenty three years ago.*
The tube filled with blue goo lit up, men dashed around, charging various channels of energies. This was a very complex, yet important experiment. It wasn't allowed to fail.
And in a way, it didn't.
The air was full of screeches as they constituted the beings genetic makeup, the lead scientist imputed the relevant information and the tube erupted with white fire, and floating in the goo was 'subject three', he was garbed already in metallic cloth and chainmail gloves.
They removed him from the tube, and brought him to the lead scientist.
"You are ready. We will call you when needed." He intoned.
"I. Need. A. Name." The new life said, as if an old mill creaking back into life after many years of abandonment.
"You will be a heartless killer, killing soldiers, tearing them limb from limb. YOU WON'T HAVE A SOUL!"
"Then. I. Am. Called. Soul. The one thing. I shall never have."
The lead scientist harrumphed.
*End of flashback*
Soul took a last look at the fire. He smiled.
The first of many, he thought
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AAAAAAAAAAAAND NOW ITS TIME FOR, ZEE MAILBOX!
Troq Rock: Okay, I really like where this is going. Its cool, edgy,and so far nothing overly cheesy or dramatic. You've got a pretty good writing style too, so by all means please keep this up.
Also, the story before this seriously left me hanging...so yeah, explanations of some sort would be appreciated. Its great to know there are people still inspired to write even though the series is over. If any my criticism is to be a bit more careful with your editing next time. I saw a few typos. Other than that this looks REALLY promising. Looking forward to more Ryand'r greatness. :)
Thank you, Ryand'r will be back soon. Maebe. As for explanations, the plotline will unfold in this story.
New York Mike: Interesting story.
Thank you!