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The baby cried out as it took its first breath in. Dr. Flint cleaned and examines it while Janet addressed the room. "Now is the time we've waited for! We, the faithful, shall send Carrie White and this demon child back to the fires of hell where they came from!" Dr. Flint handed the baby to Sue, who immediately stopped crying, and stepped back to join the crowd of zealots. Sue looked down and her child and saw that it was a girl. For a brief moment the rest of the world was gone and it was only Sue and her daughter. She had strands of blond hair and soft brown eyes, like Tommy's. Then reality came back and she knew what that meant for her, her baby, and Carrie.
Sue turned and looked at Carrie, whose eyes were focused on them alone and silently nodded to her. Carrie understood what this meant instantly and used her powers to push back the guards around her, and started trying to remove her binds. Sue was still weak from earlier, but used all her strong to get off the after and move to free Carrie. Unfortunately Janet and her men recovered quickly and grab Sue and the baby while holding guns on them. Carrie stopped and was about to fling the men across the church before Janet spoke up again.
"Try anything and we kill your friend first!" Janet held a large blade to Sue's throat and any resistance Carrie had been washed away immediately.
"No Carrie! Please to give up!" Sue's baby started to cry again as the cultist laid her on the altar. Sue was held back by one of the men who had a pistol to her head. Janet ushered her followers closer and was ready to do what her twisted mind asked her to do.
"The chance to rid the world of the devils influence is now my faithful followers!" She turned and pointed to Carrie. "This monster killed many innocent lives with her ungodly abilities! Even her own mother." She then pointed to Sue. "And this one lay with a boy and got her unborn child exposed to the monsters evil, forcing us to save its soul through death!" Carrie hung her head at her aunt's words; to her were both painful and true.
"You are wrong!" Sue shouted as all eyes fell on her. "Carrie is the one that is innocent not those kids. I…we did so many horrible things to her; we tormented her, humiliated her, and made her life hell! But she never said or did anything to us! Not even when we deserved it!" Sue felt fresh tears fall down the side of her face as she looked and Carrie who also had tears falling. "She is the most kind hearted, compassionate, and innocent person I've ever known! She didn't do anything wrong but defend herself! If you want to punish someone evil then punish me not the woman I love!" Sue shouted without even realizing it.
The church was in stunned silence, until Janet spoke again. "Oh my poor dear child." She said with false sympathy. "The devil inside Carrie didn't just poison your daughter, but you also. For to lust after a person of the same gender is-"
"A great sin in the eyes of the holy father!" The cults finished. Janet walked to Sue with her knife in hand.
"But fear not for we can purify you my dear." In an instant Janet sunk her knife into Sue's stomach deeply before the teen could even feel it. "With your death." She whispered in Sue's ear.
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Carrie felt something in her break and something so familiar. Sue Snell, the girl her tormented her, the girl who let her boyfriend take her to the prom in an attempt to apologize, the girl who tried to save her from a collapsing house, the girl whose daughter will have the same powers as herself, the girl who she loves and who loves her too was just stabbed in front of her. As Janet pulled the knife from her, Sue clutched her hands over the wound as blood began to pour out and she fell. Sue looked at Carrie and mouthed something she couldn't her before she fell to the ground.
Carrie felt her heart explode in her chest and her blood run cold. But as she looked at Janet and the cultist, her body heated up and her mind held only one thought as fresh rage overcame her and her eyes turned completely white.
'Kill them. Kill Them! KILL THEM! KILL THEM ALL!'
An unseen force shoots through the church as all the doors and windows were shut by nothing. Carrie snapped the binds off her hands and feet and floated to the ground. Janet and her followers saw Carrie raise her arm and the men next around flew up towards the ceiling. Each man hit the top of the church hard before Carrie dropped her hand and they fell to the ground even harder, killing each with broken skulls and crushed bones.
A few started to scream as most rushed to try to escape and others grabbed the fallen guns and fired at Carrie. Each bullet stopped inches from Carrie's body before she cried out and launched them back at the cultist, shredding their bodies. As Carrie started to move things around to kill the rest of the people, her powers acted on their own and lifted Sue in the air and behind her while keeping her from bleeding out. Carrie's mind was focused on ending all their lives and protecting Sue and the baby. 'The baby!'
Carrie looked at the altar, but she wasn't there. Carrie heard her cries coming from the front door of the church. While still carrying Sue's body, Carrie made her way to the door, to Sue's daughter. All the while she flung people around the church, most hitting the walls, other hit benches and columns, but all of them were dead. As Carrie stepped over the lifeless body of Dr. Flint, she saw the baby in Janet White's arms.
"You demonic bitch! You killed everyone you fiend! They're all dead by your hand and for what?! This antichrist child and your disgusting lover!" Carrie wasn't listening to her aunt, but instead stared at the baby in her arms. She used her powers to pull her aunt to her. Once she was close she gentle grabbed the baby. As Janet continued her insane rant, Carrie looked at the baby. She stopped crying again and looked Carrie in the eyes before reaching out to touch her. Carrie regained her senses and smiled at her. "An evil being like you doesn't deserve to live! You killed my sister, your mother, and that is what you are Carrie! An evil demonic killer that will burn in-!" Janet flew to the center of the church and floated mid air facing Carrie's back.
"Mama tried to kill me." Carrie said softly without even turning around. "After the prom, I came back house and Mama stabbed me. I tried to get away, but she chased me and tried to kill me again. She saw that I was evil and had to die. I didn't want to die and I was so afraid that I accidentally killed her. I was even prepared to let myself die in the house and stay your prisoner so that I can atone for my sins." Carrie looked at Sue who had labored breathes. "But Sue was right. I was the victim of so many bad things and I am sorry for what I did, but I'm not sorry that Chris, Billy, or Mama is gone because they were evil people like you and they would still be doing evil things if they were still alive."
Carrie outstretched one arm towards her aunt. "And if you live you'll continue to do evil things to me and to others." Janet's arms and legs stretched out away from her. "So to make sure you don't hurt anyone." Janet started to scream as she felt her arms and legs pull apart from her body. "You can't stay alive." Janet's limbs were pulled and pulled until they were pulled out over her body and tossed to the side. Janet's screams ended when her body fell to the floor and blood gushed out her body. Carrie turned and walked out the church with Sue and the baby in her arms as the columns and walls started collapse and the building crumbled.
