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The host of Total Drama stood on the dock once again. Chris waved at the camera joyfully. "Hello, audience! This is Chris McLean, I'm back, baby! Are you ready to be rocked? Ha, you bet you are! This season we bring you an all new cast, with 18 rejects in reality. We have scientists, gamers, and short-tempered guys this season, so Stay tuned, Total Drama fans, becuase you will not want to miss Total! Drama! Bakuhatsu!"
*cue theme song*
The very first boat begins to make its way to the worn down island. Chris watches thoughtfully as the first contestant steps off.
"Here I am!" a boy smiles. He has white hair with dyed orange ends, even though it was tough to see under his beanie. He was looking through his camera, showing his YouTube viewers what was on this island. "Looks like I have arrived first!"
"Welcome to Bakuhatsu, Logan," Chris said.
"Great to be here, man!" He lowered his camera and shook Chris's hand. "This place looks... a bit run down, don't you think?"
"Oh, I'm quite aware," the host chuckles. Logan begins heading to the end of the dock. As he does so, Chris groans. "The producers won't stop bothering me about it."
Logan raised his camera again, filming the next arrival. A girl with great enthusiasm hopped off of the boat. Her white ballet flats made a loud noise against the dock, and her curls bounced joyously.
"Hi, you two," she smiled.
"Our second contestant, Dahlia!"
The competitive gamer walked over to Logan. "What are you filming? Some weird nerd documentary?"
"No," he shook his head. "I'm vlogging for my YouTube channel... which might be a weird documentary, I guess. Do you watch?"
"Nah."
Logan felt mixed emotions, but barely brought attention to it. He continued peering through the camera.
"Ugh, that boat driver is a jerk," a boy groaned. His onyx eyes were focused on the ground. "So what I have- are you filming me?"
Logan nodded. "Say hi to my Subs!"
The boy angrily covered the camera lens.
"I'll edit it later."
"This is Rin!'
"Oh, hey Chris. And hi, Subs of that albino kid over there."
Logan rolled his eyes. Dahlia began to walk over towards Rin.
"Hey, Rin," she said. "My name is Dahlia."
"I'm Rin Akihiro. Kind of excited to be here." His mouth curved into a small smile. Maybe competing wouldn't be as crappy as the boat driver made it seem.
"Get ready, Total Drama!"
A young, perfect looking girl walked off of the boat. She flipped her dark hair over her shoulder. "You're about to get ten times more fabulous!"
Rin and Logan's mouths were agape, while Dahlia rolled her eyes.
"What an idiot," she chuckled.
"I'm Tiffany, it's great to meet you all!" The girl beamed like a cute kawaii girl.
"Meet you... great it is!"
Tiffany giggled. She was used to this, it was routine. They mess up words, and she pretends as if nothing happened.
"There is nothing wrong with Vegas, Kiki! We should go!"
"But it costs a lot, it's dangerous... people are kind of crazy there."
The next people to depart were two young teens, both a different gender. The girl was playing with one of her raven braids, while the boy was continuously smiling. "It's the place to be!"
"Ssh!" the girl shushed, watching as each contestant waved to them.
"Meet our duo of the season, Okiku and Tarquin!" Chris gave them a grand welcoming.
"Just call me Tarq," the boy instructed.
"That's a weird name..." Logan muttered, fixing a setting on his camera.
"What's that supposed to mean?!"
"Oh, i-it isn't an insult," he corrected himself. Tarq smiled in relief.
Meanwhile, Okiku was re-tying her glove.
"What's that?" Dahlia asked in disgust.
"It's just a glove! Shut it!" she snapped. "Why do you even care?"
Dahlia held her hands up in defense. "Sorry," she said, with detectable sarcasm. Tarq escorted his friend over to Rin, trying to make sure nothing happened to her again.
"Hey!" Tarq grinned.
Rin slightly flicked his eyes towards him. "Oh, uh, hi. My name is Rin."
"You know my name already. And hers!"
Okiku shot her acquaintance a look saying, 'Don't, Tarq. I don't need anymore attention!'
Water sprayed the dock, soaking Tiffany's sandals. She gasped; she was appalled. They had cost her a lot, and she didn't want to pay for new ones. A blonde kid with the palest blue eyes waved as he left the boat.
"Hello, Chris! Hey, contestants!"
"This is Felix, our seventh competitor!"
"Did you all- woah! Are you-?" Felix dashed toward Logan, who almost dropped his camera out of shock. "Are you Logan Theo?!"
"The One and Only," he smirked.
"Wow, this is so cool! I'm actually touching Logan Theo!"
"Felix, back off, buddy," Chris said. Logan was obviously feeling very uncomfortable, but he enjoyed the fact that one of his fans would be here with him.
"Sorry, that was awkward."
"No doubt," Rin chuckled.
The next boat rolled by, dropping of Contestant #8 and then speeding right back off. She was readjusting her sweater sleeves until she saw the competitiors.
"O-oh, s-sorry. I wasn't t-too prepared for this." The brunette blushed beet red, fiddling with her hair.
"Meet Norah!"
She shyly waved. "H-hey everyone. I h-hope I wasn't too d-distraught for your liking."
Felix quickly rushed up to Norah, alarming her. He grinned as Norah's eyes widened in fear.
"Hi, Norah! My name is Felix. You seem shy! There really is no need to be, actually."
Norah politely held out her hand so that Felix could shake it. "I-it's a pleasure to m-meet you, Felix. I wish to b-be good friends in the f-future."
Felix shook her hand, but he shook it mad fast. Norah was even more alarmed now.
"Dude, stop creeping people out!" Chris shrieked. Felix backed away sheepisly. "Sorry."
"Are y'all ready to do this?"
A boy emerged from his boat with a smile larger than Felix's. He ruffled his curly hair as he walked over to Tiffany.
"This is Jay!"
"Hey, cutie," he said, flirtatiously. Tiffany sure was enjoying this. "What's your name?"
She felt so charmed at this point. "I'm Tiffany." She began to blush, unsure if it was real emotions or if she planned to use him later.
"I'm Jay Collins." He shook her hand happily.
Tiffany giggled as Jay strolled down the dock. He went and stood near Okiku and Tarq, who were still talking about Vegas.
"I like your gloves," he complimented.
"Leave- I mean, thanks!" Okiku was not expecting any type of compliment from this guy. He was a handsome, athletic boy who just looked like he was a player, though now she had a whole new opinion on him.
"You know, have you seen that cool punk band that has those gloves? You should check those guys out! Say, what's your name?"
"I'm Okiku. Nice to meet you!"
They continued to talk more, much to Tarq's jealousy.
"Wow!" Logan exclaimed, raising his camera immeadiately. "Look at that!"
A girl with long golden hair leaped from the boat in some weird karate move. She wasn't exactly smiling, nor did she look proud of herself. Her maroon eyes were narrowed like a master from a fighting game.
"This is Jeane," Chris stated.
"Greetings, my fellow competitors. I am Jeane," she murmured, almost unaudibly. "It's great to be here at this summer camp."
"It's not too much of a camp, actually," Dahlia frowned.
"I was expecting a resort!" James cried.
"You know that we hardly have the budget to keep you losers alive," the host pointed out.
"I was imagining an area similar to most previous ones, old and worn down."
"That sounds right!" he chirped. The campers groaned, rolling their eyes.
"Cheap!" Tiffany giggled.
"So, are you a karate master or something?" Jay asked, intruiged.
"I wouldn't call it that," Norah corrected. "I believe the term is Martial A-Artist."
"That's right!" The Italian girl perked up. "Thanks for that."
Norah gave a weak thumbs-up.
The next boat instantly arrived, because an extremely calm looking young man was unboarding. He had the calmest green eyes and a very muscular body. He was giving everyone the same glance, one that was unreadable.
"This is Blake!"
He gave a small wave towards his new 'friends.'
"Hello there. The name is Blake Niccolo. I'm excited to beat- I mean... meet you." He smiled nervously.
"Me too," Dahlia said, slyly. "I'll enjoy it, I'm sure."
He smirked, and headed over towards the others. Blake was observing Logan, who was talking to himself and working on his camera again.
"Dude, what is that?"
"YouTube! Dang, does anyone watch me?"
"I DO!" Felix shouted loudly, loud enough for the islands a few miles away to here. "'LIKE EVERY VIDEO!"
"I'm not too sure what this is..."
Logan beamed. "That's.. perfect! I'll tell you everything!" He started going on and on and on about every single aspect of YouTube. Meanwhile, the next competitor was getting off of the boat, and saying a plethora of things. She was in yellow, head to toe.
"Wow, that boat is so cool! Did they tell you how many weird modes it has? You should've asked, it is so amazing. And the water is a lot prettier than I thought, especially since I have seen all of the previous seasons and it was so... ew last time. And did you know that a majority of water is not clean, and actually extremely contaminated? Hate to ruin the mood, but it is the truth. And wow, Chris! You are much more handsome in person! Can I-"
"PLEASE shut up," Chris grumbled. "Meet Sunny!"
"Hi, everybody. It is sooo great to be on this island! What's it called?"
"Bakuhatsu."
"Woah, that is an awesome name! Bakuhatsu, Bakuhatsu, Bakuhatsu!"
Felix liked her mojo.
"Hi! I'm Felix. We seem similar."
They were very similar, actually. The two started a conversation on parties, and hardly stopped to breath. However, they were at the edge of the dock, where the next boy was getting off.
"Move it, peasant." The boy pulled his big suitcases off of the boat. He threw Sunny straight into the water.
"S-Sunny!" Norah dashed over to the edge and helped Sunny up.
"Ah, thanks, Evan. Such a relief."
"No problem, Christopher. I live for this."
Norah wanted to say something to Evan, but she couldn't bring herself to.
"Thanks!" Sunny smiled, wringing out her blonde hair.
"It isn't a big d-deal," Norah replied.
"You're a jerk," Jay went ahead and told him.
"I am a very rich jerk," the auburn haired teen corrected. "That's all that truly matters, isn't that correct?"
Each of them groaned, but Chris said, "He's my favorite this season!"
"Woah, look at the size of that bird!"
The fourteenth contestant arrived. She had raven hair and two different colored eyes, which were bright with excitement.
"This is Nya!"
Nya waved very joyfully. "Hey, guys! And girls, of course. Isn't that so cool! I can't tell the breed yet..." She studied the perched bird carefully, and muttered a few things to herself; easily in Latin.
"What's with the creepy smart talk?" Jeane asked.
"I th-think it's extremely fascinating. I'm sure it's a-" Norah said, and then Nya and Norah talked in unison.
"Phoebastria nigripes."
"You know wildlife?!" Nya exclaimed. Norah nodded. "That is awesome. The black footed albatross is quite the creature."
"Y-yes," she agreed, quietly. Norah was relieved to find that she and another contestant shared a common interest. The two talked a little more about birds, but they were instantly cut off by a wail.
"I'm s-so sorry!" the boy cried. "I didn't t-try to w-waste your time, M-Mr. Boat Driver! Or whatever your name is... please don't be angry, s-sir!"
"Our fifteenth contestant, Ronald!"
"Um, hi everyone! I can f-formally address y-you soon! Please don't be upset for now." Ronald had began to dry his tears, but more welled up in his eyes.
"Why would we be upset?" Sunny beamed. "It doesn't matter what you call me for now. I'm Sunny, by the way."
"R-Ronald. I like your name."
"Like yours too!"
"I-is it okay if I remember your name?" he asked shyly.
"Of course, Silly!"
"I'm Ronald."
"Oh, boy. This'll be difficult."
"Uh, thanks for dropping me off."
The next girl was walking off of the boat, and she continuously brushing brown hair from her face. She was sketching and didn't bother looking up.
"Our sixteenth newcomer, Anna!"
She only barely glanced up. "Hey," she muttered.
"Can you say creepy?" Evan groaned. "And poor? My shoes cost more than everything she's wearing!"
"Who's the weird rich bum?" Anna asked with a smirk.
"Evan. I do not recommend talking to him ever," Tarq chuckled. She snickered, tucking away her drawing supplies. "I'm Tarq, and this is-"
"I'm Okiku. I can introduce myself, Tarq."
Tarq blushed. "S-sorry."
They both turned beet red, and stared at each other. Anna backed up, partially weirded out, but also plotting something, apparently. She began sketching madly, and not letting the pair see.
A boat could be heard rolling up, and someone stepped off of it. There was a boy with ash blond hair, and her eyes were like staring into sapphires. However, those sapphires weren't very visible, because he was focused on his white Nintendo.
"Ugh, why can't I catch Palkia?!" he groaned. "It can't be that hard!"
"Our final male of the season, Graham!"
"Uh, hi guys," he murmured, hardly looking up from the game. "No! Why'd he have to use Hydro Pump! Should've used my Roserade."
"Um, hello? You here, freak?" Evan grumbled. "Aren't you going to compete?"
"I plan to, but I also plan to compete in the Sinnoh league, so if you wouldn't mind, I need to do that."
Evan rolled his eyes.
"Hey, Graham," Logan lowered the camera. "I can give you a tip on how to catch Palkia."
"Really? Show me!"
The boys did that as the final person arrived. She had long blonde hair and green eyes, and a radiating smile.
"Our final contestant, Alyssa!"
Alyssa waved with optimism. "Hi guys!"
Most people waved back, excluding Anna, Evan, Logan, and Graham, all for obvious reasons. Alyssa gave the four a confused look, becuase Graham was overwhelmed with relief and Anna was shaking out her numbed hand.
"Do they have problems?" she asked Norah jokingly. Norah stifled a small giggle.
"I am a-actually not too c-certain."
Both girls let out a laugh.
"So, now that you all are here, we're going to decide the teams. Chef, bring the balls!"
Most of them let out a very loud laugh, while the others were disgusted. Chef Hatchet wheeled out two large bowls resembling fishbowls.
"To do so, you must draw a slip which will state a color; green or red. Five girls shall recieve red and four will recieve a green, and it'll be the same for the boys. If you draw the red, go to the left, and green will be told to go right."
The eighteen newbies each drew one of the cards. The red team consisted of Alyssa, Dahlia, Jeane, Norah, Sunny, Felix, Graham, Rin, and Ronald.
"Those of you on the left, I now dub you The Broad Eagles!"
They high-fived each other, proud of their bold name.
"And those on the right, Blake, Evan, Jay, Tarq, Okiku, Nya, Anna, Logan, and Tiffany, you nine will now be called The Hostile Hawks!"
They all cheered, none of them left with terrible names or anything like that. This sure would turn out to be quite the season, Chris thought to himself. It was just what he needed.
Phew, that's done. There will be a Part 2 to the first episode, obviously, and if I'm lucky, it should out by tomorrow night.
Who are you liking so far? I haven't gotten each character too developed, but give me an outine. It may just affect how rankings turn out.
I will assure you that this will be a great story in the future!
Till da next time, TheAtomicPikachu
