I've had a couple of Guest reviews saying that my story is weird and pointless, and I thank them for the criticism, even if it could have been slightly less rudely put. This was my first story and most of the feedback has been good, but in reading back through it I can't help but notice how the anonymous reviews do make good points. Therefore, I'm going to take this story down in the next week or so, unless there's anyone really desperate for me to keep it up. I feel like my other works are of a better standard, and by comparison this story drags me through the mud a bit.
Thank you all for reading and reviewing, and if you're into MARVEL or Supernatural I've written some stuff for those that's much better than this story that will hopefully prove to you that I can write more than just half-assed crap.
