Outlook on Life
Digimon/Human Talking: "what are you doing?"
Digimon/Human Thinking: 'its obvious its smelling flowers'
Digimon/Human Shouting: "OMG FLOWERS!"
Digimon Attacks: "Pyro sphere!"
Pairings: OCxRenamon
Official Disclaimer: i do not own any Digimon characters from the original Digimon series, nor do i own the manga anything related to or referencing of many other fanfictions, Manga, or Anime japanese or otherwise are not intentional and is purely Coincidence. please understand that i had no intention of stealing anything you have labeled as yours since i have not read nor have i seen anything matching a description of anything i place within the story. However any OC'S, names, Abilities, conceptions and storyboard i place within the story are of my own design i will try to follow canon plot but many changes will occur such as an example: renamon getting Kyuubimon form early for one reason or another. Also Good criticism and reviews are welcome with open arms flames However must remain off my page for i have no use of them. ive done my research and i know what im doing in regards to this fic so stating i clearly dont know what im doing and that im an idiot purely makes you the child of this arguement and as such i have to reason to listen. if you wish to start problems with how i write my fanfictions then take it up with someone who has the emotional capacity to care for i do not.
Sidenote: this is purely a dark Godlike fic many personalities will be changed and each character will be developed based exactly on a real life scenerio meaning any Character with bad childhoods will of course be Darker in personality. Digimon as well will aslo have adjustments such as power levels since i feel as a fan of the original series that they downsized many Characters strength. do not worry for i will make the enemies stronger as well depending on the exact character but otherwise im playing with the bond between a Tamer and their Digimon and what could truly happen instead of the redeeming crap they alwasy do. expect some character to be Killed of because it will be essential to the plot.
P.S. this is a purely OC fanfiction with the OC or OC'S being the protagonist there will also be pairings but for now it is OCxRenamon this will not change unless you want me to make a harem. if so then i will only allow three more girls and they can be from other Anime as well once i have recieved the three females i will place a poll for the top three.
there is no black or white in the world only shades of grey...so tell me where is the grey where is the in between for the victor and the loser the wealthy and the poor...there is none? thats strange to her...why you ask?..if there were only grey then how come im hearing how the winning side is the good guys and the loser side is the bad guys -?
Outlook On Life
by
Trureadur
Chapter 2: alone, Darkness rising and the behemoth!
Alone.
it was the one simple word GreyGunmon could only describe as he stumbled through the desert of the Digital world the dead lost expression once again in place and his body slowly healing from the wounds he sustained from an earlier fight. he tripped kicking up sand and his hat fell landing a few feet away as his body laid there his eyes staring out into the distance and seeing nothing by the same image of losing his one and only friend.
[Digimodify: Flashback]
"Ominous Cut!" a wave of black purple energy crossed the destroyed clearing in order to destroy its foe only for the attack to simple pass by the opponent not even damaging its impenatrable skin.
"Giga Destroyer II" was the growling repsonse as a missle was fired from the Digimon's right arm and the missile sped forward slamming into a tired Lycanmon's body were it detonated into a small mushroom cloud.
"Lethal Diamond Storm!" was the feminine shout as Renamon crossed her arms which shined a dull white before swinging them in a wide arc launching hundreds of crystaline shards at the enemy only for its skin to come through by shattering the attack upon contact with its body.
"Nuclear Laser!" and a beam of pure energy was fired from the left hand and engulfed Renamon in a dome of utter destruction her pained screams ringing out from within which made the Digimon laugh.
"HAHAHAHAHA!" he laughed "all those rumors of you to being so powerful and here i thought id finally have a challenge" the Digimon frowned "pathetic i probably didnt have to evlove into my mega evolution"
"im Metaltyrannomon only because i want you to know who defeated you" MetalTyrannomon shouted lifting his right arm which revealed a barrel "am im going to enjoy every last second!"
so for the past couple of hours Diremon and Kyuubimon shoulder through their injuries before having to Digivolve back which hadnt really help as they exhuasted their energy trying cause any significant damage. they were tunning out of plans and MetalTyrannomon didnt seem tired let alone outta breath so they were at a lost as to what they can do.
"its a shame" MetalTyrannomon gloated as he stepped forward his body shaking the ground from his weight "i expected more" he reached down with his claws lifting a near unconscious Renamon by the throat before unleashing a devestating left hook into her stomach making return to the waking world of pain.
Lycanmon growled as he used his sword as a prop to keep himself from falling over mentally screaming at himself to move his body to save her and succeeded in standing up though his legs threatened to buckle.
renamon of course feebly struggle under MetalTyrannomon's grip trying to pry it open so she could clear some distance between them but the tightenting grip held steady making renamon go limp.
"it seems fighting you both wasnt worth it in the end" MetalTyrannomon grumbled then focused his gaze on Lycanmon "say goodbye to your friend and i hope you enjoyed your final moments together" he threw renamon into the air then aime his left arm at her which charged with powerful energy.
Lycanmon could only stare eyes wide as everything seemd to slow down when their eyes met and he watched Renamon shed a single tear before her body was engulfed in another blas essentially deleting her. he continued to watch as the Data vainished leaving for the digital realm then he turned back to MetalTyrannomon expression still disbelieving.
"HAHAHA...this is priceless!" MetalTyrannomon laughed as he pointed at Lycanmon "your expression of utter shock at watching her die is Priceless" he laughed again his voice echoing across the clearing before it turned mocking.
Lycanmon lowered his head the light of the sun shadowing his eyes effectively hiding the wurderous glint shining within but the killer intent he was leaking made Metaltyrannomon pause.
"it seems you still can fight" he grinned darkly making a come here gesture "then fight you mutt show me how much your cared for her or was her death meaningless for you"
Lycanmon growled his body shaking in rage and adrenaline surged through him as he dug deep into his body searching for anymore power just enough to stop the mocking Renamon's death continued to plague his mind. Calumon who was hidden in the trees watched with a said expression on his face as he felt the sorrow and pain from even the distance he was at.
"you need this more than i do" was his whispered answer to Lycanmon's plea for power and his Hazard symbol glowed and resonated with the X-AntiVirus symbol on Lycanmon's forehead making it shine a sickly green color.
"Lycanmon Warp Digivolve to-"
he body glowed a dull green color which brought MetalTyrannomon's attention to him and said Digimon grinned feel the power rising in his opponent though his expression became confused when the power jumped higher then it vanished. the light died down the body within shifting into a more sitting position then it shattered like an eggshell revealing Lycanmon's new humanized form.
Green miasma like mist trailed from his form as he slowly stood up from his sitting position two ornamental pistols with a stylized wolf head at the and of each barrel, each of them the same length which was 1 foot long. he wore a wide-brimmed gunslingers hat grey the predominant color and was tattered bullet holes littered the brim of the hat His eyepatch was gone. a milky white eye and a single scar running vertical from his forehead to his cheek he still had his features as Lycanmon but the Muzzle and fur was a bit shorter making him look a mix between human and wolf. His outfit changed drastically as well: his upper body is covered in a Black fur-lined jacket over a double-breasted vest reminiscent of his Rookie level form. His legs are covered in Grey, skin-tight pants, with Black knee-high fur leggings covering his lower legs, and his arms are covered in Black, elbow-length fur armbands, which end at his wrists. There are ribbon-covered bandoleers emerging from his upper back and disappearing into the handles of his guns. With fur-covered holsters rested gently at his left and right attached to his belt but all this paled in comparison to the to the weapon currently resting on his back.
it was a cross bow as long as he was tall with a stylized wolf head at what would be the barrel end of the weapon a single crossbolt was nestled inside ready to fire rather than the traditional crossbows this had one rotating drum filled with even more crossbolts. grey was the predominant color with the bow a dull bronze and bronze like etchings of a wolf on each side.
"-GreyGunmon"
[Digimodify: FlashBack end]
GreyGunmon sighed heavily the dead expression changing to a more saddened gaze when he thought back on the fight between them he of course had won Absorbed MetalTyrannomon's Data as some sort of petty revenge and then left the human world through one of the portals. he just couldnt grasp the gut wrenching agony as the void threatened to consume his heart but he just couldnt muster up his anger or hate to even vent his frustration. he even wanted to cry, to just yell to the sky above him letting the world know it just wasnt fair but again he couldnt to tired and to sad to bother to move nor find a healer of some kind so he could continue his search. Days nearly a week he spent searching mostly meandering across terrain hoping he would catch some glimpse of her. then he heard something evident by the twitching of his ears which twitched slowly trying to identify and pinpoint the source of the noise and it seemed like it was coming from the right of him.
then the rumbling followed.
it was odd hearing such a noise as he tried to place a picture with such a sound but it seemed he didnt need to when whatever it was, was next to him the rumbling of some engine filling his ears before the noise came around to his left and he saw it. red skulls, decorated a full hubcap which covered a good portion of the wheel, the wheels themselves were smooth no tread at all for grip. the windshield an angry red and two exhaust pipes were situated on the right side he absentily noted something small on the seat. (AN: its behemoth im not that good at describing machines)
he picked up something in his dulled senses almost like something calling to him urging him to move and he did the answer as to why wasnt very clear to him since he had given up and was just going to let himself die but the urge grew stronger. he slowly raised himself onto his knees grabbing his hat and putting it on and mentally noted his felt numb to his injuries. he stumbled forward like a drunkard and swatted away the small Digimon on the seat a MetalKororomon if he remembered then sat down himself and the vehicle seemed to almost purr in satisfaction. GreyGunmon felt the evil presence try to fill his mind with hate and violence but his ever growing sadness overpowered it pushing away those thoughts before it overcame the bike itself.
'your hate cannot wash away my sadness behemoth' GreyGunmon thought sadly watching the red become dull deep blue color and it seemed that Behemoth was now sad if not exuding the despair GreyGunmon felt when its form glowed and shifted.
the seat slid back before rising up like the back of a chair making its rider lean back then followed the Handle which extended in grew to reach GreyGunmon's hands comfortably and the exhaust pipes stretched back becoming wider while a second set grew on the left side to the same length as well. the windshield shifted into a Wolf's head its Maw open revealing a single headlight from within and the the front wheel grew out making the bike rise up a bit. what once resembled a sports bike was now a chopper.
'find me a healer Behemoth' he thought growing weary again as he adjusted his crossbow attaching it to the side of Behemoth so it didnt bother him and he got a a feeling of agreement from the bike. with single rev blazing blue energy exploding from the exhaust pipes the back wheel spun kicking up even more sand before speeding off in a wheelie a trailing howl left behind it its wake. GreyGunmon didnt notice he had run over MetalKorotomon who tried to get out of the way but didnt move fast enough to do so.
[Cave]
a single reptilian eye opened as it felt a source of power equal to the one his subordinate brought to him fill his senses and he gave an inquisitive hum in thought contemplating as he always did.
"interesting" it said as his sighed before turning its gaze down to a single form being held within a dull white ball of energy "it seems your friend as entered this world to find you" it closed its eyes wanting to rest some more and missing the single tear from his guests eyes
Renamon who was still unconsicious wished she could move but she had to stay and be healed if she even wanted a chance to return to him
'Lycanmon' she thought as she shed a single tear 'i can feel your despair, your agony why are you being made to suffer so'
she could only contemplate as she tried to figure out how to leave and search for him
[With GreyGunmon]
as he rode Behemoth eyes closed as e tried to rest he felt a faint pulse of sadness but ignored it since he wasnt able to recognize it and allowed himself to sleep knowing Behemoth wouldnt let him fall off as it drove to the nearest village it knew of.
[Mudfrigmon Village]
it was normal for the Mudfrigmon to be up and about as they travesed around their home buying or trading food items they find or just plain enjoying the day at least that is what it was up to a point. each and everyone heard the familiar rumbling for a very familiar vehicle and they ran around in a panic hoping to make it to their huts or any viable place to hide from the Digimon coming to terrorize them. the village leader made his way to the entrance and spotted the growing Dust cloud quickly approaching their home. it didnt take long as Behemoth sped past before turning to its side skidding across the ground and stopped and while they were expecting MetalKoromon to once again attack they were surprised to find not only a different Digimon but in Fact Behemoth looked different.
before the leader could ask what buisness the Digimon had here said rider slowly fell to the side landing on the ground with a dull thump causing dust to rise before it settled and this sent them into a panic thinking Behemoth would attack them. though it didnt in fact it remained excatly out it was before it revved a few times and an overbearing sadness settled on their shoulders and hearts.
"its seems Behemoth found a new rider" the leader said as he gestured for some to lift him up gently once seeing the injuries "but the rider is falling into a depression the likes of which i havent seen" he followed after glancing over at the motionless bike once more before entering the hut where the healer was.
[three days later]
GreyGunmon awoke with a groan before shooting up into an upright position once he recognized he wasnt sleeping on the dirt nor was he dead he gazed down at his body and found his chest wrapped tight as well as his arms head fingers. he saw his clothing resting on a makeshift hook on the wall with his pants an guns resting on the chair beneath that. he rubbed at his bandages cause they itched before he let his arm fall resting at his sides limp his eyes glazing over in thought. he didnt notice anyone walk in nor did he registar someone talking to him till they shouted in his ear making him flinch minutely and turn his eye to the other occupant. making them cringe as they stared into dull lifeless eye since the other was milky white showing he was blind in the other.
"are you alright?" came the soft question
"am i alright?" GreyGunmon chuckled humorlessly "i nearly died at the hands of a monster..watched my one and only friend be Deleted before my eyes..and now im here in this world stumbling around like a drunkard looking for her" he tilted his head "you tell me if i should be alright?"
the Mudfrigmon flinched taking a step back before bowing "im sorry for asking"
GreyGunmon grunted softly "what would it mean to be alright?" he paused not caring of Mudfrigmon was listening "to be safe, loved...cared for..maybe its monetary gain..materialistic possession" he stared down at his lap in thought "maybe its being content knowing you have a purpose" he turned back to Mudfrigmon "dont you think so"
Mudfrigmon tilted its head "im not sure ive mostly lived a simple life here in my home"
"its it truly a simple life" GreyGunmon asked earning a confused expression "is it simple because you've done it for your entire existence or is it simple because its what you know..what could be simple to you could be complicated and aurduous for someone else"
Mudfrigmon could only nod "you seem to think a lot about things dont you?"
GreyGunmon would have shrugged but he just couldnt muster the want to do so "maybe..but its anything better then the prevailing loneliness inside my heart"
Mudfrigmon nodded before turning to leave "once you've dressed our village leader wishes to speak with you
GreyGunmon only nodded going back to staring a his lap his ears twitching as footsteps faded before clenching his hands "why am i still like this" his whispered "ive should have changed back once i was unconscious" he could feel a small thrum of his power inside himself and he shook his head "it seems absorbing that bastard has me stuck like this until my power settles down" with a soft sigh he swung his legs out of the cot he was on and stood up before rubbing his head having hit the ceiling of the small abode. he slowly put his clothes on ignoring the fact he had to hunch in order to keep himself from hitting the ceiling again once he was done he stepped out into the light pushing down the stinging pain that comes with adjusting to sudden light in his eyes. he spotted behemoth and noted the changes making him smile sadly as the Bike resonated with him conveying his sadness.
it also affected the village as everything seemed to dim like clouds had covered the village and the once spry Mudfrigmon moving about smiling slowly lost the feeling and a few started to trudge along not really bothering to reach their intended destination. even the few trainee and baby level Digimon started to cry sensing the growing sadness and emptiness. GreyGunmon could only look on apathetically as he neither had time nor the emotional capacity to care how his presence was affecting them so without a second thought and patting his holsters making sure his guns were secured he hopped on Behemoth.
"w-wait!" was the errant shout
A paw gripped his sleeve making him turn down and look spotting another Mudfrigmon only it was taller not by much just and inch or so with a crown of some sort to indicate his status.
"no reason to leave so soon stranger" Mudfrigmon gave a grin "please stay im sure we can accomdate you until you can leave on better terms" his suggestion was ignored in favor of being backhanded by GreyGunmon who finally showed emotion in the form of cold rage.
"Dont touch me" he growled "im grateful you healed me but i wish to stay no more as i must find my friend"
"you cant run from your feelings stranger" Mudfrigmon leader spoke as he stood back up braving the glare aimed at him "you need to talk about it or else it will destroy you from te inside" he hmmed "ive seen your type and i can safely say your acting like a baby level"
GreyGunmon was silent his once angered eyes returning to ther dullness and with a rev the engine the deep rumble causing everyone to pause and with a screech of rubber and dirt flying back he sped the Bike around in a u-turn and drove out the village.
the leader could only gaze at the retreating form of the mysterious Digimon and shake his head before turning around though by doing so he missed the large massive arrow shaped energy descend from the sky until it hit him.
GreyGunmon placed his Crossbow back into the holster on Behemoth the wolf head barrel smoking and from behind him a brilliant yet sickly green light epxploded into a dome engulfing the small village and wiping everyone out. GreyGunmon's once dull eyes now being replaced with Dark intentions and insanity the only thing on his mind was finding Renamon anyone in his way will be dealt with.
[back in the cave]
Renamon stilled rested as she felt her power slowly come back she couldy hear something else with her as well as feel the overbearing amount of good energy coming from the other occupant. she tried to place a name to such a familiar feeling but then she remember that she needed to get out and find Lycanmon she twitched within the orb the only sign she was forcing her body to move when a deep chuckle caught her attention.
"do not worry young one" the voice spoke gently "once you are fully restored ill be sending you back to your rightful place"
'rightful place?' renamon thought 'does he mean with Lycanmon'
"no not him" the voice responded "your place as one of my digidestined with you Tamer Rika"
Renamon really wanted to struggle now 'NO! i refuse to return to..to that bitch!' she mentally growled 'she made her choice and its been approved by the sovereigns im not going back to that hell!'
"im sorry young one but it must be done in order to save not only the digital world but the human world from a great threat"
'i dont care!..im not leaving Lycanmon just cause you get off on Destinies' Renamon growled
"im afraid you have no choice" the voice said "as the leader and subsequent god of your world i can change this all with but a whim"
'no..im not going back' Renamon whispered as her power pulsed growing darker in nature 'and no amount of being a god will stop me!'
the voice sighed heavily "you were never supposed to even have met this Lycanmon nor should he ever met you"
Renamon grew silent as she listened
"you were supposed to change your Tamer's view on Digimon then join the other Digidestined in stopping the evil from destroying everything" it explained pausing to let it sink in before continuing "this Lycanmon was to be deleted as his unnatural creation at the hands of the DigiGnomes and the X-Antivirus has changed the outcome of my plans"
'as ive said before i dont care' Renamon said coldly 'if i dont return to Lycanmon you plans will still change because he will then hunt you down'
"im not to worried young one" it chuckled " as a sovereign of the eastern hemishpere and strongest of them all your..friend is but a minor inconvience"
Renamon could only remain silent before her thoughts trailed back to her friend 'Lycanmon wherever you are..please find me' she sighed managing to move her arm a little 'maybe then ill tell you how i feel once we destroy this sovereign' he thoughts turned darker and the only one who knew was said sovereign who watched as the bright yellow fur dulled in color.
it closed its eyes once more 'you wont be changing the fate of this world Lycanmon' he slowly fell asleep 'to much is at stake for you to interfere'
[Shinjuku a little after Greygunmon's departure]
Takato was currently trying to figure out a plan for victory a sure fire way to win against his opponent who calmly stared back from behind his glasses and a smirk on his lips as he stipled his fingers and leaned forward.
"so do you yield" the older male said
Takato wiped the cold sweat from his brow before sighing in defeat "fine..you win henry"
Henry grinned before writing down his score and started reseting his chess pieces an action mimiced by Takato
"that 12-3 in my favor" henry joked before laughing as Takato slumped grumbling
"why am i even doing this again" takato groaned out as he turned a bored gaze onto his Partner Guilmon who was currently playing with Terriermon
Henry sighed in exasperation "cause you wanted to get smarter while Guilmon gets stronger so you two dont get blindsided by Rika and Icdevimon again
Takato shivered as the once surpressed memories came back of his recent battle with what people are now dubbing the Ice Demon
[Digimodify: Flashback Activate]
"Guilmon remember stay here and outta sight okay" Takato said as he opened the shed to let Guilmon walk inside though it was a wasted effort when a javelin shaped ice slammed into the wall startling Takato while Guilmon started growling.
"are you sure Icedevimon?" a emotionaless voice questioned as the Ice Digimon nodded
"yes he is the source of power ive been sensing occasionally" IceDevimon said as he let a nonchalant glance search over Guilmon's visage before crossing his arms "if i absorb him all gain enough power to warp Digivolve and be able to defeat that mutt and your former partner"
Rika merely hummed in thought before nodding pulling out her D-Ark and sliding a card through it
Digimodify: Below zero
IceDevimon smirked darkly as his right hand glowed before holding it out palm open
"Wailing ice shards!" three four foot long icicles launched from his hand speeding through the air fast enough to become blueish white blurs
"Pyro Sphere!" a car sized ball of fire escaped from Guilmo's open maw meeting the ice shards head on before to Takato's shock as the first shard made contact and invertly froze the fire leaving it just a shpere of ice in which the second shattered the attack and the third followed narrowly missing Guilmon who dodged.
though as the ice shard sailed past hitting the same shed five feet instantly flash froze in a thin layer of ice making Takato's eyes widen andhe stared at the cold expression on Rika's face.
"y-you're serious bout this aren't you?" Takato asked fear creeping into his voice
Rika merely tilted her head "its what Digimon were made to do" she readied another card "and i aim to be the strongest to exact my revenge"
"w-wait!"
She stopped letting curiousity show on her face
"h-how bout you wait..let me get Guilmon to evolve" Takato explained "that way you can get more out of it..yeah he chuckled nervously hoping she would buy it
Rika seemed to think about it before nodding minutely seeing it more beneficial in the long run and she can always get IceDevimon stronger should Takato try and use an evolved Guilmon to defeat her.
[Digimodify: Flashback end]
he shuddered again "i know..its just that..everything is changing so fast and im not sure if i can get Guilmon strong enough let alone listen to me so i dont lose him" he slumped over again "i dont know what to do"
henry seemed to think tapping his chin before getting an idea which made him grin "why not go to the Digital world?"
Takato shot up disbelief in his expression "go to the Digital world..is that even Possible!?"
henry shrugged "is they can come here i think its safe to say that it is possible" he frowned as he crossed his arms in thought "we just need to find a way to open a pathway to the world and a way to safely navigate through.
Takato nodded and was looking thoughtful ideas flitting through his head
[Digital world]
Orochimon was running in his currently champion level form and was out of breath and running on fumes in terms of energy but he needed to get away from the monster hunting him. he turned down the path in the forest only for an arrow to embedd itself next to him making him trip in his bulky form and turn tail in the other direction a single golden eye the other a milky white following him from the trees. the shadowed figure jumped easily using the branches to keep up with his prey while maintaining cover before he caught up to Orochimon of was trapped on the muddy bank leading to a deep river.
"you have run for far to long Orochimon" came a calm yet dead voice making Orochimon turn fearfully to the source
standing before him was none other than GreyGunmon his Crossbow in hand another arrow glowing green ready to fire should Orochimon try to run
"y-you bastard" Orochimon growled with a hissing undertone
"me a bastard" GreyGunmon said calmly "then what does that make you" he tilted his head "insignificant mostly"
Orochimon attempted to lash out with one of his many arms only for the limb to fall short when the very arrow loaded in the weapon was now lodged in his head and he wasnt able to voice his current thoughts let alone think as his body fell apart into Data which was then absorbed into GreyGunmon's body.
"still not enough" GreyGunmon mumbled as he holstered his weapon and stared up at the wanning sky "ill find you Renamon..even if i have to destroy everything to do it" he turned barely missing something watching him but it vanished as he turned to see it.
frowning slightly his dead expression returned before walking back to Behemoth in order to hunt down more powerful Digimon.
a single dokumon walked out from the treeline before hissing mandibles clicking "yeesss..he is progressing nicely masster" Dokumon went silent cocking her head to the side "i shhall continue servailencce" Dokumon grinned taking to the trees and following
[unknown location]
the figure once again couldnt help keep the grin off his face as he watched GreyGunmon easily dispatch Orochimon though it turned into a frown when another screen popped up showing Renamon practicing while being watched by Azulongmon.
"you will not interfere in this Soveriegn" he grumbled darkly "ive put to much planning in achieving my goals for these two" he allowed his power to pulse once collecting a greyish energy into his hand before shooting it at the screen "enjoy your darkness Renamon..use it well"
Alright! second chapter done though i wish it wasnt so short compare to my first chapter but ill live with it as long as i can make them long and entertaining for my first ever followers to my story. the knowledge that a few people enjoyed reading my first chapter enough to the point they were willing to either favorite or follow my progress brings literal tears to my eyes. anyway onto a few things in regards to this fanfiction i figured id let you all know right now.
im going to stop following the canon storyline as trying to even follow it loosely is currently fighting with my inate urge to just write it like an actual book versus like the anime. so with little regrets im going to continue on with the goal of producing twenty chapters each at least 9 to 10,000 words in length with the full intention of providing you all with a good read.
im also glad that i got to include takato and henry within the second chapter while also revealing the slowly building darkness in both Lycanmon now currently stuck in his mega evolution and renamon being healed by a soverign who hopes to send her back to fix a prophecy. i hope i did well with give Azulongmon a sort of righteous nature that is filled with misplaced intentions and i hoped you like what i did with Behemoth.
what i felt with Behemoth was that it can change its appearance to better reflect its rider in nature if the chosen rider is able to assert a level of dominance on the vehicle just like it does when it possesses its rider with violence, anger, and hate. i think ive covered what i wanted to explain please review as i need to know what i need to improve on and im thankful no one had a problem with my first chapter even though i spotted lots of grammer mistakes when i re read after it uploaded. im changing the polls since i feel maybe you all would feel better if you OC was place in the story i can change things around and should you like the idea ill add them if only to get more in the story. if there are any question please ask and ill provide an answer the third chapter and please at least consider reviewing while im glad no one seemed to find any problems with my first Chapter id feel better if you at least left a review so i know what i did wrong.
i have other fanfictions in the works
Naruto Shippuden: Nature Spirit
Pokemon: the great Arc
Highschool DxD
Sonic Overdrive
HTTYD: Forevermore
some im thinking about working on
X-men
Skyrim
Parasyte
Avengers
Godzilla
and many more
i also would like any challenges you think i can handle but i would prefer you wait after my second fanfiction is uploaded so you have a better understanding on if you feel comfortable with me attempting you challenge.
