Ok ,so I am veryyyyyy sorry for not replying to reviews . I was always like I will reply in this chapter and I forgot again -_- not because I am ungrateful or so but just because I wrote a doc,I forgot to reply and then I was too lazy to go and edit the docs. BUT GUESS WHAT? I remembered ^_^ so here is it today. BTW ,there were many guests so I don't really know if the guests were same or different . So I have replied by placing their reviews ,so you could recognize your reply :)
Guest- hey ( i guess he she wrote hey instead of their name)
Review -
Hello,
This is sooooo a a very very (super super...super) good story that you're making from I began to read your story I really was 'so okay its the only I can (find) to read today'.
But I began to read and now I'm addicted to it.
*I really was from this a not-common subject to write 2 last chapter were AMAZING.I can stop reading your story. When to the next chapters come out ... please tell me you'll write many more chapters
bye bye
Ps. To what are you referring when midorikawa said "I...I...I..am"
IT'S MAKING ME CRAAAZZZZYYYYY
*(Revieuwer calming down after trowing a bucket full of cold cold water on herself)
REPLY- ha ha! You have humour ! Why don't you just make a I'd here? I could use a friend. BTW I meant something really good by "I" xD you can read that in this chapter. You typed this review in hyper mode neh? I also do the spelling mistakes when I have a lot to say xD This story is one of my fav's . I just came to the concept of it. Its nice to see you review! Your review made me update actually ;) Thanks again!
Guest- Hey (yeah it happend again! So what we all make mistakes!")
Review- Very good story I love the end of this chapter Hoe Will it go further
Reply- hoe it will xD? Ok sorry but you cracked me. Yeah ! THIS IS GOING TO GET A LONGGG WAY. until of course I get bored or my imagination flies! I thank you for the review though. BELIEVE ME! I appreciate your review more than I say!
Guest- Guest chapter (guest was named guest)
Review- Loveit!
Reply- Thanks! I love it to ! ( I mean your review :3)
Guest- Pat Fifty Storms
Review- And cultural differences! Yes, yes, yes! Long live diversity and the fact that the world is much more complex than it seems from your classroom windows!
Reply- tthanks,I haven't seen you reviewing after this ? I hope you are reading though! Cultural differences was something, I had long doubt's on. I actually sometimes imagine myself their ( but only if these guys were real ) sweet of you to appreciate this idea. Hardly people Notice that ,it has that concept . Thank you :)
Guest- Pat Fifty Storms
Review- Yeah! IE with language barriers! I've been waiting for it. I mean, the series was TOTALLY unrealistic in the language department. Thank you for putting it right!
Reply- yeah yeah yeah ! I know I know! It was totally unrealistic in that department. But I am putting it right? Really? I just thought what it would like to be there but guess it turned out like this! WHICH is a GOOD THING! thanks again!
Guest- guest ( what? His/her name was guest)
Review- Please update! Love The story!
Reply- i did updated I hope you are reading ! I know I love it too :P Thanks though ,I really hope you are reading.
Guest- VampYui
Review-how interesting coming from the character from India...
Reply- Thanks! Guess i already sent you a note ,no? Since you are a registered user. I haven't seen you around much replying and reviewing . Though thanks ! I hope you find the next chapters interesting. :)
Reviewer- SOMEnormalDUDE12
Review- Well this is a very interesting fic. I'm very intrigued by the first chapter and I will be waiting for the next.
Reply- Thanks! I haven't seen you around much after the first chapter . I will reply you any day! BTW nice pen name . I hope you update your own stories too. I hope you have read further and haven't gone bored and probably reading this in a new chappie!
THANKS EVERYONE! REVIEWS ! THEY MEAN A LOT. :D
Anyways on with the fic-
"I..I.." Midorikawa was catching his breath when suddenly he stood up with a proud smirk
"I am sexy and you know it"
He said and winked. I couldn't control my laughter anymore. We all burst out laughing with tears in our eyes. Kazemaru was also laughing on the floor with Midorikawa ,clutching their stomachs. People were staring at us as if we have grown a tail. It even made Fudou laugh. Suzuno cracked up too while holding Aphro's shoulder, so she wont paas out on the floor out of laughter. Man ,this was ultimate!
After that laughing fit we had,we all went to the gates and gave our tickets to the checking guy. We then went Inside. The view caught Me,that crowd, people going out with there gfs ,making out and all. A aunty with grey hair wrinkling her nose in disgust at them. Then there were kids running here and there with candy in their hands ,there parents after them.
" so what do we do first?* Endou asked.
"Rollercoaster" Aphro said.
"Ferries wheel" Touko said.
"Rollercoaster" Aphro said to her.
"Ferries wheel" She sent back at him
" rollercoaster "
"Ferries wheel"
"Rollercoaster"
"Ferries wheel"
" rollercoaster "
"Ferries wheel"
"Rollercoaster"
"Ferries wheel"
"ENOUGH!" Suzuno barged in irritated. "For gods sake! We have a kid here . let her decide you selfish people" Suzuno said and pointed to Yuuka. It was good though, Kids deciding rides.
" so where would you like to go Yuuka?' Gouenji asked Yuuka gently . "Hmm..." She paused ,her eyes roaming here and there. " there at that swings ride" she said and pointed to a ride which had a wide and pole ,umbrella shaped . which had swings around it. We would not swing but fly round and round. We all nodded and went with her. I got a seat near Aki . The swings of everyone were not attached together. We all had our own. We rode around all the way for 20 minutes screaming.
After the rides and all we decided to head to the Horror house. It was a white building with no windows and no paints. Only cement walls which were not really cement walls...
" only 2 people can enter together. No groups allowed" The one on the gate of ghost house said. OK with whom now? Tsunami will be going with Touko,Hiroto with Reina, Suzuno somehow tricked Midorikawa with her. Nagumo took Aphro,Otanshi with Aki,Natsumi and Endou,Fudou took Kazemaru. Fuyuka was gone with Rika and I had to be stucked with the googled man ,who wasn't wearing goggles today. Oh I want him to wear goggles! Those crimson eyes are distracting and I am sure he is planning my murder.
" would you move now" Kidou said to me, tapping me on the back.
"I highly doubt my decision to go with you" I said looking straight at the door.
"Fine, if you are so scared. We can stay here and wait for them" he said plainly. I looked at him from the corner of my eyes . He was smiling in the other direction and the blonde at the counter was tugging a strand of hair behind her ear and looking at him.
" Tell me Kidou, what are you planning on again? " I said giving him glare . My arms draped around me protectively.
"I am just smiling at her ,I am not planning. Well ,unless she wants to?" He said still looking at the Blondie.
" I am talking about myself kidou"I said this time my body faced his direction.
"Huh? Well I am free tonight I don't mind" He said moving his eyes in my direction.
oh those eyes!
shut up!
but those eyes...
" you get your mind outta gutter "I said tentatively. " I am saying is what are you planning on me?" I asked this time clearly.
"Nothing?" He said waggling his eyebrows.
"Really?"
"Why would I?"
"Caused I pissed you damn good on my first day" I said looking at him for a answer. He has a good body.
"Ahaha .."He laughed a little than caught himself "no ,I don't plan anything seriously" He said and looked over to the Blondie again who was paying More attention to him than the customers. I nodded and looked over to the Blondie and then him. Ah! Well he was smirking at me.
"What?" I asked .
"Why..?" He said "jealous?" And completed with a smirk.
"My ass" I said without even giving a second thought.
"So ,Cmon ,since I am not planning on anything and you are NOT jealous, let's go in?" He said with another smirk. I nodded and went forward and passed the Blondie. He was behind me. I stopped at the door of the ghost house it was big ,Kidou came but not before a two minute chat with a Blondie. He opened the door for me.
" Why ,O Gentleman ! Flirt much?" I asked lightly punching him in the arm.
"Soo..I am human. Totally allowed to get occasionally hormonal" He said in his defense.
" yeah yeah! You should not hold a guy's hand in public. "I said mimicking his thick manly voice.
"Haha" He lighted up " that's school, every playground has its own rules "He said slightly shrugging off.
" hmm" I said and the next few minutes we walked in silence. Until ,there came two passages ,side by side. Where would we go?Kidou just randomly choose the right one and followed him . it was dark ,except a little light. Which ,I dunno ,came from where? We were walking ,walking ,walking..
ok this is getting boring.
Shut up!
Seriously ,in a dark alley way,with a guy,all you do is waking?
from where did you came out?
I am your conscious my friend !
yeah yeah Fuck off.
I was cut off from my thoughts when Kidou jolted me a little and then motioned at the room. Which was very...odd. Since ,the room had a couch but the TV was placed behind the couch and not in front of the couch. Ehh?
We moved in . Since the room had a door to the other side and this side we only had a door from where we came. Kidou was passing through ,going to pass through and I was looking at the couch when the door Shut close. We looked at each other and ran for the back door. It closed too. Fuck!
