Guest #1 - Yea, i was meaning for it to be actual flirting, and that's a hella idea, i will use it but not sure who just yet ;)
Jk Tolkien - ahh, sorry for the confusion
jackiechallis - Glad to hear you are enjoying it :)
Guest #2 - Here's that Nathan chapter
I watch from hiding as Nathan bursts into the room, muttering, and pacing the room. About a minute later, a girl enters; I can't get a view of her face. They are talking in voices that don't carry the sounds. Then I hear Nathan yell.
"You don't know who the fuck I am or who you're messing around with!"
I see something in Nathan's hand, taking a few seconds to realize what it was. I take a step forward, raising my hand and about to call out when I realize it is a gun. I watch as it drops from his hand.
Confusion sets in, no one makes any moves. I can't hear what Nathan mumbles, but he leaves not even worrying to pick up his gun. I am able to see the girl's face now. Her eyes are closed and she has a look of pleasure. I realize the girl is my old best friend.
"Chloe!"
Her eyes fly open.
"Max?"
"What was-" getting cut off by the door opening. Before me or Chloe could react, Nathan picks up his gun and points it at us. I close my eyes, fearing the worst.
The room was dead silent for what seems like it could go on forever. Hearing the gun hit the floor again. I open my eyes to see Nathan and Chloe with expressions of pleasures on their faces. I grab Chloe's hand and drag her out of the room.
Nathan stands there for a few minutes, before coming to his senses. He quickly searches the room, seeing that Chloe and the other girl were gone. He picks up his gun and leaves the room again.
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