Hey guys this is my redo please tell me what you think of it. The AU is dancetale
Toriel's POV
"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" I heared screaming "is it another fallen human?" I thought to myself I walk downstairs to check what it was and found two girls dodging that flower's attacks quite gracefully. The older one had silver hair with a red streak and brown eyes, was wearing tennis shoes, shorts, and a black jacket and was dodging the flowers attacks dancing hip hop and doing some break dance as well. The other child had short light brown hair with squinted eyes, was wearing a blue and purple striped sweater, and was dogging the attacks as well following the older girl's example except doing ballet . He then surrounded their souls with his bullets. The older girl looked like she was going to do something until I then shot a fireball at him and the attacks disappeared. "What a horrible creature.""What's your name?" The older one asked "My name is toriel." She answered. "What's yours my children ?" "My name is rose and this is frisk"I heared the girl say. "Follow me we shall go to my home. Do you prefer butterscotch or cinnamon. I heard the older girl discussing with the younger child. "We would like butterscotch." "Then I shall make you some pie when we get home my child." I told her. I then clear all the puzzles and head into the house. I show them to their room and they thanks me and rose says that she wants to sleep so I leave to make the pie.
Rose's POV
Toriel had left the room and I collapsed on my bed while frisk sat down on the bed next to me. We have been friends for a while after you took her in. She was lost, didn't have any parents, and was mute. I could understand sign language so it wasn't that hard to communicate. "Hey frisk why don't we get some sleep ok? I asked her. "Ok" she signed to me. I watched her as she layed down and fell asleep. I start to remember why we even came here.
flash back
Frisk and I were planing on taking a hike up mt. Ebott. When we were hiking up we found a cave and disided to explore it. We found a hole and tried to look in. I was telling her the legend of mt. ebott when we tripped on a root and fell. Flash back end . I decide to sleep myself and close my eyes. When I wake up I see frisk is sleeping next to me like she always does. Ever sense I found her she always liked sleeping next to me for some reason. I always assumed it was one of those nightmares that she had every now and then and being near me somehhow makes them stop. I smell something tasty and decide to wake frisk. When I try to wake her she starts to grumble until I tell her that toriel might be done with our pie. Then she jolts up and tells me to get out of bed. I start to giggle while I get out of the bed. As we walk down the stairs we see our pie on the table and we both take a piece. As I bite into my piece I see frisk smiling happily and wolfing down the pie. I internally giggle and start copying her. We start exploring the house and see toriel reading in the library. We startle her by sneaking up on her. I wanted to ask her how to exithe is a the ruins so we could go home. "Um toriel do you know how to leave the ruins?" Toriel' face darkened. "Please wait here my children." Toriel said. We wait in that room for one minute until I get suspicious. I tell frisk to come with me and she follows me. We go to where toriel is and saw her infront of a door. "Toriel!" I yelled. "What are you doing!? Isn't that our way out!?" I am still yelling at her. "Prove to me that you two are strong enough to survive!" I heard toriel say. The battle started and toriel immediately sent fireballs hurling at you. Frisk of course dodged them gracefully and with ease but me on the other hand was having a hard time dodging them due to my dance. When I first saw my soul I almost laughed. Some people said that I have a heart of gold but I didn't think it would be so literal. My soul was a gold color with some faint green, yellow, and red surrounding it. Frisk's soul was a deep red color and was quite pretty. After a mater of dodging it was our turn. We chose mercy and we spared toriel and she let us pass. She also gave us phones which I was quite grateful for. We finally exited the door after saying our good byes and continued on our journey.
"wow it sure is weird around here." I thought. Me and frisk walked for a few seconds until I yelled, "Who's there!?" My magic activated automatically a red flame substance came out of my right eye as I hid frisk behind my back with a questionable look on her face. "I'll explain later." I quickly tell her. As I focus on the person infront of us I realized that he was a skeleton! He surprisingly looks very familiar but you can't put your finger on his name. "Woah! Don't you know how to greet a new pal!?" I heared the skeleton say with the slightest bit of worry in his voice.
Sans's POV
"Woah! Don't you know how to greet a new pal!?" I yelled. I was a slight bit worried knowing that the human had magic. There was something about her though. She felt so familiar yet I was sure I haven't met her before. The flame in her eye calms and eventually goes away as she apologizes. "I am so sorry I didn't, I thought-! She started panicking until I put a finger up to her lips and stop her mid-scentence. "It's ok. I'm sure you were just using your instincts." I said calmly. I move away my finger and say, "Now, slow down with those sentences now, umm, never caught your name there kiddo."
Rose's POV
Ok so I was slightly pissed. I am very old and definitely not a kid anymore though I am on the short side. I do have the de- I mean human age of 18 but I am definitely not a kid! "Um hello you still there." I heared the skeleton say. "Oh I'm sorry I must have spaced out for a few seconds I'm rose and this is frisk." I said all while looking a frisk. I looked back at Sans who seemed to be angry cause his eyesockets were totally black. I took a step back all the while keeping frisk behind myself. My magic was starting to activate until I start to break the silence "Hey what are you even doing here anyways?" I asked him curiously because we are technically standing in the middle of nowhere. "Oh I'm supposed to be keeping watch for humans, but I don't really care for capturing anyone, but my brother he's a human hunting fanatic." I assumed he was just messing with us and just acted casual. And as if that was his cue a big skeleton came walking by. "Quick behind that conveniently shaped lamp!" I just stared at him in utter confusion. "Frisk cover your ears, what the fuck are you talking about sure frisk can hide there but where am I going to hide "SANS ARE YOU EVEN KEEPING WATCH FOR ANY HUMANS." I quickly turn around seeing a giant skeleton in front of me. "SANS IS THIS A HUMAN!" I heard the big skeleton say. "Hi there! Can you tell us your name?" I asked. "I AM THE GREAT PAPYRUS and that is my brother sans. I SHALL CAPRURE YOU AND TAKE YOU TO UNDYING SO I WILL BE ABLE TO BE IN THE ROYAL GUARD, NYEH HEE HEE." The names papyrus and sans ring in my head. why did it sound so familiar. I tried to remember and get slight memories. Wait a sec he did say capture right? Omg he did. And here I thought he was just joking. I just picked up frisk and just started running.
Sans's POV
As soon as I hear the name frisk I immediately tense up but then why did rose sound so familiar to me. I feel like I'm forgetting something. Something extremely important. But I just couldn't come up with a solution to this.