ALRIGHT! So, yea. I read what I had previously wrote for chapter 5, and I hated it. It was way too emotional and it came out of nowhere. I tried to push more fluff into the story, but it backfired and gave the opposite of what I want: a well paced story. SO! It's time for take 2! Chapter 5 2.0! Chapter 5.5, if you will. Lets see if I can do better...

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"Wait! No!" The saiyans words were lost to the wind as the two girls bodies flew towards each other, colliding and bursting with light. When the dust had settled, a single saiyan stood in the place of the two females, wearing a pink shirt like kales, with long skin-tight pants to match, gold boots and arm bands like kales. Unlike kale, however, she wore two pink earrings on each ear, as oppose to kales hoops. Her hair was black and in a high ponytail, much like kale as well.

"WOOHOO! Now THIS is power!" The young saiyan shouted, ecstatic at the amount of pure energy coursing through her.

"Tch. As powerful as the supreme kai warned." Gogeta scoffed, looking at the girl and getting a read on her power, which was a little lower than his usual super saiyan 2. However, in his current state, she was quite a bit more powerful than he. What's more, she was even more powerful than the original timeline.

"Kale and Caulifla, huh...? I guess that makes me... Kefla!" She announced, deciding on the name she would be referred to by, for longer than she likely realized. Looking around, she found Gogeta, jumping up to his level, causing the male to stagger from the sudden movement. Even Kefla was shocked at her speed, adjusting to the new power she held.

"Hey! Gogeta! Hope your ready fro a real fight, cause im gonna crush you now!" Kefla stated, eager to test how far she could go.

"I'm ready when you are." The man responded, sliding into his fighting stance, before bursting into his super saiyan state, starting slow to test the female.

"Now that's what I like to hear!" Kefla bellowed, charging up and dashing off at Gogeta, only to have her punch blocked and be thrown backwards. "Hey! What's the big idea!?"

"Just because your stronger doesn't mean your test is over. You've still got to counter my martial arts while adjusting to your own power." The man before kelfa responded, taking the time to scan the area and try to find a way to use it against her.

"Grrr... Fine then! I'll just blast through your fancy moves and THEN I'll pulverize you!" She yelled, dashing back at Gogeta, who vanished before she could make contact. Before she could find the man, she felt a precise jab to her side, sending her flying through a couple of pillars, before a rock smashed into her. Pissed, Kefla burst out of the rock, slamming full force into Gogeta for using such dirty tactics.

Gogeta quickly recovered, leaping back at Kefla with his fist outstretched before bursting into super saiyan 2 for extra force. Kefla was hit with the blunt of the attack, but was able to slow herself down instead of flying farther, jumping up and kicking off a pillar, a ki blast in hand, throwing it at her opponent before smashing her fist into his stomach, knocking the wind out of him. She had little time to follow up, as Gogeta exploded into his super saiyan 3 state, throwing the girl away, before sending multiple ki blasts in her direction.

"Ha ha! That's better! Show me all of your power!" The small saiyan shouted, before ascending into her own super saiyan state, hair turning green and eyes turning blue, a greenish yellow aura surrounding her.

"If you think this is my full power, then you have more to learn than I thought." The male saiyans words came with a warning tone, telling Kefla not to push him past this state. The young girl, of course, ignored this.

"You mean that Ultra Instinct thing? You can do that?!" Keflas eyes lit up with excitement, hungry for a bigger challenge thanks to her saiyan biology.

"No. Not Ultra Instinct. There's one form beyond super saiyan 3, far more powerful and easier to control. This form is so powerful, It can be used to challenge the gods if its perfected." Gogeta explained, furthering the look of wonder in Keflas eyes.

"Well, what are ya waiting for, an invitation?! Show me! Show me!" Kefla demanded, pestering the older fighter to use his full power.

"...No." He responded, cold as ice as to further his point that he wouldn't be showing Kefla his ascended state. This merely infuriated the young fusion. How dare he! Does he think she can't handle it!?

"Aw come on! What kinda response is that?!" She yelled, trying to break the male. This, however, didn't work.

"Absolutely not." He responded again, making sure that Kefla completely understood he wouldn't be using it under any circumstances.

"Grrr... fine! Then I'll just hafta force it outa you!" The small girl cried, charging back at the male, catching him with a sucker punch to the stomach.

Gogeta reeled over in pain, barely recovering before a flurry of blows came flying at him, forcing him to desperately block the blows, but to no avail.

"Come on! Use your full power before its too late! Or are you scared!?" Kefla yelled, trying to get under the older saiyans skin, but with little result. Frustrated, Kefla struck her opponent to the ground, throwing a green blast after him, knocking him a couple extra feet. "That's it? I expected more... oh well."

To the small females surprise, Gogeta stood up, stumbling back before gaining his footing, barely staying conscious. Kefla got ready to charge again, but was stopped when an orange ki blast hit the saiyan in the side, sending him flying again. Looking up to who disturbed her fight with Gogeta, she was met with a figure she was waiting for. One she was hoping to get revenge for the poor saiyan who was standing back up after that blow.

"Gogeta of universe 7. Our last battle ended prematurely. I'll make sure you pay for the humiliation you gave me." The grey warrior said, staring at the stoic saiyan who had barely recovered from their last battle.

"Oy, you! Wait your turn!" Kefla spat at Jiren, hoping to get the message that she was fighting Gogeta through his thick skull. Sure, he was strong, but that still gave him no right to barge into their battle. The grey warrior simply ignored her and charged the injured saiyan who could only prepare for the pain he would feel, flying backwards into yet another rock formation, spitting up blood on impact. Unfortunately, Jiren wasn't done with him yet, as he was the focal point of yet another brutal strike from the Pride trooper, and another , and another. Soon, the poor man was at Keflas feet, having just taken a barrage of ki blasts from the pride trooper. Infuriated, Kefla got ready to charge the grey alien for attacking her prey like that. Who did he think he was?! Shockingly, the shell of a man at her feet stood again in front of her, stumbling to gain his footing, swaying and nearly falling over.

"Jeez, how durable are you?" Kefla gawked, amazed at the saiyans durability. It's like he didn't know how to stay down! Soon, he was charging Jiren again in a futile attempt to fight off the pride trooper. Jiren simply stepped aside from the saiyan, before giving him a swift chop to the neck, sending him to the ground, likely barely conscious. He then turned to Kefla, staring straight at her. Soon, he was in front of her, knocking the wind out of her, sending a barrage of blows to her core, slowly breaking the saiyan down. It didn't take long before she was at his feet as well, charging a ki blast to fire point blank and finish off the saiyan.

Witnessing this through half closed eyes, Gogeta felt a burning sensation building up inside of him. When Jiren began charging up his finishing ki blast, The heat exploded, enveloping the saiyan. Before he knew what was happening, he had Jirens arm in his hand, holding the blast away from Kefla, piercing silver eyes once again staring the pride trooper down, before the pride trooper was sent flying through the air, only to be met with a knee to the back, and an uppercut sending him flying upwards. Enraged, the pride trooper shot off at the saiyan, who met his offence with one of his own, exchanging blows before Jiren began over powering the saiyan, throwing him down into the ground. Gogeta responded to this with a familiar rainbow coloured strike to the pride troopers stomach, marking the beginning of his punisher drive. Strike after strike, blow after blow, Gogeta threw all of his aggression into his fists, which in turn threw that force directly into the pride trooper. Jiren, enraged, screeched as he sent ki blasts flying in all directions. When he looked around, he found that Gogeta was standing in front of Kefla, arms crossed to block any stray ki blasts, an orange aura enveloping his upper body. Jiren quickly gathered his ki, throwing it forward in a massive pillar of flame-like ki, fluctuating violently like an open flame. Gogeta quickly picked up Kefla, warping behind a rock with his Instant movement. Ensuring the small girl was safe, he warped back out to face the pride trooper, charging a blue ball of ki in front of him, waves of his ki pouring into the attack, as his body dodged the multiple beams that Jiren had created in response, which were quickly tracking Gogeta, who was jumping from pillar to pillar, desperately dodging for his life, as Jiren was definitely trying to kill him with that attack.

"Big Bang..." Gogeta chanted, voice gruff and course, his words begging the name of his signature blast. Jiren, seeing what the saiyan was doing, doubled his beams and the speed they travelled, hoping to eliminate the saiyan here and now. His attacks were futile, as the new challenge merely helped to sharpen Gogetas movements, Dodging expertly.

"Kame..." Gogetas voice once again rang through the world of void, marking his attack to be half charged, blue orb growing in size each second, draining the saiyan of what energy he had left. Jiren, now scared for how strong of a blast the saiyan had created, threw all of his beams at the saiyan, who had jumped in order to reach the pride trooper, His massive flame pillars enveloping the saiyan, swallowing him whole.

"NO!" A saiyan girl who had come out to watch the fight called, watching as her mentor was pulled into the massive blast Jiren had created. Scowling, the pride trooper kept his beam steady as to ensure the saiyan was dead. To his surprise, though, the saiyan burst through at the heart of the beam, Enveloped in a familiar orange aura protecting him from the blast in its entirety.

"HAAA!" Gogetas hair flew up, as his aura became more dense and his hair turned a solid sliver, a blood-curdling scream coming from deep within which was quickly followed by a cone of condensed energy, as the pride trooper was sent flying, the blue aura still surrounding him as he flew.

Falling slowly down, Gogeta fell out of his ascended state, purple electricity sparking around him, dispersing as quickly as it came, forcing the warrior to his knees, before he fell unconscious.

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Wow! This took a while! I am SO sorry about that! Turns out, I'm actually not good at thinking ahead! I know, I know, big shocker. But really, this last chapter will hopefully make up for the train wreck that was what one could call chapter 5. I'll just have to wait for the fluff. Now, you guys have probably already figured out that Gogeta can go super saiyan 4. This chapter made it pretty obvious. But why won't he use it? We'll just have to see...