Thank you Abster 1 for your detailed review. I was inspired to write this story early yesterday morning, but i will be more careful to pay attention to details next time.
I edited my chapters and made chapter 2 it's own and chapter 2 chapter 3. Thank you prodigy86 for your review it made me feel very good to read that and know that
there are people who like my writing so well. So here we go on to chapter 4 of Now we Tango.
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"Oh my gosh Rae, I can't believe Nick is coming to Alana's Party!" Chelsea shrieked excitedly. " I am so nervous what if he asks me to dance, what if I snort, what if I trip and fall, and knock him over into the punch bowl."
"Chels, you are way to nervous girl." Raven began as she fixed her makup." First of all you see Nick almost everyday, it's not like this some blind date, secondly Nick thinks you are totally adorable so you have nothing to worry about. You ready for the best part," Raven asked as Chelsea looked at her nervously."You're my best friend, my sister, totally hot, a good person, and before tonight is over you and Nick nay be just as close as me and Eddie."
"You really think so Raven cuz, I really like Nick. I mean besides looks he is such a great guy. Did you know he volunteers at the animal shelter and helps out planting trees, and picking up trash at the parks as well." Chelsea was so excited she had never met a guy like Nick before and she couldn't contain herself.
"Yea and he also loves rap music and has mad DJ skills like Eddie, oh and have you heard him free style." Raven smiled thinking about Eddie and how much he and Nick had in common. It was funny because at the same time he was so much like Chelsea as well. " Well Chels all I know is..." Just then Raven was struck with a vision.
( Come on sweetie it's been a great night but i'm gonna take you home. We gotta leave the lovebirds some alone time, see ya later Eddie T. have fun Ravie B.)
" Rae, Rae it was a vision I know it, what did you see?" Chelsea asked hoping it wasn't anything bad.
" It was definaltely Nick talking, he called you sweetie Chels, " Raven squealed, "he was about to take you home in his car. That must be why Eddie told him to meet us there, he has something special planned for us tonight I just know it."
Honk... Hooooooonk...
"Chelsea, Raven, your friend Eddie is outside I hope you girls are ready it's already past 8:00." Chelsea's mom yelled from downstairs.
"Well Rae you ready for the best party of the year."
"You know it, girl lets do this, tonight is gonna be the best we are gonna have so much fun."
A few hours later
" Whoa whoa whoa whoa, Look at you rhyme i don't think so, yous a mark , my grandma skillz are iller talkin bout rosa parks R.Kelly pissed on you I'm sorry little girl so how you tryin to play me and talk about my world I can't stand the battle plus your breath is harsh here's some Listerine now take it home and wash Man your raps are lame, you skill has no game my little sister Evvie laughed when you called out her name my name's Eddie T take some note and learn not to mess with me Here's my mans here we go rock the mic Nicky B." Nick grabs the mic from Eddie and starts boppin to the beat
" Why you lookin at me like white boys can't rap cuz i'm a tree huggin hippie and you like to talk smack raise your glass in the air cuz this fights not fair you mean i gotta show it out to a buster with carrot top hair lil man i dont like you and i dont wanna seem rude i just had too many drinks and now i'm acting a fool i be talkin to walls going through some withdrawls breaking up all that herb flippin dough savin dogs, So what I'm Nicky B and that's my Mans Eddie T If you feel us you like us if you dont kiss these."
Everyone laughed after Nick as Eddie turned around and bent over to act out Nick's last verse. The party was so much fun and a few guys had challenged them to a freestyle battle. It was all in good fun and everyone had agreed that Eddie and Nick had truely slammed their challengers and reigned as the self proclaimed "Cali kings of Hip Hop." They had danced the night away with Raven and Chelsea, and Nick, little to Chelsea's knowledge, was really feeling her. Tonight was the night that he was gonna ask her out. He just had to find the courage to do so with out choking up, or changing the subject like he had done so many times before.
" Ok man you ready it's almost 1:30. I got everything ready for tonight I hope it goes like i imagine everything has got to be perfect for her." Eddie said to Nick. He had a special evening waiting for Raven and he didn't want anything to mess it up.
" I gotta say Alana this is really a great party, I mean seriously thanks for inviting us." Raven said to Alana sincerly.
" Well Raven ever since Alana left the Virgin Island last month with Devon she has been so much happier you should be grateful for that." Muffy said infactly.
" The Virgin Island, you me Alana and Devon went to Jamacia," Chelsea asked kinda confused," That is so sweet, why don't you and Eddie go to Jamacia Raven?"
" We didn't go to Jamacia Chelsea," Alana said slightly annoyed at Chelsea's slowness." We had sex... I lost my Virginity."
"Ooooh , wow that is wow." Chelsea said shocked at how far off she was.
"Chelsea." Raven said.
"Yes Raven?"
" I think I'm gonna do it Chels, I think I'm leaving the Island tonight."
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