Ok I have a question do you guys even think this is good cause if you do then at least I'll know and not think I'm wasting my time trying to be some writer apparently I'm not

Ok I have a question do you guys even think this is good cause if you do then at least I'll know and not think I'm wasting my time trying to be some writer apparently I'm not???????????????

Disclaimer- everyone who writes these fanfics know they do not own max ride and we all have to eventually face the cold hard facts.

Claimer- I do own B and everything about her and her life… Yeah!

Max POV- After school-Hotel

Wow her wings were gorgeous they started off white, then yellow, then orange, to a light red, then to a dark maroon red.

I apparently wasn't the only one in awe, Angel had to go and touch them to make sure they weren't painted. Gazzy thought they looked like fire and asked If she was a pyro.

"No, but I can copy voices like you" she laughed.

"That's awesome!" he smiled.

"So maybe instead of B we should call you Flamer" I laughed and fell to the ground in hysterics.

Apparently I was the only the one who thought it was funny cause no one else was laughing and they were all staring at me with serious faces. It stayed that way till Nudge broke the silence. (No surprise there)

"Max, that isn't a nice way to treat her considering she has to help us defeat Itex," she looked at me sternly.

"Ok, I'm sorry, I don't know what got into me guys, do you accept my apology B" I said trying to do my best at puppy dog eyes and failing miserably.

She smiled it was a smile that reminded me of one of the smiles that Fang barely gave me.

Creepy!!

B's POV:

She apparently thought she was a real class comedian cause she was laughing but no one else was. At least she apologized, I guess that's ok. I just never showed any one my wings before or than the white coats and Itex scientists.

I didn't mean to put the sadness in my smile, but apparently it showed. They all of suddenly came and gave me a group hug.. Note to self if I get to stay with them long enough talk to angel about reading my emotions.

All of them let go except Iggy and Fang. This apparently ticked Max off.

"I'm going to the store to get food and some clothes who wants to come with me"? she asked.

Angel and Gazzy went, but the three others stayed with me wanting to know more about who I am.

"Fine, but when I get you clothes you don't like don't complain", she said and took the siblings with her.

"Ok, when I read your file on the computer it said you had two abilities, we saw one and your wings, whats the other", Nudge started off by saying.

"Iggy is it ok if I use you as a subject it wont hurt, I promise" I asked.

"Sure", Iggy shrugged.

I took a mental picture of myself and put in the front to his Occipital Lobe. Then I put images of the hotel room and our school.

"Wow your beautiful" He smiled.

"What'd you do"? Fang asked.

" My other power is a more advanced version of Angel's, I can read minds take out memories, and insert more memories, that's how I convinced the family I am staying with to think that I was their real child", I said.

"Wow so are you going to teach Angel how to develop her powers like yours"? Nudge asked.

"No, actually its more like I cant, her power wasn't equipped to develop like mine" I said.

Fangs POV:

"Ok, so she's gorgeous what are we going to do, I have a problem of a jealous Max and you well are you still seeing Ella"? Fang asked Iggy.

"No, we agreed that it was just a little too weird because Max was her sister and I was technically considered as Max's half brother" Ig sadly smiled.

"Ok we'll even it out you can date her first, and if that don't work we can switch you can deal with Max for a little while while I try it with her, k" I laughed.

"Are you serious"? Iggy asked.

"Ya", I said.

I was laughing at myself I had never liked some one other than Max, but she was somehow mysterious and mesmerizing. I liked her and so did Ig so I'd figured since I had Max I would give Iggy first tries.

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