CLFFY, I like it. (:
Anyways, still the offer stands, if any of you want me to read your stories and review I will. So anyways I will pretty much be working on my grammar a whole lot more, sorry for the mess ups.
Here is the chapter-
Oh no, I quickly got up off the sofa and practically flew down stairs. I instantly wished I wouldn't have. I saw 2 men in black suits and my mom being dragged out of the house with a gun shot in here shoulder. She wasn't bleeding, I figured that much out. Iggy and Fangs dad was no were in sight, but I could see by the amount of blood around the room he was also dead.
I released the breathe that I didn't realize I was holding until then. I shuddered and felt the burn of tears behind my eyes. I've been thought worse, I reminded myself. But that was the past.
I heard foot steps behind me and whipped around to see Fang sprawling around in one of the ninja's arms. Iggy, not far behind was also captured.
Now there were 4 of them.
"Great." I muttered trying to keep my face emotionless. It worked.
I was suddenly taken from behind and drugged.
I don't remember much after that. I kind of blacked out. It felt weird, like floating and sleeping and dreaming all that the same time.
As I woke I could feel my tong thick in my mouth and all my muscles ached. I was in the back of an 18 wheeler. I could tell by the noises and constant beeping of the horn in a forceful hurry.
I propped my self up on my elbow and quickly realized that was a bad idea. I felt a sharp unbearable pain shoot up my right arm. I could tell it was broken. How the hell did that happen?
I looked about the dingy cargo hold. I spotted Fang and Iggy on either side of the trailer. Fang hasn't come though and I couldn't tell with Iggy.
I shifted my wait onto my left arm and pulled all the way up. What was that over in the corner? It seemed to be 3 little kids. It was to dark to tell for sure though.
I settled back down on the rust colored floor careful not to hit my right arm. All the pain was radiating from my wrist.
I would like to believe I broke it putting up a fight, but that's highly unlikely since I don't recall most of the pain or fighting. Damn them and there evil drugs.
I tried to go back to sleep but it wasn't short of impossible with my arm burning. What now it was burning? What the freak happened while I was out?
Nice short chapter.
I'll have a more interesting one tomorrow; I haven't had much time to write.
And I have kind of a writers block. UGH.
Anyways, Ideas would be good.
If you want, I'll listen to them and then twick them and put them in.
The flock is coming in REALLY soon, Don't worry.
