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JPOV
I stared in astonishment as the dirt bag kissed the back of Nessie's hand. It was beyond excruciating watching the love of my life being kissed by someone else. I never had felt such pain, it was ten thousand times worse than when Bella broke my heart by choosing the cold leech instead of me.
My fury grew and I'm pretty sure the heat of my frustration was radiated throughout the room.
Bella appeared next to me at once, being the one to notice my madness by almost crushing my own fingers into dust.
She gripped my arm to let me know that it was alright to calm down. I did not whatsoever calmed down though.
"Yes, I remember you pretty well," Nessie said as she blushed "Oh, this is Jacob, you probably remember him"
"Nahuel finally looked at me at once, "I think I remember yes, you never left her side, I see you still never do."
"No, she always seems to like my company"
"I take it your together then?" He asked looking at me directly for the first time. Nessie automatically snapped her face to look at me blushing pure red, and at the same time I said "No, we just like each other's company, we can't stay away from each other." I said with a a wide grin on my face.
"But, anyways that's not why I'm here at the moment, just came to drop Nessie off and check on you visitors" I looked at both Nahuel and Cindy, who still was intently looking at me, "I need to know what your eating preferences are, we have a treaty to follow..."
"Mm... yes we are half and half, but we feed of animals, we won't break any rule, you have our word" Nahuel answered me.
"How long will you be staying for?" I asked, not because Sam wanted to know, but because I needed to know how long he would be intruding between me and Nessie?
"We just dropped by for a few weeks, while we find a suitable place to stay at" He said smiling back at me.
"I see," A few weeks...A few weeks! That was an eternity to gain friendship from Nessie, but how could I be jealous? She's in love with me, I imprinted on her! She can't leave...She can't break my heart. Please, not again.
"Well, I have to go, it's late" I turned to Nessie and kissed her slightly on the cheek, "Bye Nessie, see you tomorrow early to go hunt." I said as I whispered in her ear and she blushed at the sound of my words.
"Bye Jake, goodnight"
I said good night to the visitors with a repugnant feeling in my stomach and then Bella, Rosalie had long left to go look for Emmet.
I walked out.
Ran out...
My heart about to burst open, how can this happen...again...
As I stormed off the house I immediately turned into a wolf forgetting to take my pants off and ripping them apart into shreds. I was furious; my heart was swollen from hatred and fear. I ran all night around the Cullen's keeping eye on Nahuel's every move, every sound, not trusting him. He didn't come here just because he needs a place to stay...No...He came here for Nessie.
keep reading and find out what happens to poor Jacob!