after a long hold i decided to continue this i hope you enjoy and please tell me if there is room for improvement

"Mario, wait for me!" Luigi ran after Mario avoiding all the baddies not noticing one of them who whispered "now… let's have fun". When Luigi got to the red plumber he couldn't breath and had to stop and take deep breathes before speaking. "Luigi where are you? I already got the key to the next door" .

Luigi felt like punching him, but had better stuff to do. "So…where are we?" The room was filled with lava and a bridge to the next room covered in a painting saying "Get out!"

"This looks to easy…something's not right…" Luigi mumbled as the looked around the room, to find any traps that could be lurking. Then, when he was looking, a breeze blew his hair into his face. Luigi turned around looking at the walls then shrugged.

"I swear there were no windows here…" he thought to himself.

"Mario do you feel we are being watched…" The green plumber said under his breathe

"You're such a baby, grow up" Luigi's eyes widened as he was surprised to what his brother said to him; he never acted in such a way.

"Ok… you don't have to be moody with me..." Luigi mumbled as he walked towards the door

"I'm sorry did I upset the baby?" He laughed as Luigi's grip got tighter.

"Just ignore him" he told himself.

Was Mario really saying all this stuff? Luigi didn't know. Mario never acted this way before.

"No wonder Daisy takes pity on you, I mean look at you. You're worthless!" This was beyond Luigi's limit.

"GET OFF MY BACK!" He screamed, as he ran towards Mario "Luigi… (turns around) what the crap!?!" Mario stood back as Luigi jumped on him… (End of flashback)

Mario left Luigi alone as he followed peach, the door slowly closed…

Chapter 2: an unexpected visit….

Luigi lay on the bed and closed his eyes "Finally a break…" he whispered as he relaxed with his shoes off…..

(Somewhere else) "*pant* got to get out of here…." The mysterious figure whispered wearing a black cloak with white linings on the zip, the golden brown sticked out telling that it was a girl "Crap. Bowser is gonna kill me…" She said as she jumped from tree to tree that was going to Bowser's castle, filled with guards of goombas, paratropas and shy guys "Damn its raining bad today" she thought as the rain gushed through her face.

"Halt! Who goes there?" One of the goombas at the front door questioned.

"Its me: Melody .Remember?" Melody whispered to the guard, the guards stepped back and opened the gates to Bowser's castle and inside was bullet bills at the ready and paratroopas, all hidden as the security was very tight, after what Mario did.

"You better go quick Bowser has been waiting for a while and is now ticked off" One of the goomba guards whispered to melody as the spy camera that bowser installed watched over them "thanks…" the thief said as she ran in.

"WHERE IS SHE!?!" Bowser said in a rage in his throne room, " my lord… I trust you she will come, if not I will go out for her and…." Kamak tried to comfort Bowser till he was interrupted as Melody ran in from the rain, Melody took her cloak off that was soaking wet and threw to Kamak "sorry im late you see…" " YOU WHERE SUPPOSED TO BE HERE AN HOUR AGO!" Bowser interrupted in a rage,

Melody could plainly see the rage he was in, if someone ticked him off the slightest they would properly been thrown out the window if they weren't careful "ok…. If you will be so kindly to let me Finnish…. Good, now I WAS coming but this stupid man in green saw me and almost got me with hot coffee" Melody calmly muttered, she soon got annoyed when she heard Kamak laughing at her….

5 minutes later:

Outside the castle Kamak was thrown off the cliff, Bowser looked out the window in shock while Melody was getting the glass out her hand "im ok! I only broke all my bones in my body…"

Kamak shouted as he tried to get up as he did fall 1000 feet to the floor…. "… never mind about him now… so lets see what you brought"

the koopa calmly whispered to Melody, "well I got this!" Melody held up Daisy's earrings as they shone bright in the sun,

"this took me ages to get a hold of" Melody smirked as she put back in her bag "now…. What's next?" Melody handed over the jewels she stole and waited for Bowser's reaction "hmmm good now wait till Kamak comes back then Ill tell you what next" Bowser smirked as he walked over to the throne and sat waiting.

Back in the mushroom kingdom…

Luigi went out of the house for a stroll around the town after Mario left with Peach. "it sure is boring here…" Luigi thought to himself while looking at the shops with one saying "get the latest 1-ups today" and other stuff that he didn't care for " LUIGI!" luigi felt a shock down his spine as he knew there was only one tomboyish girly scream it could be…. "I FOUND YOU!!!" Daisy screamed as she jumped on Luigi's back causing him to lose balance and fall on the floor "ouch…. Daisy! Get off of me!" luigi demanded causing to blush as he hid his face under his hat.

" wait… aren't you sad you lost your earrings?" the green plumber questioned her, for a quick second she didn't answer till she just gave a slight smile

"don't worry Mario has gone to find the thief so I know ill get it back, till then…" Daisy paused for a second thinking what to say in the right words till she gave a deep sigh

"till then im wearing these" Daisy spoke as she took out a pair of earrings that had a picture of a music note, it sparkled a bit after she put them on.

" I have to wear these thing unfortunately" the princess said with a moan as she looked up " hey Luigi?" Daisy whispered to Luigi, the atmosphere became damp cold as the wind blew through there faces, the tension worried Luigi "yea?" he slowly spoke "you saw them didn't you?" luigi stood in silence "how did she find out?!?" He stared at her for a good long minute speechless.

With Mario:

Mario went out with peach and the other guards to Daisy's room for evidence of the thief "oh im so sorry im late!" a girl rushed in a black, ragged top with baggy trousers, with a emerald flower earring…