So yeah- my first fanfic

I don't own Maximum Ride or anybody from the books-that's all James Patterson

Ch.3

Ari can be such a seven year old sometimes….

By now, Erasers had completely surrounded us. The only way we were gonna make it out, was to fight our way out. Luckily for me-my amazing Flock new what to do!

Angel and Nudge were paired of over to the right, already in position. Gassy and Ig had those looks on their faces, the ones before everything went caboom! I was up front, with Fang right beside me.

We were in formation and ready for action.Reminder to self: my Flock is so awesome.

" Wow Ari. It seems like the older you get, the dumber you seem to be!"

Even that kinda sad excuse for a comeback wiped the grin of his face.

" Oh, what's the matter? Wittle Ari is upset?"

Then it was on! Ari lashed out and came after me headfirst.

When will he learn?

I dodged to the side and planted a roundabout kick in his stomach. He didn't skip a beat though. Instead, he used the opportunity he had while I was glancing around for my flock to grab onto my ankle and pull me down as he jumped up.

Ari stood over me, his wolfish mouth breaking out into a grin. He had me pinned to forest floor by his boot.

" Who's the smarterer one now? HUH Max?"

"Me, cause you still don't know proper English. Guess they didn't program that into you're puny brain.",I gasped as I struggled against the heavy boot pressing on my throat.

He pressed harder until I could barely breath.

Come on Maximum, think! You're a relatively smart girl…

RELATIVELY smart-pshh says you!... Come on, come on! GRR, think Max! Think!...

I looked around my surroundings, searching for anything I could use. I saw Fang fighting against four erasers, steadily getting further and further away- but he can handle them, he's the strongest of us all.

I glared up at Ari-my sight getting blotchy. Then I saw it- the pressure point..Right between the legs.

Gotcha! This is gonna hurt!...

I pretended to thrash about, kicking and punching, and then BAM! Right were it hurts. Ari dropped to floor like a sack of potatoes. A worthless, hairy, dumb, annoying sack of potatoes.

I crawled up onto my hands and knees and tried to catch my breath.

Good Max. Now remember to use that brain of yours when your saving the world.

Oh, shut-up will you! You've been sayin that for what? Like a year! The world's not ending anytime soon...

I wouldn't be to sure...

What's THAT supposed to mean?! No answer- of course. Isn't it odd how that voice of mine is never around when I want it?

While Ari moaned and rolled around of the floor, I stood up and looked for my flock.Angel and Nudge were laughing their heads off as a bunch of erasers played ring-around-the-rosie, skipping in circles and throwing imaginary flowers.

I turned around to look for Gassy and Iggy wondering where on earth they were when..BOOM!

A flash of light and force that almost knocked me down.

I whipped around and spotted them coming out from behind a tree laughing and giving each other high fives, ten erasers lying motionless on the ground.

Where do they hide all those friggin bombs?...Wait-I don't wanna know!

The erasers seemed to be under control so I did a quick 360-looking around for anything suspicious-besides the whole erasers on the ground thing.Ari was still crying on the ground, when I realized…Where's Fang?

Fang's POV:

" CANADA!"

What!? This cannot be happening! I'm in freakin CANADA! How?? We were in Indiana….Max is gonna kill me!

I was in the middle of a highway-in Canada! I looked around-and toally freaked out! Well, as much as i freak out-which is only slightly raising my eyebrows.

There were at least 50 erasers-all dead-surrounding me.

I kept shaking my head and turning around, not believing my own eyes.

Who did this? How!? And How the heck, am I in friggin CANADA!? The last thing i remember is...is...Ari pinning Max down with his boot.

I seriously could not remember anything after that. Not flying, fighting, thinking, or seeing anything...it was like i had been in a coma or something and the world had gone on without me knowing it.

" I have to get back" i whispered to my self, and jumped-yes, i jumped. It wasn't my voice. It was echoey and husky and raspy and angry! For the first time, i looked down at my self-and couldn't stand what i saw.

I was an Eraser-fangs and everything.

Sooo??Review Please..