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I DO NOT OWN PERCY JACKSON AND THE OLYMPIANS!!!! ( I would want to though...) And thanks for the reviews! And for the favs and the alerts! Enjoy!!! Review please!! I would love to say thank you for the critictism. But, I would like to say that I have a plan behind it all. Read my profile for more explanation. If possible, read my other stories too! Enjoy! This is the last chapter for part 1!
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Chapter 7
Adara's P.O.V
This is really frightening. Being chased by hellhounds and snake women.
" Dara! I don't think we can outrun them! We should just fight them!"
" Fight against an army?! Are you crazy!!? We'll lose!"
" It's worth a try! We'll never outrun them!"
" Hold on! Let's think logically first!"
" Hey, if this is our last moment, I want to tell you that I forgot to tell you about Miss Lee being Hecate!"
" What?! And you choose now to tell me?!"
" Yea-!" I turned around to see that a hellhound pounced on him. I took out my pen, click it open and threw it at the hellhound, hoping to get its attention. And get its attention, I did.
"Nico! Behind you!" I shouted at him while fending off some hellhounds. They are really huge! I don't know how I killed the others before! In overall, we're doomed!
The hellhound pounced on me and would've killed me.
"Stop! She cannot die! Kill the boy!" A voice stopped the hellhound. I saw Kenneth there, looking superior. I would give anything to punch his pretty boy face out! I smirked… He likes me right? This plan should work.
I got up and strutted over to Kenneth.
" Do you really think you should kill ghost boy? I think it's best if you just let him live. Let him serve Lord Kronos."
" Yes, that would benefit us. Alright, don't kill the boy. Now come, Dara-" I stabbed him on his arms. He pushed me back, rage in his eyes. Then, he smirked.
" You really like him, do you? Hold her! I'll kill Nico myself." I glared at him and struggled. They need Nico for that big war against Kronos. I have to do something.
" Stop it! Don't got near him!" I think quickly. I did a back kick with all my strength and that confused the hellhounds for awhile. It gave me enough time to rush to Nico. I was so close when I was held back by those snake women. That's it, I officially hate snakes!
" Nice try, Dara. Now watch Nico die." My brain processed at fast as possible.
" I wish all of this never happened!" I shouted and the next thing I knew was blank.
