A/N Hey guys sorry for the long update I've just been dealing with issues so enjoy.
Also this chapter is starting out as a flash back. And is from First person POV.
These little brats have no idea what powers they are capable of. The unimaginable heights they could reach if only they would tap that potential. I have already been able to perform acts of power adults fear and won't even try.
And there he stood the reason of my misery a black haired kid. Who is that kid he is talking to he looks familiar blonde hair like that must mean he's a Malfoy. I'm guessing this is Draco such insolence probably big headed.
"Follow me please," said a woman who he was sure he would have problems with.
I walk into the massive hall the ceiling looks like outside must be a enchantment. Yes that mud-blood just confirmed it annoying but could become useful in the future.
"Harry Potter," the woman cried out.
The boy seemed scared but slowly he walked up there. He argued with the hat asking not to be in Slytherin is a insult. But nevertheless let's see what happens.
"Gryffindor," the hat called out finally.
"Heh," I laughed to myself. The disgraceful house he stands no chance he just has luck. That's the only reason he destroyed him.
"Brock Talley," finally time to show them who I am. As I walk up there everyone looks upon me with fear even the headmaster.
"Good," I thought to myself I have them right where I want them. I placed the hat upon my head and waited. Something was wrong this was taking to long it should know where to put me right away. That's what happened with my dad he told me so.
"Gryffindor," it called out. What did it just say I thought to myself there was no way I heard that right Gryffindor but why. I didn't want it to look obvious so I got up and walked to my seat with mud-bloods and blood traitors.
The headmaster stood up to talk but I paid no attention to what he had to say nothing made since. Why this house there was no reason for it I don't belong here. Malfoy better get that look off of his face before I take it off myself.
Suddenly food appeared like I expected it to but I was not hungry to much turmoil going on inside of me. After a while everyone finished and we were dismissed to bed. I followed this redhead who I could tell thought of himself way to much and followed the rules all the time. But he is very pliable though most people like him are you just have to twist the truth and facts most of the time.
Finally we reached a portrait that contained a fat lady I'm guessing this is the entrance to the tower all we need to know is the password. The redhead told us not to tell anyone else that we could be severely punished and could be expelled. I thought to myself why would I want to punish anyone by making them come all the way up those wretched stairs. We all crawled through the portrait and emerged into a crimson room I didn't wait to look around I just walked up the stairs to my room.
All of our stuff was already up there I didn't wait for my roommates to come up I fell on the bed and drifted away.
I know it's not much but more than what I have been giving you again sorry I haven't updated.
Please review for me because I need help with my punctuation and sentence structure.