Sweet Seduction
After quite a bit of thinking, I have decided to redo the last two chapters. That twist sounded good when I thought about it, but now that I put it in it sounded a little much.
"Girl's are pure evil" Willy said, turning from the window.
"Did she see you?" Charlie asked, coming out Gabriela's door.
"I think that little girl saw me!" Willy whispered, ducking out of sight.
Charlie sighed. "You really didn't have to look in the window Mr. Wonka"
"I had too..."
"Mr. Wonka? What are you talking about?"
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"Do you want to go out and see?" Jessy asked.
"Dad! There's a creepy person at the window!" Gabriela called.
Suddenly, there came a rushing of feet and down came Dad, holding a baseball bat.
"I will handle this!" he shouted, opening the door and running outside. After a moment or two, the girls heard a loud crash.
Jessy rushed to the door to see what happened.
"Is that elevator made of glass?" Jessy asked.
"What? Lemme see!" Gabriela said. She groaned when she saw it was.
"Willy Wonka" Gabriela grumbled. "I'm going to give him a piece of my mind"
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"And we didn't want to hurt you" Willy was trying to explain to Gabriela's Dad.
Suddenly, Gabriela came out the door. "Get away from my house!" she growled.
"Oh, perfect timing!" Charlie said. "Willy wanted to give you something, Gabby"
Gabriela frowned. "What's that?"
"Do I have to give it to her?" Willy pleaded to Charlie.
"What is it?" Gabriela's Dad asked. Willy sighed.
"Here!" Willy said, handing Gabriela a gold envelope.
There was a long silence then,
"Can we go Charlie?" Willy asked.
"Let's go!" Charlie responded.
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Gabriela came back inside with her Dad.
"The nerve of him, coming here!" Gabriela muttered, as she ran up the stairs.
"What's that in your hand?" Jessy called.
"Nothing!" Gabriela responded.
She ran upstairs and threw the envelope on her desk.
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"Goodnight Jessy" Gabriela shouted.
"Goodnight Gabby! What's in the letter?"
"You were just dying to throw that in, weren't cha?" Gabriela asked.
"Yes!"
"I will tell you later" Gabriela said, turning off her light.