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Disclaimer: I don't own Home and Away or Martha or Jack. I am just borrowing them for this story.
I'm trying to explain what's happening before she goes to school, and meets Jack. And in the last chapter, you probably know who nearly knocked her over… If you don't know, it will be explained later on in the chapters. Please submit a review, because it will help me to write the story. If you want something to happen in this story, just say something in your review and I'll try to put it in.
No ones POV
The diner was pretty quiet for a lunch time; there were only a few locals in for lunch. Alf was walking into the diner to go to his apartment, and saw Martha sitting eating her breakfast. When Alf walked in the diner, Martha quickly spotted him.
"Granddad" Martha's voice was heard calling out to her granddad.
"Hi Martha, are you having your lunch?"
"Nop… I'm having breakfast, I just woke up about one hour ago" she told him.
"O.k. well do you want to see Sally later this afternoon, when you are ready?"
"Yeah sure, sounds good"
"That's good"
Martha's POV
I walked up to my apartment. It sounded weird to call it my apartment, because I had never moved before in my life. When I got to my bedroom, I went to have a shower and got dressed. I wanted to dress nice, because I was meeting my principle. Granddad told me her name was Sally, I hope she's nice. I put on a nice light pink dress on, and I put on some make up on. I never really went outside, without putting my makeup on.
"I'm ready" I told him.
We went in his white Ute, to Sally's house. He told me she was a really nice person, and you would love her. When we arrived, I knocked on the door. I heard someone coming down the stairs, and open the door.
"Hello, you must be Martha, my names Cassie, Sally is my foster mum" she told me.
"Hi Cassie" my grandfather said to her. He must know like know everyone, everyone I have meet they have known of him and are friends with him. "Where's Sally"
"She's upstairs, I'll just go and get her"
"O.k. Thank you" I told Cassie.
When Cassie came back down, Sally was following and saw me.
"Hello, you must be Martha, welcome to Summer Bay" Sally said welcoming.
"Thank you; it is a really nice place" I told her politely.
We talked for a really long time, by the time we finished it was around dinner time. The next day, I would be going to Summer Bay High, I was sort of scared, I hated starting new schools, trying to make new friends, even though I have never moved schools except to go to high school in year seven. In my old school, I had a nice group of friends. I was hoping that at this school I would find some nice friends too.
THE NEXT DAY - MONDAY
OMG, I was my first day at my new school, I hope Cassie goes to that school, she seemed really nice. But I think she will be popular, at least she looks it. Hopefully that jerk that I bumped into yesterday doesn't go to this school, and I hope I never see him again. He was so mean.
I got up, and put my new school dress on, that Sally gave me yesterday. Alf told me yesterday that if I wanted to, I could walk to school, because it wasn't far away, and most of the teenagers who go to Summer Bay High just walk if they live close. So I decided to walk, and maybe find some friends on my way to school.
MARTHA'S FIRST CLASS AT SUMMER BAY HIGH
I walked into the class room, mostly everyone had sat down. I saw Cassie, and she waved to me to tell me to sit next to her. I walked over and I was about to sit down and I saw the guy who I bumped into yesterday. I didn't want to get angry, so I just went to sit down. I could NOT wait to the end of the day.
At recess, I sat next to Cassie in the lunch room. She introduced me to her friends.
"This is Rachel and Mattie"
"Hi guys, nice to meet you"
"So have you met any cute guys yet?" Mattie asked me.
"Not really" I said to her.
They all gave me thier MSN Addies, and wrote them on a piece of paper.
Mattie.xx
Swweet.Rach.01
Cass.Loves.You
"Thank you guys, I will try to be on tonight"
I went home that night, and said hello to granddad.
"How was your day at your new school?" he asked me.
"It was good, I made some nice friends. Cass, Mattie, and Rach. You know Cassie don't you. We went to her house yesterday. She is so nice" I told granddad.
"That is really good, that you are fitting in here"
"Yeh it is, I'm going to go to my room, and go on msn, and I'll come out later when tea's ready"
I went to my room and logged onto msn. I added my friends I made today. About five minutes later I found out that all my friends were on, Mattie, Rach, and Cassie.
Cass.Loves.You Says: Heyy Martha! How was ur day?
Sweet.Martha Says: It woz gud.
Cass.Loves.You Says: Dats good.
Swweet.Rach.01 is added to the Conversion.
Swweet.Rach.01 Says: Hey guys
Sweet.Martha Says: Hey Rach
Swweet.Rach.01 Says: You copied my name, well sort of.
Sweet.Martha Says: I'm sorry.
Swweet.Rach.01 Says: That's fine; I'm just joking around with you.
Sweet.Martha Says: O.k. lol
Cass.Loves.You Says: So… You must like someone … there are heaps of cute guys in our class.
Sweet.Martha Says: O.k. I must admit, I saw a jerk I liked at the diner yesterday, but we bumped into each other, and he was sooo mean… And he is in our class too.
Swweet.Rach.01 Says: Really. That's so sweet. So which guy in our class, describe him for us, and we might know who he is.
Sweet.Martha Says: O.k. He has dark brown hair, brown eyes. Why does it matter I don't like him. He was a jerk.
Mattie.xx is added to the Conversion.
Mattie.xx says: Hey guys.
Swweet.Rach.01 Says: Guess what?
Mattie.xx says: What ?
Swweet.Rach.01 Says: Martha likes someone smiles
Sweet.Martha Says: NOOO... I don't. He is a JERK
Mattie.xx says: Really?
Okay. That is my longest chapter yet! If you want me to continue you better review. Even if you tell me its good. or bad.
Jacks in the story now. If you havent guessed already.
Please help me continue. By letting me know which one of these is best to use for the next chapter:
a. Martha and Jack hate each other. Jack introduces himself. and says he is sorry. and tells her that his name is Jack. And he was in a bad mood the other day at the diner.
b. Martha is failing her english class. and her teacher wants Jack to help her with it.
c. Both A and B.
d. Something else. You choose.
HELP ME.
