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Westchester Mall
July 29-Saturday
2:31 P.M.
Saying goodbye was so hard. Goodbye to her celeb friends, goodbye to her luxuries, and goodbye to acting, well just for a while. Claire Lyons realized she was resilient. She wasn't ready to adjusting to not acting and she couldn't recover from the thought that she will never see her friends again. And all because of what?
Some stupid writers are going on strike because they want bigger pay. Just pay them dammit, how hard could that be?! Without her show, she was in a crappy situation. And Claire Lyons didn't do crappy situations. Nobody wanted a celebrity who depended on a T.V. show to keep her fame alive. So since the writers were on strike, Claire was on break.
She pushed open the Westchester Mall double doors, dressed to the nines. Her black Biker Jimmy Choos clunked noisily against the floor as she walked inside. She decided to pair it with her dark-wash Rockstar True Religion jeans and a white Alice Olive mini sundress. She completed her look with her favorite Gucci sunglasses concealing her face, black Ricky Ruched Crocodile Bag, and makeup from Sephora.
Claire walked past the food court, crinkling her perfect nose at the Candy Shoppe and Cinnabon. She couldn't buh-lieve she used to eat and ENJOY that crap, it did nothing for your figure. She stepped into the Coach Factory, that Heritage Stripe Tote was calling her name.
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Westchester Mall
Dolce and Gabbana Store
"Mass, can we puh-lease go to Bebe next?" Caitlyn whined.
Massie rolled her eyes, although she had known Caitlyn for nearly four years, she was still very annoying.
"Wait, wait! I'm trying to find a damn dress!" Massie snapped, rolling her eyes.
"What do you think?" Dylan exclaimed, hopping out the dressing room. She was wearing a Dolce and Gabbana cap-sleeved, that hugged her figure.
"Muy bonita!" Alicia exclaimed. Massie nodded her head in agreement and turned to skim the dresses again.
"Oh, this?" Massie exclaimed, as well, holding out a khaki ruched Dolce and Gabbana dress.
"Really chic and cute." Caitlyn offered before Alicia answered.
Alicia thought she would sound ultra stupid if she said, yeah. What else could she
say? So, she kept her mouth shut.
"Nah, I don't like it." Massie said, putting it back.
"Why not?"
"It's only 1,850 dollars." Massie offered.
"What! So cheap." Alicia sneered.
"So, you're ready?" Caitlyn asked.
"Yup, let's go girls." Massie ordered. Massie walked out the store with Alicia on her right, Dylan and Caitlyn on her left. They marched into BeBe.
"Emagawd!" Massie and Caitlyn both yelled, reaching for the same dress, a gorgeous Blanca halter dress in light pink.
"You weren't planning on buying it, were you?" Massie snarled, tilting her head to the side. Caitlyn eyed the dress, it was too cute and perfect to give up, but she couldn't fight Massie. She removed her hand from the dress and sighed.
"Nope, it's all yours." She squeaked as Massie pulled the dress off the rack and handed it to the saleslady.
"Find it in a size 0 and charge it with, ooh, these shoes, size 6." Massie said, giving her the pair of shoes.
"Right away, miss!" The saleslady exclaimed. Caitlyn watched, a mixture of jealousy and anger lit up in her eyes, as Massie bought the dress. Why did she always have to have everything? It was so damn annoying.
"To Marc Jacobs?" Massie asked, the Pretty Committee nodded their heads in agreement. They all sauntered over to Marc Jacobs and started to skim.
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Westchester Mall
Marc Jacobs.
She was in serious pain. Carrying 2 Coach bags, 3 Ralph Lauren Bags, 1 Louis
Vuitton bags, and 4 Juicy Couture bags caused some serious damage to her hands. She stepped into Marc Jacobs, searching for a place to drop all her shopping bags and take a break. She skimmed through the tops, picking out a Luna top.
"Mass, what do you think about this?" a voice called. Claire turned around at the familiar voice and saw Alicia standing there, holding a red Kitty dress.
"LEESH?" Claire exclaimed. Alicia turned around and squinted at Claire as if she didn't recognize her.
Claire lifted up her sunglasses, and gave Alicia a small wave.
"Eh. My. Gawd. Kuh-laire?" Alicia gasped, dropping the pretty dress to the floor.
"What do I think of what, Lee-ehmagawd!" Massie gasped, slapping her hand to her heart.
"Mass?" Claire said weakly.
"CLAIRE?" Massie exclaimed, hugging her tightly. Dylan rushed over at the commotion and gasped as well, but she mad no effort to hug Claire.
"Dyl?"
"Kuh-laire?"
"WHAT is all this commotion?" a voice exclaimed.
Massie turned and bit her lip. Claire looked at her with a curious look. Why did the new girl look like a knockoff of Claire, with her white blond hair and bright blue eyes?
Caitlyn stepped in front of Dylan and Alicia, with the exact same top as Claire had in her hand. "Hey, who are you?"
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