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Sorry it took so long….. Guess some are kinda pissed….. Probably not too many though…. And if you haven't figured out who Ruby is modeled after, well you're an idiot! Well here it is!!!

Chapter 12: The Killer Revealed!

"Brian…." Whispered Annie, "I'm so sorry…"

"Why, it's not me you should be sorry for, you should be sorry for the guy who did this to her!!"

"Why?" asked Derek.

"Because when I get hold of him, he'll be sorry he ever messed with her!!"

Yes! Revenge!

I'm not usually one to agree with him, but he's right. You must make him pay!

"Well what'doya know, both my Inner Guardian and Demon agree, revenge is good." What about you Kyuubi?

Well, I don't care for this girl like you do, but if someone had done sometng this terrible to me. I'd kill'em.

"Well?" asked Derek, "What did he say?"

"He said I should kill him."

"Hmmm… Good plan." Stated Annie

"Can we just get off the subject?!" I yelled, "This is none of your guys business! So stop talking about it! I'm goin' to train…" And I left.

Two Days Later

Welcome! To the third round of the Great Shinobi Tournament!! Came Perry's voice over the loud speaker. "Our first competitors, will be… Mordred Holmes, from Massachuttsets U.S, versus, Oskuld Barn from Sweden!

"Ready? Fight!" boomed the proctor.

"Are you ready? To die!" shouted Mordred.

"Wha-" a very confused Oskuld managed to get out before he was cut off.

Mordred sealed quickly (meaninfg he performed hand seals) and shouted, "Forbidden style! Essence Theif Jutsu!" and jammed his glowing hand into the boy's gut.

Meanwhile up in the stands, I heard him yell his jutsu. "What? What did he call that jutsu!? HE'S THE ONE WHO HURT RUBY!!!" I yelled. Suddenly I could a red hot anger sweep over me, and a great power erupt within. Crimson and black chakra swirled around me as black scales sprouted and my eyes turned red.

"Quick!" shouted Annie, "Derek! Use the jutsu!" and her and Derek both yelled out, "Chakra Net Jutsu!" and two nets of chakra wrapped around me pulling me down to the ground.

"LET ME GO!!" I shouted as the net began to tear and rip.

"Quick! Terra! Use the seal!" Annie shouted.

Terra ran up and slapped a piece of paper on my forehead, and as she did, the scales began to dissapear, and my eyes returned to their blue-grey color, and the power began to retract into the far corners of my mind.

"NO!" I shouted, "You've let him get away with it again!" I said as tears (real man can cry without caring who sees it) began to drip down my face. "He's going to hurt more innocent people!"

"Brian," started Annie.

"NO! Shut up!" I shouted, "I coul've killed him!I could have saved many innocent lives!" I cried, "And now he's going to get away with it."

"Brian!" shouted Terra, "If we wouldn't have stopped you, you would have been disqualified, if you stay in the tournament, you could have a chance to fight him, and then you can give him what he deserves."

"Alright, then I can't lose, I swore to Ruby, on my life, that I would make him pay, and I WILL!"

"Well, you'd better get stronger then," said Derek, "Or he'll take you out just like thatkid."

"You're right," I said, "I'd better get started."

"Well you can't now, your up next!"

Next Match! Brian Gallagher from South Dakota U.S.A, versus, Tobi Arnolds from Edmonton Canada.

"Ready? Fight!" yelled the proctor.

"Tobi is a goo-" he was cut off before he finished by a kick to the head.

"Its nothing personal, but I have to win." I said.

"Oh, it's okay, this isn't personal either." He said as he disappeared.

"Wha? Where'd he g-" I started, but I was cut off by an open palmed hit to the stomach.

"Tobi has good aim." He said.

"No, Tobi doesn't," I said "You hit the wrong one." And with those words the clone poofed into smoke."Hm…. Where'd he go?" Tobi scratched his head, "Oh well, I'll get him out." He quickly sealed, and slammed his hand to the ground. "Expulsion Jutsu!" and with that, I flew out of the ground.

"Well, looks like this'll be fun."

"Yes!" he said cheerfully, "This will be fun." Then , he lunged at me, fist held back in a fist ready to punch me.

I quickly sealed. "Under World Guardian Spikes Jutsu!" as I said this, my hair grew hard, and spiky, and encased my body.

As his fist connected, he cried out in pain. He pulled his fist back, and noticed needle-like hairs, stuck in his knuckles. "Wow, nice jutsu."

"Thanks, now check this." And I punched him, sending him into the wall, I quickly sealed, "Fire Style: Flaming Pitch Jutsu!" and I threw a ball of fire at him, as it connected with his chest, he disappeared, and in his place was a flaming log. "Where the hell, did you get a log?" I shouted.

"I brought it." He said as he appeared behind me, he put me into the full nelson, and jumped into the air, he flipped around, and began to spin, "Super Special Tobi Style Lotus!" he shouted.

"No way!" I shouted as I flipped him so his back was facing the ground. "Tobi is a losing boy, now take this bitch!" and we slammed into the ground, him facing down.

"Match over! Winner, Brian Gallagher!"

"Now, it's time to train."

There! Chapter 12 done! Hope you liked it, now I'm going to explain a couple things, Ruby is modeled after Hinata, Mordred is King Aurthors evil son, Holmes is a murder who tortured and killed an estimated 230 people. Oskuld means innocence, and Barn means child. Tobi is like Tobi from Naruto, and I think he says 'Tobi is a good boy'. There, now everones up to speed. Now Annie, I expect those chapters soon.