Hi guys i'm so ashamed that you had to wait that long. I was stupid and i'm sorry
Even tho i know i won't be able to update sooner i'm in college now and it took me 20 days to find spare time and write little sentences
and if you put those together bam after 20 days you have a chapter
i'm sorry T.T
Another thing it seems that someone put my fanfic into a club with the most hideous fanfictions ever. I would like to know what i'm lacking.
For my fans if i have them XD please be honest and tell every single mistake i'll make sure to correct them and use the hints wisely when i write my next chapter.
This person put my story up without telling me why i think thats cowardly behaviour. So i encourage you to tell me what i'm lacking and i'll try to make up for it
last thing. As you know this is a crossover with Elfen lied not the easiest anime to write with i'm doing my best. And my fanfic won't be as bloody as Elfen Lied... i hope i have no intentions of making it bloody O.o
"Tohru? Could you please tell me what's going on?" Kyo looked at his wife with concerned eyes.
Tohru checked on Hinata making sure she was sound asleep. "They are after our daughter."
Kyo's eyes filled with terror. "But… why… What did she do I mean as far as I know she hasn't done anything wrong."
"I know, but you know, those horns on her head they do have some function to it. It helps her with having some kind of power. It could be best described as a sixth sense."
"What kind of power? " Kyo gazed at Tohru as if she had made the funniest joke in the world.
"Stop staring at me like that! It's true! What else could explain her strange behaviour? Walking at the age of 6 or 7 months, talking like a grown up woman even when she hadn't even reached the age of two. It explains it all." Tohru counted down all the strange things on her fingers.
"Tohru, can't it be that our daughter is just smart? I mean she has my brains…" He grinned.
Tohru grimaced. "If she had your brains she would have attacked someone by now already. I'm glad that she inherited most of my features." Tohru grinned back at Kyo. "But please let's stop this conversation I don't want to talk about the fact that our daughter could be a monster."
"Then go to sleep, you must be exhausted. I'll drive somewhere and I'll stop when I think I've reached a good spot okay?" Kyo smiled sweetly at Tohru
"Thanks hun, I love you." Tohru kissed Kyo's lips.
"I love you too; now go too sleep. "
Nobody seemed to notice the tears that fell from Hinata's eyes. And neither did anybody hear her muttering. "I'm a monster?"
-- () 3 years later () --
Slowly she walked trough the house, careful not to wake her parents. She shot up to the ceiling when she heard something but regained her cool again after a few seconds. She was scared to death because of what she had done. She had to tell someone. She couldn't live with this. But then suddenly she heard something, this time it was for real. Not just a sound, no someone was walking. And if he or she kept walking, it would be heading toward her. This was the end of her happy life. What she had done was inexcusable and she would have to face the consequences. At this moment the sound was behind her; it came to a stop. She waited for the accusing words.
"Hinata what are you doing here? You should be in bed." Her father sounded concerned.
'What the heck?' Hinata's mind worked at top speed trying to process what her father just had said. 'He should be pissed beyond madness at the moment.' Hinata decided to take a chance and ask her father. "Didn't you check my room isn't that how you found out I wasn't in bed?"
"No should I have checked it?" Kyo frowned. "What is going on?"
"Nothing really dad nothing…" Hinata felt a teardrop sliding down her face. "This is strange, why am I crying?"
"Hinata, honey? You know that you can tell me, what is it? Did you have a bad dream?" Hinata nodded. "What was it about?"
Hinata threw herself in her father's arms. "Dad I'm so sorry. I didn't know that I was doing it. Not until I woke up. I'm really really sorry." Hinata sobbed in Kyo's arms wetting his shirt.
"What did you do?" Kyo was getting beyond worried.
"I – I - I used them dad I used them." Hinata sobbed some more.
And then Kyo finally understood what was wrong. She had used her hands. But what for what had she done. Kyo stood up with Hinata in his arms.
"Dad what are you doing."
Kyo didn't respond. He just kept walking towards her bedroom.
"Dad please don't be mad." Hinata nearly begged.
Kyo put her on her feet and went inside the room, what he saw there was a huge shock to him. They were everywhere tiny prints of hands all over the wall, the bed, the chair just everywhere. "How did this happen just overnight? You didn't have them yesterday." He walked up to Hinata and grabbed her by the arms. "HOW DID THIS HAPPEN"
"I don't know I really don't. I did it in my sleep I didn't want to do this."
Kyo heard Tohru coming down the hall.
"Dad you are hurting me." Another stream of tears came down.
Kyo let go. "I'm sorry."
"I notice that your temper still hasn't improved darling." Tohru entered the room trying to lighten the mood.
"MOM I'm so sorry." Hinata walked up to her mother. "What I did was inexcusable I'm so sorry."
"You didn't kill anyone so, as far as I'm concerned, you still kept your promise. Of course it's shocking to find out that your hands have already developed but we knew this would come." Tohru smiled and hugged her daughter. "Everything is going to be alright kiddo."
Hinata hugged her mother back
Tohru took her daughters hand. "Come on I need to show you something."
Hinata and her mother sat down and Tohru grabbed a piece of paper, which said.
Saa wasuremashou sono mirai ga
Mata chinurarete yuku nante
Namanurui kaze toguro wo maitara
Sore ga tabun aizu...
Nukedashitette nukedashitette
Kanashi sugiru unmei kara
Anata wa naraku no hana ja nai
Sonna basho de
Sakanaide sakanaide
Karame torarete ikanaide
Otomo naku tobikau toki no kakera
Hinata read it thorough fully. "What should I do with this mom?"
"I want you to know that this is what you are. This describes you perfectly. You may seem dangerous and scary. But from the inside you are just a normal girl. Whose desires are to be loved and have friends?" Tohru gestured Kyo to sit down. "And now we will translate this beautiful piece as a family.
"Okay mom" Hinata smiled again.
A rough thirty minutes later Hinata smiled proudly with the translation. "Are you sure that this describes me?"
Her father and mother nodded. "We are positive that this is you.'
Hinata looked down at the song that was said to fit her profile. To be honest she loved the song already.
Come, let us forget about the future,
Ending up stained in blood again.
If the soft wind coils up,
that is probably a sign.
Break free. Break free.
From your heart-wrenching fate.
You are not a flower in hell.
Don't blossom in such a place.
Don't blossom there, don't blossom there.
Don't get entangled.
Fragments of time flutter about without a sound.
Of course not everything fitted exactly but the most did.
She smiled at her parents. "Thank you, mommy, and daddy. I'm sorry that I scared you." She stood up with the paper in her hands. "I'm going to sleep again."
Tohru patted her head touching her horns. "I love you Hinata. Don't forget that."
Kyo smiled. "So do I, I'm sorry that I hurt you."
"That's okay dad." Hinata ran upstairs entering her room and closing it behind her. She sighed, while thinking. "I'm really a monster. All they see are the prints of my hands what I saw was far scarier." She stepped into her bed leaving the paper on the nightstand and switching off the lights.
"Good night" She mumbled continuing the dream where it had left off; going back in to the pitch black surrounding of darkness. One day she would make a mistake and that one day would mean the death sentence to her. If killing was already a desire, how could she withstand it for her entire life?
Little did the Sohma family know; a profiler had followed them for the past years; that had now seen that Hinata's vectors had fully developed.
The man picked out a phone of his jacket. "Kurama? Bando here… yeah I know that I shouldn't call unless there is a emergency, But this is important news… The kids vectors have fully developed she's dreaming about them… Killing her? But she seemed to be able to not kill her parents; I don't think that immediate actions are necessary… Okay then I'll proceed with the orders first thing tomorrow.
And then he hung up his phone, sliding the phone back into his jacket and walking into an unknown direction; knowing he had to return tomorrow.
Please tell me you liked it i worked very hard on it:)
hmm the usual stuff R & R please :)
and be honest to give building critisism if necessary i can use them better than flames.
the song btw in the chapter belongs to Higurashi no naku no koro ni kai it's a beautifull song and i advice you to listen to it it's amazing!
See you next time ...
Essi signing off
