Hi everyone,
you probably forgot about me and my story but guess what i'm here to make you remember
i'm back and i'm back to stay (altho i will update really slow because my life outside fanfiction is busy as heck)
For one i don't care about reviews anymore. Read it, review, don't review it doesn't matter to me i'm getting my idea out and that's whats important
someone very wise told me that and i would like to thank him or her.
I didn't get this chapter betad because my beta didn't come online so if there are mistakes deal with it english isn't my first language it's not perfect i'm not perfect nobody is.
and if you are really annoyed by the fact that my grammar sucks get me contacted with a proffesional beta. That is registered here as a beta. But still i'm sticking to my own beta
because i love her to bits. But it wouldn't hurt if it got betad twice.
And last, this is dedicated to yukisadorablegirlfriend, my beta kellie chan and the person that told me that it was getting my idea out that was important not the reviews again thanks.
I hope you enjoy.
oh really the last
My story doesn't stick to every rule that there is about disclonius i made up my own rules too that's what it is about in fanfic getting your own idea's out. Just so you know.
i'm being a little mean because its 11:30 PM and i'm tired :P deal with it i'm a cranky writer:P atm
"Mom, dad, look it is white outside. What is that? Mom, dad come on wake up" Hinata was overflowing with excitement.
Kyo opened his eyes and turned, facing his daughter. "That is snow honey, you go get dressed we will be there in a second. If I can wake up your mother. If we are not downstairs yet you can go outside on your own."
"Really? Can I go alone? Okay dad see you in a sec" Hinata ran to her room hoping her mom wouldn't wake up very soon because she loved the idea of independence.
"Do not go too far!" Kyo smiled, he was happy that his daughter was her cheerful self again after last days events. He turned towards his wife. "Tohru, love you should wake up. Your daughter has found out about the snow."
Tohru mumbled. "I do not want too, today she is your daughter, I am sleepy."
Kyo grinned. "If you do not come out of the bed this instant… I will tickle you!"
Tohru groaned and sat up. "Are there not any other threats you can use? You know I am ticklish. It is mean when you threaten with that!."
"Damn you are cute when you look at me like that." Kyo Hugged her. "But still it is cuter when you burst out in laughter when I tickle you." Kyo started tickling her.
Tohru started screaming. "Oh god no Kyo haha, stop haha, it" Tohru tried to smack him but Kyo had her hand is one hand and was tickling with the other. So instead she sat up a little higher and kissed him passionately on his lips. And it seemed to work because Kyo had stopped tickling her.
After a few moments Kyo broke the kiss. "God Tohru you got to stop with this kind of things, before I cannot hold myself anymore and we engage ourselves into some activities that are not appropriate for this story because this is a T rated story.
Tohru blushed. "I did not mean too but what can it hurt? Hinata is outside playing in the snow. So why should we not?
"It sounds so very tempting right now but honey our daughter is outside playing by herself, what if she gets hurt? "Kyo snickered by the thought, his Hinata was a tough one she would not get hurt even if some bazooka's were fired at her.
Tohru pouted. "But, but."
Kyo was not able to bare with the pouting face she was making. "God woman you are driving me insane." He said with a smile and he kissed her again and they engaged into the activities that I will not write down because this is an T rated story.
---With Hinata---
Hinata was playing with the snow thrilled by the fact that it was so cold. She started making sculptures with it. Wondering when her parents would come downstairs. Neither of the three saw the strange figure coming through the trees.
When the strange man stood still before Hinata she finally felt that someone was standing before her and looked up. "Hello sir, can I help you?"
The strange man spoke with a deep voice. "Tell me little girl… how old are you?"
Hinata smiled because she wasn't used too this sudden curiosity nobody that she did not know showed any interest in her. And it was coming from a stranger. "I'm five years old sir, may I ask how old you are or that impolite coming from a girl my age?" She obviously took over the talking coming from her mother.
The man grinned. "Not at all. I'm 25 years old." The man acted serious again. "Tell me, how is it even possible that a girl your age talks so polite as if she is a grown up and make such fine snow sculptures as if you are doing it a lot more, while there hasn't been snow in 7 years in this country." He grinned some more.
"I do not know sir, I am sorry." Hinata was getting scared because she felt that something was really fishy about this strange man. Did she hid her horns? She felt on her had but made it look like she was scratching her head. Yes she had hidden them with ribbons. Too bad that the man was onto her.
"Whatcha hiding underneath those ribbons?"The man came a step closer.
"He has an accents so he is not from here." Hinata thought while backing away from him. "I am hiding nothing sir, if you excuse me now. I have to get inside. I am really not allowed to talk to strangers."
The man laughed. "You are not going anywhere little brat."The man was retrieving something from his pocket.
Hinata backed away some more trying to calculate her chances if she were to run. "What the heck is he getting from is pockets why did this happen?" The man was making her nervous.
The man took his hand out of his pocket revealing a gun. And then in the blink of an eye a shot was fired. And an ear damaging scream could be heard.
--- With Tohru and Kyo ---
Kyo was putting on his socks at the time that the shot was fired. "Oh my GOD, Hinata!" Kyo ran to the window but saw something neither him or the shooter would have expected. The shooter was squirming with pain as he held onto the wound where his left arm had been. Hinata seemed to have chopped it off. And Hinata was about to dismember him even further. But he did not understand why because this man obviously did not shoot her since there was no gun to be seen. "No Hinata do not do it!"Kyo ran downstairs with Tohru following after him very closely.
The man spit out some blood. "Kid I gotta give you this one, you know how to handle the element of surprise I did not see that one coming."
Her mother screamed. "Hinata the promise!"
"Hinata snap out of it!" Kyo's voice followed soon after.
Hinata focused on her parents realizing what she had done. "Daddy I am so sorry." Hinata started crying reverting to her 5 year old self again. And she ran towards her mothers arms. "Mom I am so sorry, I broke the promise how could I." It obviously did not matter at this point that this man had tried to shoot her she still felt guilty about breaking the promise.
Tohru hugged her little girl happy that she was not hurt. "Shh honey you did not break it yet completely. The man is still alive. But still what you did is unforgivable. You are facing some serious consequences here young lady."
Hinata defended herself. "But mom he was trying to shoot me." Hinata's sentence got cut off by her father's voice.
"No such nonsense anymore, you are going inside"
"Dad he tried to shoot me why will you not believe me!" Hinata shot him a killing glare.
"I do not see a gun so you must have misheard it. I think it was a hunter." Kyo shot one of his killer glares too.
"No it was not he hid it he is a professional he knows about my kind!" Hinata screamed.
"You will not make any more accusations go inside! I will speak with you later." Kyo walked towards her attacker.
"I hate you, you stupid father. I hate you so much you do not even believe. I wish that, that man had killed me!" Hinata ran inside.
"Tssk." Kyo was too angry to be reasonable. And walked towards the man. "I am really sorry for this but I do not think that, that will make up for what my daughter has done. Can I do something? Take you to a hospital?"
"No but I do have a tip for you." The man said
"Tell me" Kyo replied
"Next time believe your daughter." And the man aimed his gun towards Kyo and shot him.
"DAD!" Hinata screamed. "HOW COULD YOU. HE WAS MY FATHER!"Hinata screeched.
"Oh wait I forgot you have a mother too." He also pointed his gun towards Tohru. "Not for long I think." He faced Tohru. "Sorry madam It is nothing personal you are just kinda in my way." And with that said he shot.
"MOM!"Hinata yelled. "OH god what have I done. It shouldn't be this way, why, why, why, why do you people hate me so much" She yelled towards that man. "Because of my horns? Well you fucking take them off because I hate them." She turned towards the man. "Sorry today just is not your lucky day" And the last thing he saw was Hinata going insane and throwing her vectors at him. After that….. Total blackness.
okay don't hate me
wait with flaming untill you've finished the last chapter wich won't come in a long time:D because my story is going to be loooong.
btw this one is to cate
i updated now it's your turn please update his gift..
and get started on the christmas story with ziva and tony i loved the idea
