ok so i updated it! again part of my fixes to the story. NOt any major changes just reading my gramer i was all this sucks and i couldn't stand reading the problems in it.
Chapter 4: the voice
Naruto couldn't believe his eyes. There was some guy he just met that day, and some random person fighting. After Naruto looked at him, he then noticed that the random person didn't really look all that human. In fact he was freakishly huge, and looked like he over ate those vegetables as a kid.
Kakashi wasn't having a good time out there himself. He had some very big, catlike man attacking him. He hated cats and this huge man even had hands like a cat. 'Dam, it's another mutant. How many are going to find me today,' he thought while trying to fight the man off. He was very strong, much like himself.
That was when he was picked up and thrown towards the RV/camper. He hit the window and Naruto's eyes went wider, if all possible. 'O shit he couldn't even stop the guy, I can't fight!' he thought as he saw the guy coming over towards the vehicle. Naruto started to struggle to get out of the seat belt even more. It didn't make it any better that somehow a fire had started in the back, and all his cloths where burning. He was not going to die this way. He kept trying to break free, but the dam belt button wouldn't let the strap go.
That was when, out of no where a burst of wind came and the beast stopped his advances. The thing, turned to a side of the road a second before a huge beam of red light came out and attacked it. Then two people appeared and came to rescue the. Naruto watched as a man opened the door, and burnt the seat belt. He didn't know what to do, but was suddenly grasped by a lady and taken out of the burning vehicle. The man went over to front where Kakashi was, and pulled him off the hood.
As running away from the scene, the RV/camper exploded. Making everyone fall down, and Naruto got knocked out.
There was Kakashi on an examination table and the doctor, Tusnade on his right side. She over looked his wounds, and noticed how quickly he was healing. She looked over at ointment and it started to move towards her. She grasped it, turned his arm over, and applied it to arm. She then got out a needle and put vaccine into it, before going down to put it into his arm.
Kakashi jumped awake and put Tusnade into a head lock. He started looking around wondering what the hell was going on. He had no idea how he got there. Kakashi looked down at the lady before letting her go and running off, leaving a coughing Tusnade on the floor.
Kakashi started to walk around, looking around for anyway out. He came to a place filled with cloths, and looking at himself more closely. He noticed that he didn't have a shirt on, so he grasped a hoodie and put it on. He looked around and suddenly he heard 'Where are you going Kakashi?' He jumped at the sound.
'I'm going mad' he thought as he started looking around. He heard a noise and quickly ran into what he thought was just a normal corner. It opened up, and he quickly moved into it, not caring where it was taking him. Kakashi was brought to a totally different looking place. It looked more like a house. He started to walk down the hall way, when he heard kid voices.
Kakashi hid and started looking around for the children. He noticed them coming down a stair way and moved from one side of a pillar, to another. He waited for the kids run off, before starting to move again. Then sadly he heard more people walking the hall way, now he had no where to hide, so he ran to a wall. There he saw a handle, and went inside.
Once he closed the door, he heard the same voice that he heard before. "I'm glad you could join us Mr. Kakashi" He closed his eyes and turned around to see just who this person was.
