Bones
Hi everyone, thankyou for all the reviews I am still busy with PMing everyone but didn't get to everyone yet.I am sorry for the spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes I make but before I post I always check four something migth go unnoticed by isn't my native language so I make mistakes.
I know the first chapter was confusing although it was meant to be a bit that way.I hope after this shorter chapter things become more clear hehe...
And I am still thinking about maybe changing a few things in the first chapter because I am not totally satisfied with it...
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Bones isn't mine!
BRENNAN
'Since when is this your desk?'Dr Brennan asked confused as she frowned deep. How was this possible? This was her desk. She had left her desk yesterday and now...Now everything had changed? All of her things where gone and...
'Dr Brennan is something wrong with you?' Zack asked confused as he shook his head.
'Are you ready?'A male voice asked from the doorway.
Both Brennan and Zack turned and looked at Hodgins.
'Yes I am.'Zack said as he began to walk away from Brennan.
'What? No you are not!' Brennan said confused with irritation in her voice.
Zack just kept walking and was out of her office in no time.
'Wait...!'Brennan called after them as she reached the hallway now and incomprehension was written all over her face, and audible in her voice.
She froze to the spot she was standing in as she concluded that Zack and Hodgins just ignored her and looked at their dissapearing backs. Her mouth had fallen wide open. She had never been ignored this rudely, especially not by Zack or Hodgins, by no one. What was going on?! She didn't know what to think anymore.
NOW
Angela tried to swallow away the lump in her throat as she ran through the hospital towards the room she knew her best friend was in. Her legs couldn't move as fast as she wanted. She had been a hazard in traffic a few minutes ago, but the news she had gotten only twenty minutes ago had shocked her so severely that the only thing that had mattered to her since then was to get to that room her friend was in. All else around her had dissapeared and was not important.
She saw Booth look up from his chair as she barged into the room. Booth seemed startled by her sudden appearance.
Her mouth dropped open when she looked from Booth to the still form that was lying on the bed. Her breath caught in her throat as her eyes grew wide in shock and hurt.
'O
my God.' She uttered. She wasn't able to believe what she was
seeing.
She quickly made her way over to the bed and grabbed
Brennan's hand.
'Oh no.' She said softly. The pain she felt at seeing Brennan like this was visible in her face, it played over her delicate features. A few tears began to slide from her dark eyes.
'No.' She said softly as she caressed Brennan's forehead.
Angela shook her head.
After what seemed like minutes she looked up at Booth.
'What happened?'She asked softly, her voice sounded very sad.
Booth looked away as he clenched hit teeth, he was pushing away the emotion he felt towards the man that had done this to her, rage towards himself, and even sadness for how she was lying there. He was angry about the danger she was still in because she hadn't regained consciousness yet.
He breathed in deep.
'She...She got shot by a criminal.' He looked away. 'I...I couldn't...' He stammered, his voice was filled with regret and guilt.
'I know.'Angela whispered as she looked from Booth's concerned face to Brennan's face. Brennan's face seemed even paler now. Angela knew that Booth would do anything to protect Brennan, it wasn't his fault, she just knew that, eventhough she didn't know what had happened she knew Brennan's habit to seek out danger all the time.
Angela's eyes travelled over Brennan's still form and she felt a cringe of pain run through her. She looked so white, so lifeless... So vulnerable... Not like Brennan at all, and so alone.
Angela sighed. O, Tempe, please come back to us. She had been worried about Brennan so many times. It was as if Brennan never saw the danger she put herself in. She had tried to talk some sense into her so many times, she had tried to make Brennan see that she was playing her own life. She remembered the times that she had found out that Brennan had followed a man in an underground tunnel, leaving Booth behind, and the the time when she had attacked a gang member! That really had made Angela mad, but then Brennan had explained why she had attacked him and she couldn't be that angry anymore.
But now..., now it was too late.
This time, danger had caught up with Temperance Brennan.
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