So right now I'm sitting in English being bored and I have a can:

-Do some stupid program on the computer that will help me pass the grade I'm in

or

-Update my fanfiction

So I'm updating my fanfiction, duh! I'm just kind of making this up as I go, so tell me what ya think!!!!!

Sorry I haven't updated in a while! I've just been really busy being abducted by aliens. But they let me go home because they really wanted to know what happened to Max! See, even aliens love Maximum Ride.

Disclaimer: Why would James Patterson be sitting in an English class being forced to do some stupid typing program? Well, actually he's not and I am, so I don't know if you have figured this out yet . . . . . . . . . I'M NOT JAMES PATTERSON!!! I know major surprise!!!

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Fang's POV (Max is unconscious so she can't really say anything)

Jeezum! What has this girl been eating? Dang she's heavy! I thought to myself.

"Max. Are you okay?" Nudge was saying. She looked close to tears and was flying close to me trying to make Max wake up.

I was looking for a place to land and see if Max was okay, when Angel said, "There's a cave over there." She pointed to a cave over a lake. Lake Mead, I think.

How does she do that? I thought. It's almost like she could read my mind. I stared at her; she giggled.

Max let out a low moan and I felt like my heart was being torn to shreds. She had been my friend for only a few short moments and it just felt right. Like I had known her my entire life. Weird, I know, but true. I just felt like we had an instant connection. Like I had known her my entire life.

I flew down to the cave and landed. Then I gently placed Max on the ground. Even though she was unconscious, she looked like she was in pain. I could see her wince and there were tears streaming down her face. Max struck me as a girl that rarely cried, if she ever did. So seeing her so weak made me nearly break down.

"That is so sweet!" Angel said. I looked at her my face impassive, but inside my mind was reeling. What the hell? Was she actually reading my mind or was she just thinking about something else? Either way it was downright creepy.

"Uh. . . . . . .Fang." Iggy said. I looked up and somehow he knew he had gotten my attention. "I hear something."

Gazzy's face fell. "Erasers. How could they have found so soon?" He looked like he had been through hell and back, Yet I was proud to see him jump into fighting stance.

"No, more like birds." Iggy tilted his head. "Maybe hawks?"

Nudge came running in. "Hey guys! Guess what? There are a bunch of hawks outside. They're flying really cool, but some of them have, like dead snakes and stuff that they're eating. It's pretty gross, but I guess they have to eat. Anyways, they are doing these really cool moves with their wings and it looks like we might be ale to learn some stuff from them. We could totally fly with them, but I guess if you guys don't want to we don't-" Iggy clapped his hand over her mouth. Jeez, that girl was an earful.

"You never gave us a chance to guess what." Iggy muttered and Nudge scowled at him.

"It's true Nudge." Angel said. "And Gazzy was about to blow you up because you were talking so much." Nudge looked crestfallen.

"But that does sound cool!" Angel said quickly, picking up on how disappointed Nudge looked. "You guys wanna fly with the hawks?"

Then she noticed Max lying in the corner, and I could tell she didn't want to leave Max.

"I'll watch her." I said and Angel nodded.

"Okay, but you need to call us soon as she wakes up." Nudge said looking at me suspiciously. She glanced at Angel who nodded. What is that all about? I wondered.

They all jumped out of the cave opening and began soaring towards the hawks. They looked like they were playing tag.

I walked over to Max. She looked terrible. I bent down and felt her forehead. It was burning.

I sighed and looked out on the kids. Then I heard a cough and a then a moan. I looked over at Max and saw she was opening her eyes. I felt a sense of relief wash over me.

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Max's POV

Ugh. My head felt like a bowling ball just hit it. No, maybe a piano. And my throat felt like it was on fire. I coughed and then let out a low moan. Opening my eyes I saw Fang staring at me worriedly.

"You okay." He asked.

"Yeah. I mean its not like this hasn't happened before. It was just worse this time. Way worse."

"Do you want some water." He asked.

I nodded eagerly. I felt like I'd just spent my entire life in the desert without water. He handed me a canteen and I gulped its contents down in less than a second. I felt so much better.

I struggled to stand up.

"Are you sure you should do that?" Fang asked. His voice was soft, but the tone was bossy.

I glared at him and continued to clutch the cave wall, trying to find something to grab onto so I could hoist myself up.

Fang sighed and held out his hand. To his surprise, and mine, I took it. He pulled me up.

I surveyed the scene. "Where are we?" I asked.

"Over Lake Mead."

"Wait, where are Nudge and Angel?" I asked panicked. Had the whitecoats gotten them?

Then I saw them outside playing tag. Oh.

Angel!!!!! I shouted in my mind.

Max. What's the matter? Oh, wait! You're awake!!!! I get everyone to come over!!!! Yay! I'm so happy!

"So are you gonna call them over or what?" Fang asked.

"I already did." I answered and smirked at the confusion in his eyes. Then I realized we were still holding hands. I pulled my hand back fast.

Angel swooped into the cave and practically knocked me off my feet with her hug.

Nudge came next and started dancing around happily singing, "Max, Max, Max, Max!"

"Whoa. Angel was right; you are awake. How'd she know that?" Gazzy asked.

"I read minds, silly." Angel giggled. "Fang it was sooooo sweeet when you were worrying about Max."

Gazzy gaped and Iggy looked astonished. Even Fang did a pretty bad job of hiding his surprise.

I groaned. "Angel, sweetie, how many times have I told you not to read people's minds unless we really really have to."

"Sorry Max." Angel said not sounding sorry at all.

"Wait, what am I thinking?" Gazzy shouted.

Angel cocked her head to one side, concentrating. "Tacos?"

I know that chapter was kind of boring, but there is more action coming. And Fax of course! –fangirls scream with delight-

So review. Tell me if you like it, love it, or hate it!!!!! And you can suggest what to put in the story. i have a basic storyline, but I could use a few ideas!!!!

More reviews= longer chapters

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