So, I finally got the new chapter out of you guest writer . . .RadxRika!! Give it up for Rika folks!! Not sure how I felt about it, or whether it fit the original agenda for Ciel and Sebby, but I know you all are anxious for posts so I decided (after much pressuring from Rika) to post it anyways. I may post an alternate chapter later depending on how I feel at the moment, but I would like to say first that I do love what Rika did. It just might not belong in this fic (which would be a great excuse to write a new one **hint*hint**nudge*nudge**). enjoy!
That Butler, So Tempting
I leaned over my butler. Exposed, embarrassed, and aroused, I let my hand fiddle with the waistband his black silk boxers. I had ordered them myself, not too long ago. I wanted Sebastian, wanted to have all of him, every little piece. I loved that he was breathing harder now, and I could the physical manifestation of his arousal.
"Sebastian," I breathed. "Make noise. Talk."
My butler smirked, chuckling slightly. I wormed my hand inside his boxers and stroked him.
"No-o, make noise for me, Sebastian." I said with a smirk someone had once called cruel, gaining confidence. I kissed him roughly, drawing more blood and lapping it up, the coppery taste lingering on my lips- and perhaps his too. He moaned a bit, but didn't move at all. Good. That was good.
I wanted more, more, from my butler, my knight. I pressed my hips to his, and traced my tongue along his sensual body, pausing for a moment when I heard my name.
"Ciel," He whispered. I didn't stop, merely looked at his face, mouth still open. He looked… pleased. I kept my gaze on him, his face, as I tenderly touched his nipple with my tongue- just a flick. His breath caught in his throat. I enjoyed it, pleasuring and torturing my Sebastian.
A thought raced through my mind. Was this love? I didn't know. I didn't want to think about it.
Instead, I moved up from Sebastian's chest to his collarbone. Gently, I kissed and bit at the skin there, drawing more sounds from him. But it wasn't satisfying, not like this. I wanted more… participation. I wondered, what would happen if I ordered him to move? Or, even, not not move?
So, how was it? Not terrible we hope! anyway, do you think I should keep it or re-write it? How do you all like Rika's style, how does it compare, and do you like what she did? Do you want to hear more from her? Do you want me to jump back on board at all speeds? Do you want us to keep passing the story back and forth? If you don't review, we will never know, feel rejected and not post for a long time. So review, review, review!!!!
The Hatter Maddox