Please review, if u don't I wont know what to work on with my writing.
I do not own Naruto all rights go to it s author.( today I'm kind of lazy with a side of emo)
Italic is thoughts, Kay?
"Naruto, do you know where your going?" sakura asks the blond who appears to be going the wrong way.
"you're the one with the map." he retorts back to her.
I look down at the map sakura held in her hands. a loud crash caused me to suddenly lift my head, and see . Naruto laying motionless on the ground. He gets back up, nervously laughing at his misfortune. causing sakura and I to laugh with him. Sasuke just kind of shakes his head at the three of us. we continue to walk to the village of the mist. I look down at the ground lost in my thoughts I forget what I'm doing and drift thru my doubts and hopes, when will I find courage to tell Naruto. a pang of longing suffocates my heart. A feeling of cold water hits my cheek. I look up at the sky to see gray clouds cover the blue sky. Rain drops fall lightly on my face. The refreshing feeling the water on my reassured me that I will find the courage soon. "Ano Naruto-kun." I start.
"hold on a second Hinata-Chan. Sakura-Chan, apparently theres supposed to be a festival happening at the mist village, would you like to go with me?" he asks I feel as though my confidence shattered in to a million pieces. I feel Sakura's gaze at my back.
" uh sure Naruto that'd be great." she answers.
"what'd you want Hinata?" he turns to me. I stare at my feet. To let him think the tears running down my face are actually rain drops.
"never mind it appears that it doesn't matter anymore." I say trying to sound as calm as possible.
"okay then." he remarks. Of course he likes sakura, Shes pretty, smart and she has more confidence than I do.
________________________________________________________________________ok I'm going to stop here PLEASE REVIW! in the next chapter I'm going to focus on Sasuke.