YAY KOTAKE! boo akatsuki, i'm srry to all the akatsuki fans out there , but i love kotake , me , my sister , and my cusine haley all think hes hot. and for all you kotake fans out there , you'll like this chapter cause there a lot of surprises out there and i think you'll like them a lot... like i alredy know who doremi's going to pick to be with , and i know who she loves more ... and ... oop's i spilled too much out already. R&R plez
doremi's in love with two
doremi was sitting there in the store , it was starting to get dark , but now that she in jr high her parents dont care how long she stays out , as long as she goes home with someone. except pop , who was onley in grade 4, who had to to go home at sundown.
it was quiet in the shop , where as momoko , satsuki , hikari , and pop all went home . " i wish there were someone to talk to." doremi said laying her head on the counter. "its so boring here with everyone gone."
all of a sudden a boy walked in , he had blue spiky hair and wore a red button up , that was unbuttoned , and a yellow shirt underneath. "o... WELCOME TO THE MAHO-DOU." doremi said welcoming the boy.
"o wow , doremi has a girly side of her." doremi looked at the boy . "kotake." doremi looked at kotake and blushed a bit, remebering what he said the day she graduated from grade school. ever since then she has been trying to avoide him by any cost.
"why are you here" doremi said looking down , hideing her blush. " well . i'm here to check out the shop ... and get a few things for music class so i dont fail.." kotake looked at doremi . "nee, doremi , are you still thinking about you know ... that thing i said to you at our graduation thing." doremi looked at kotake and then looked away. "well , you can forget about it. i know you like that akatsuki guy anyways. "
the room went silent, doremi thought to her self " how can he say that , i cant forget about it , cause ... i cant" doremi looked at kotake , " wll i think i'll be going , i'll come look around tomorrow." kotake said leaving the shop.
doremi looked away, she looked up " that boy ... says stupid things " doremi looked down , not knowing kotake walked in , she started to sing.
(song : suki dakara)
Jaa mata ne te wo futta
Ushiro sugata anna ni mou
Yuugure no hitonami ni yurenagara chiisaku naru
Anata ga kureta kotoba wo hitotsuzutsu
Omoidashi me wo tojita
Shiawasena omoi dake koko ni aru hazu nano ni
Fuan ni naru doushite nano kokoro ga furueteru no
Tsutaetai motto sou afureteru kono kimochi
Suki dakara suki dakara zettai suki dakara
"doremi." kotake , shocked to here her sing. doremi turned around and saw the blue hair boy staring at her. "kotake" doremi said wide eyed. it was silent for a bit "KO.. TA .. KE "doremi said angerly. kotake looked at doremi and made a scared face "o boy" he said scared.
after doremi chased kotake around the store a bit , they stopped , " that hasn't happend in a while." catchin his breath kotake siad . doremi looked at him and smiled "yeah , i kinda missed it " thew two smiled at each other , then sat down.
" nee , doremi , why were you singing that song. dosent suki dakara mean i love you . " doremi blushed . "why would you think that." doremi said waving her hands around. kotake pulled her close and wispered in her ear. "doremi ... daisuki" doremi blushed hearing that. then he pulled away and leaned in for her lips, at that moment doremi could feel happyness , then ...they kissed.
after a few seconds kotake pulled away. doremi turened red screaming in her head and not knowing kotake got up . " well i think i'll be going ho-" he was cut off by doremi grabing his hand. "umm ... can we ... walk home together." kotake smiled and nodded.
(at doremi's house)
doremi was up in her room , after everything that went on in the last 2 1/2 hours , doremi was hopeing to get some sleep. she layed down in her bed and looked at the ceiling "what went on tonight" doremi muttered to her self. she rolled over and held her pillow close to her " its all so confuseing to get straight... do i like kotake , or akatsuki-kun ." she closed her eyes. and asked her self " which one do i love?"
(next day at school)
doremi , hikari , satsuki , alice , and momoko were on there way to school " doremi-chan , you look tired " momoko asked . "well momo-chan i didnt get any sleep cause ..." doremi paused remebering what happened , she blushed and stopped walking , also making the rest curious.
" doremi-chan why are you blushing" asked hikari , "umm , " was all doremi could say " did you and akatsuki hang last night." momoko asked , doremi shuck her head . "THEN WHAT" they all said. she wispered into satsukis ear "YOU KISSED KOTAKE" satsuki screamed
doremi covered her mouth and drager her and the others into the bush. "SHHH, i dont want the whole school knowing . " doremi said . " well are you guys going out know." alice asked but doremi just shuck her head and looked down . "all he did was tell me he loved me , but i like akatsuki-kun , and...and" doremi looked at the girls in tears.
"i'm so confussed now." doremi said rubbing her eye's from crying. "o , its ok doremi-chan." momoko said rubbing her best friends back. "yeah , who ever you choice it's fine with us." satsuki said trying to confert doremi. "yeah , and even if it's hard to choice , pick the one you fell happy with." hikari explaned.
"thanks guys" doremi said wipeing the tears away. " and doremi-chan... just listen to your heart. " alice said smiling and her friend. "ok" doremi said smiling back.
once lunch hit the girls all started to walk up to the roof. "doremi-chan" shouted akatsuki . doremi quickly turned around. "o akatsuk-kun." doremi said looking at the boy. " doremi-chan , come with me. " akatsuki grabed her hand and draged her to the graden area. "akatsuki-kun why did you drage me here . " doremi asked the boy who kept smiling at her.
akatsuki pointed towards a flower . doremi walked over to the flower , and smiled. "it looks like the flower that hana-chan was born from." doremi said smiling and it kindalooked like she was crying. "thats why i brought you here... and to tell you something."
doremi looked at the boy , "what is it you want to tell me." doremi started to blush. "well ... umm" he walked towards the park bench. doremi fallowed. the turned right around . "DOREMI , I LOVE YOU" doremi went wide eyed.
it went silent for a while . "a...a...a" doremi said looking down . "why, why is it that i get this feeling .. that... i dont love him , even tho i do . but kotake..." doremi thought to her self . doremi looked at him and ran off.
(with doremi .. doremi's P.O.V)
my head hert , i had no clue what was going on, i was in love with him since i meet him, but... kotake ... i just kept running and running when i bumped into someone. i just hapenmed to see who it was . "ko...ta...ke"i said almost crying. "doremi , whats the matter. "he asked in concern
i looked at him and my everything was spinning , and my head started herting again "i...i'm confused... i dont know anything anymore."i said holding my head.
after a moment of quiet , kotake started rubbibg my head , i looked at him and he said. "troubles be gone" i looked at him and i smiled , " there now your better , and your smiling to." at that moment i knew who i was happy with and my heart tells me the same thing .
i looked at the boy "kotake... diasuki " i smiled at the boy the biy shocked , i knew he thought i would pick akatsuki-kun but , i know who i love , and that is ... kotake.
*end of day*
i was walking home with everyone and i was as happy as ever. "doremi , what are you so happy about." asked momoko . i replied "o no reason." they all looked at me. " did you find him." satsuki asked. i nodded. "who!" screamed hikari. "o you'll see" i said .
(at mahu-dou normal P.O.V)
all the girls except doremi were wonderig who doremi picked. then a boy walked in . "o kotake" momoko said looking at kotake. "hi momoko , i doremi here." he asked looking around. "shes in the back why." hikari asked in curousity. " o , kotake-kun" doremi said running up to the boy smiling , she grabed on to his arm.
" so where are we going " doremi asked . " well i think were going to go to the movies , or somewheres." the two smiled and walked out of the store.
"doremi-chan picked kotake." alice said shocked. " and there dating" momoko said also shocked. satsuki walked up to the window . " well at least she's happy." everyone nodded.
(with kotake and doremi)
"nee doremi , why did you pick me and not akatsuki" kotake asked and doremi facen him. "because , watashi ... diasuki , kotake-kun"
told you there were surprises in this story, i love the ending , and i love how she picked kotake ... EEEEEEEEE.^^ even tho i'm mad that she got kotake , i'm happy. R&R plezz