I'm pretty sure I have 11 reviews. Thanks so much to soph, theoneyoulovetohate, and commeparmagie for your continious reviewing, it makes me smile so much :D - see, i'm smiling!
Soo, you guys know the drill, the more reviews I get, the faster I update. That's just how it is. Otherwise you get 1 chapter a week, approx. Once I get up to 25 reviews, I'll post 2 chapters at once, but If it happens before *a week has passed, I'll post one a day for the next 3 days :) ...So...tell your friends?
ashli thanks for your reviews, they're all so complimentary :) I really like em, and, yr story is AHMAHZINGG.
soph yeah I did write the song, all on my lonesome, and I liked it, so, I included it. You can check out my songs on youtube, and the lyrics on hitemhigh. tumblr. com :)
commeparmagie yehhp, you can find this there, but, this versions heaps better, loads of little extra bits, and Imma take the myspace version down, and maybes copy the reviews to this one. I just like this one so much more.
Emxxx Thanks for your review, Id paragraph things, but, I just like writing things this way, dunno why, Im just weird, and plus, it makes it look like I've written more. LULZ.
So, I had this whole rant about how hot Andy sixx was here, but, I decided to take it down, but without any further adiou (from this freaking long AN) here's chapter 4, preeetty exciting, now we're getting somewhere…
########################Shaun###########################
After Bradie had finally left, and believe me, he hangs around, I was able to concentrate on my own.
The crumpled envelove sat on my bed, looking quite intimidating.
This was different to all the other fanmail I'd recieved.
This one actually meant something.
To me, that is.
I slowly walked over, and placed my hand on the red paper.
It was addressed to 'The Boys of Short Stack', but she had given it to me.
I guess I'd have to give Bradie & Andy their seperate parts as well.
My fingers trembled as I flipped it over, searching for the seal.
Get a grip Shaun, my I clenched my hair in my hands.
Sitting down, I took a few deep breaths.
What the HELL was wrong with me?
I ripped the tape off, and shook the contents onto the bed.
There was a small blue envelope for Bradie, A small green envelope for Andy, and, a slightly larger yellow envelope for me.
Tossing Bradie's and Andy's envelopes onto the floor, I recklessly opened mine.
3 sheets of paper and a photograph fell out onto the floor.
Hastily, I swept the sheets from the floor and grasped at the photo.
Wait! Slow DOWN Shaun! I was behaving like a madman.
Again.
I sat down, shaking my head, the long bangs swept into my face.
I pulled them back and picked up the first page.
Dear Shaun...
She was amazing, the whole letter, not crazy, not filled with 'I love you's' like most that I'd read.
Oh, You wont know me, and I don't know you, but I think you're brilliant...
And she'd written me a song.
I would wait...
The words swirled around in my head, catchy, with a subliminal message, I hoped.
She would wait for me..
There's some things you can only express on paper, and this is one of them.
This girl, was something I'd never encountered before.
I pulled the photo up, It was her, and her dog.
She was beautiful.
And I had to let her know that, so I picked up my phone from the bedside table, before realising that I didn't have her number.
Shit.
Why didn't I have her number?
I had millions of people's, not on my phone, but on bits of paper, but hers, I didn't.
The only one that mattered.
Apart from Bradie and Andy, that is.
So I would have to wait, and hope that she twittered me, or something like that.
To kill the time, I walked to the door, to give the two mentioned above their letters.
Bradie was on the couch, playing with his n64 and Andy was eating, as usual, but with his phone in front of him.
"There's a letter here for you," I tossed Bradie his, and turned to Andy.
"Naiiice," Andy shoved the rest of a crumpet with god knows on it in his mouth.
I turned away, opening twitter on my phone, hoping….
Completely forgetting about Andy's letter, which was still tucked underneath my arm.
"You dropped something," Andy cut into my thoughts, gesturing to the floor in front of me.
"Is it a raunchy note?" He grinned, "Should I know about it? Coz if it's a raunchy note, they're usually for me."
I cut myself back, resisting the urge to be scathing.
I chucked Andy his envelope and bent down, searching for what I'd dropped.
There it was, a small purple post it.
Where had this come from?
It read:
Boys, I feel like such a slut giving this to you..
I had to laugh at this, compared to what other girls had given and said to us, I'm sure this was nothing.
But even so, my heart pounded in my chest.
But, if you want to talk, If you wanna have a normal conversation with someone who wont scream your name and record the whole thing to show to her friends then..
Was this what I thought it was?
Here's my number, now don't lose it you lot (:
My eyes scrolled across, memorizing the 10 digits instantly.
In a second my phone was whipped out, and they were stored in my phonebook.
Maia.
I had her phone number, no-one else was getting it, the feeling was pretty intense.
"Aww, she said my hair was cool," Bradie's voice cut in suddenly.
"Hey Shaun, what was it?" Andy looked down at me, and the purple note clasped in my hand.
"Nothing," I said, a little too quickly.
The post it was torn out of my hand suddenly.
"It doesn't look like nothing," Bradie said, "It looks suspiciously like a phone number."
"Haa, Give it here," Andy said, "I might call her if I'm feeling lonely one night."
I think he was joking, but even so I couldn't control the anger that coursed through me.
"Chill out Shaun," Andy said, noticing the way my fists were clenched, "Im kidding."
"Not funny," I breathed out.
"Wow, getting possessive already?" Andy tapped his phone, entering her number.
He noticed me watching, and grinned, "I swear it's only for backups."
I turned away, Andy sucked sometimes.
Bradie, as usual, cut in, "Guys, its almost 5 in the morning, and our flight's at 11, shouldn't we get some sleep?"
Oh My God.
Bradie was right, our next concert was just 12 hours away, and I was still awake!
I didn't feel tired though, maybe that was due to the adrenaline pumping through my system.
Cadbury lied, eating chocolate did not feel like this.
"Alright, let's sleep, and that means you, too Andy, no more redtube tonight," I slightly chuckled.
"Hey, It wasn't redtube, is that all you think of me?" Andy said indignantly, putting down his phone.
Bradie and I gave him a pointed look.
"All right," he sighed.
And with that, we went to our seperate rooms.
I was sure tonight, my dreams would be filled with images of a brunette and a puppy.
I was rudely awakened by my mobile which buzzed from my left buttcheek.
My eyes bleary, my head hurting, I checked the time.
9am. Oh God. 4 hours of sleep.
And then, 9am. Maia's probably awake.
Good god, I was obsessed.
But It was time to let her know what I thought of her, so, I picked out the offending phone from my back pocket, and sent her a text, short and sweet.
Good Morning Beautiful, I'd like to know, would you like to come to the Adelaide show with me? Come on, don't make me beg now, coz i'm not your regular guy. x Shaun
And I tapped my fingers on the table, waiting, hoping, that I wouldn't be going to the Adelaide show without her.
Tap. Tap. Tap.
##########A/N*##########
Sorry Guys! Didn't quite get to the show, but you see, my fingers, they just keep typing, and i cant stop them, I'm powerless!
But at least Shaun n Maia Are getting somewhere.
Next chappy starts off with her. I'd like to thank The mighty boosh, who I quoted, somewhere here. It's an awesome show, you should check it out.
Anddd, band reccomendation for this chapter is BLACK VEIL BRIDES. Their music's great, (check out knives and pens on youtube) And Andy Sixx is a freaking babe.
Personally though, I prefer a Devil for Me.
Thanks loads, and please comment.
xx Spiderman
