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A Bruised Whore

Suddenly I was being steadied on my feet and someone was tying my sash in place. When I fully opened my eyes and stepped out of the carriage I saw two Kabutos.

"HOLY SHIT! WHY ARE THERE TWO OF YOU?" I blinked; hoping one of them would disappear. It didn't work.

One Kabuto was tying the horses to a post, and the other was unloading the small baggage Orochimaru packed. And then in a poof of smoke, the Kabuto at the post vanished. I waved my hands back and forth in the air where Kabuto just was, I eliminated the idea that he turned invisible.

"That was only one of my shadow clones, dufus." Kabuto said while pushing his glasses up higher.

I rolled my eyes. "Thank heavens, because one of you is hard enough to get along with."

Kabuto gave an insincere smile, and then turned to face Orochimaru. "I'll carry these back to the base my lord." And with a short nod Kabuto sprinted off with the luggage.

I twisted my neck towards Orochimaru, waiting for what he wanted to do next. His face was expressionless.

"You will follow behind me until I tell you otherwise." He started walking down the street.


On the dirt road we passed by a lot of street vendors selling hand crafted jewelry, clay pots, lucky talismans, sweaters, and other knick knacks. The open market was busy, people were shouting prices, kids were running in circles around their mothers, and farmers were coming in to drop off more produce. Everyone was either outside working, shopping, or talking with neighbors. Even though the air was dry and chilly, the people of the village never stopped moving.

Eventually we walked further into the shady part of town, females dressed in low-cut dresses hung around every door. We entered a gentlemen's club, which had a large breasted woman advertised on the front door. Was Orochimaru finally going to take the advice I gave him about getting a whore?

The club was dark, with blue lights and a foggy haze from cigarettes mixed with cheap perfume. And if sex had a scent, it was present too. I heard men laughing, women giggling along pretending to be interested in their customers, and naughty whispers from both ends.

A lady at the front desk with long black hair and green eyes was leaning against the counter. She undressed Orochimaru with her gaze, and glanced at me quickly wondering why I was here. Or maybe she was curious as to what my relationship was with Orochimaru...

"Stay here in the front. You will wait for me until I return after some business."

The woman behind the desk hearing Orochimaru, walked around the desk to greet him.

She strutted like a sultry vixen in heat. And it was obvious she wanted Orochimaru. She couldn't stop batting her damn eyelashes.

I sat down at a leather booth, I was actually grateful I got ordered to stay up front. I didn't want to hear the lady flirt with Orochimaru.

Finally, the two disappeared behind a black beaded curtain near the back of the club.

There was nothing else to do but wait, and to pass the time I decided to stare at my knees and wiggle my toes. I think I did this for about ten minutes until I got interrupted.

"Hey baby how's about you—"

"Not interested."

I looked sideways and saw a lanky man with a dark eyes and a mustache. Not a ten out of ten kind of guy.

"Awwww, come on now baby."

"Not interested," I stated while still looking down at my legs. I was getting annoyed that he couldn't take the hint.

My neck suddenly snapped, the stranger had his hand clenched around my jaw. He brought his face closer, "You have a little attitude."

This time I looked him straight in the eyes. "Not interested you horn dog."

"SNAPPY LITTLE BITCH!" He slapped my face.

"HEY! HEY! HEY! Asses like you aren't allowed here! Get the FUCK out of here you piece of trash!" A redheaded lady started walking her way towards my booth. She must have noticed the weirdo when he yelled.

I rubbed my cheek softly. I had to admit that it slightly stung.

The man sharply got up, and dashed out the door. I was grateful that the hostess scared him off.

She stopped at my table, "Sweetie, are you okay?"

I shrugged. I smiled at her. "I'm fine. It wasn't too hard anyway." I didn't want her to start making a big fuss and get everyone's attention.

I was served a glass of ice water out of sympathy. I didn't drink it, I just watched the condensation drip, and I drew circles on the table top for twenty more minutes.

"We're leaving now," he said while exiting through the front door.


Our walk was quiet. Seeing as he didn't want to talk, I just stared at the back of his heels and followed. We walked until we reached the end of town, and then continued to walk some more into a forested area. I was careful not to step on any branches; I still didn't have any shoes on.

Then Orochimaru turned around. "The Fuma clan is such trash." He hissed as he cusped my bruised cheek.

I looked up at him. Was he upset that someone hit me?

"I don't understand you one bit. I can't tell if you are being sincere about what happened to me this afternoon, or if you are just saying that so I'll feel better when I sleep with you later."

He dropped his hand.

"My mouse, what a mouth you have," he hissed venomously while shaking his head back and forth.

He grabbed my hair, and pushed me down onto my knees.

His sudden forcefulness scared me, and the tight grip he held me by started to give me a headache.

"Open your mouth," he loosened the tie around his waist.

I raised my eyebrows, challenging him on.

He tugged my hair sharply, and tears formed in the corner of my eyes from the pain. Then I felt his hot length stroke the right side of my lower jaw, he smiled like a mad man. "Open your mouth, little mouse, or I will gladly take you back to the whore house in town."

Be a whore for one or a whore for all? Wow, the choices. Fucking just one man was hard enough, no way was I going to do any more than that.

I opened my mouth, and tried not to cringe for what was to come.

"That's a good little mouse." He thrust his cock in.


Orochimaru kept a steady pace; his hips did all the work. I stared up at him, his head was tilted back and he was breathing loudly. He was immersed in a world of pleasure, and I wanted to take full advantage of the situation. I ran my tongue over the tip of his head a few times, I felt him twitch inside of me.

His eyes snapped open, and locked with mine, they appeared glassy with lust. He gave two more hard thrusts, and exploded.

I swallowed, hoping not to upset him further. I saw him smirk in response. It was different to feel his hot juice flow down my throat, and it slightly turned me on.

He pulled out, and started to fix his robes.

"Kabuto?"

I looked around wondering where his henchman was. How could he have sneeked back without me hearing?

"Yes my lord?" he asked appearing behind Orochimaru.

Was he here the whole time? How much did he see?

"Kabuto, take her to the hidden village and get her settled in. I have some last minute business to take care of."

After Orochimaru left, Kabuto didn't say anything. But he only motioned with his finger that I had something on the bottom of my chin. When I wiped it off, my face turned red. It was beyond humiliating.