Consequences

by Colliequest

That which does not kill us teaches us. Alvin goes into a coma after hitting his head while disobeying Dave. Can he survive? How will his family cope? Rated Kplus just to be safe. AN: Chapter two and beyond is now being co-written with blossom1209.

5. AN: story on HOLD

Ugh, such a late update, I should have mentioned this several weeks ago...my co-writer and I have decided to put this story on hold.

1. I resolved to try harder in school, piano practice, my chores, etc. And I am trying to avoid spending 8 hours a day on the computer like I used to do. (Okay that last part was a bit of an exaggeration, but you get my drift.) So I have less time to really write than I did last year.

2. I was really interested in writing for a while and I'm sure I could improve if I wanted to, but the real interest died off several months ago. That's actually the main reason I haven't written in a long time. What my real passion is is drawing. And piano.

3. As much or little potential as I may or may not have, in all honesty writing comes very hard for me. I feel like, especially with this story, that my story-writing skills are inadequate and that I'm better suited to writing an informational article. Thanks to everyone for their reviews and support. You have been kind. =)

4. I'm not leaving the site (I'll still be reading and reviewing others' work) and I do plan to try to finish this story. Just don't expect quick updates or exceptional writing. And, again, it's on hold for now. For how long I have absolutely no idea.