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It was five o'clock at the b-hood house when an angry knock shook the house. "Darn idiot ,house
already nearly tore down , alright stop it you wanna us to die." grumbled an angry lance. He opened
the door to see an angry Crystal standing in the doorway. "Where is he where's the jerk that left me at
the mall alone." she gritted out. "What, you mean Pietro he hasn't been home since he left with you."
he answered her. "oh yeah well the next time you see him tell him we're through,oh and call me." she
said giving him her number. "yeah never." he said throwing away the number. He called toad. "hey
toad seen speedy around lately." "no not since he left this morning yo what something happened." he
said "No what about you Fred ." he asked his other roommate " nope." he said continuing his meal.
"well I'll call his cell." Lance got out his phone and dialed pietro's number. " he didn't answer I'll just
call Wanda." He then dialed her number. "Weird she's not answering either maybe their with Rogue I
think I have her number." He did but when he called she didn't answer either. "guys something's wrong
maybe we need to go to the mansion and see the x geeks maybe they're just hanging or something." he
said and they all climbed in his jeep and headed to the mansion. " Hi lance like what are you guys
doing here." Kitty greeted the guys. "We were kinda hoping that Wanda or Pietro are here." he asked
hopefully. "Nope Wanda should be like with Rogue, Remy and John at the mall did you call their
cells?" she told him looking a little worried. "Yeah I did no one answered that's why I came here." he
said and kitty ushered them into the mansion. "Well maybe the professor can find them on Cerebro."
she said reassuringly. 'Enter' he told them "I noticed your dilemma and already and check to find them
they are unconscious and alive but Cerebro can't find them without the use of their powers." He told
them "Oh no like what are we going to do." said Kitty terrified for her friends. "Maybe when they
awaken I can find out where they are more than likely the place where they are headed has mental
blocks." "this is bad yo really bad." said toad. "Lets just hope it don't get worse." said lance.
Hey guys ,like the story so far I know this chapter was kinda iffy but don't let that deter you it's gonna be a good story. If you think there's something I can change just tell me by reviewing until the next chapter