Author's Note
Hello, everyone :) Sorry if you were expecting another chapter...
Okay, so I've been getting some reviews saying things like;
"Hikaru is too mature", "Haruhi giggles WAY too much", "Haruhi is too ooc.."
I just want to say that I am trying my best. I know that you guys are just trying to
help and give me tips but I do not take criticism well.. (as you can see xD)
I'm honestly running out of ideas. Of course Haruhi will go to school the next day
and blow the pants off of everyone, but after that I'm stumped. I think I'm just going to
stick to reading fanfictions instead of writing them. If I get enough reviews
I'll probably continue the story. If you guys could review some ideas and
tell me what you'd like to see happen in the story that would be awesome!
Or if anyone would like to take this story (giving me credit for the first 4 chapters)
and work off of it that would be okay too. I don't really know how to go about it though..
I'm really busy at the moment renovating and cleaning and preparing for school.
And of course once school starts for me (Wednesday) updates on the story would probably
come even slower than they already are. Which would definitely suck for you guys.
I'm for sure sticking to drawing and reading. No more writing for me xD
Oh right, I've read that Author's Notes aren't allowed .
I guess I'll put a preview below for the next chapter...
But are previews allowed? ^^; Oh well.
Haruhi waved good-bye to Hikaru and closed the front door. She quickly put the shopping bags aside and walked over to the fridge, beginning to prepare supper. "Dad is going to be really surprised when he sees me... not to mention really happy." she thought. After getting all of the ingredients out for dinner she went to set the table, which was pretty easy considering they were a family of two. Haruhi chopped up some carrots and plopped them into the stew she was making. She stirred the stew for a bit and then went to relax. Kneeling beside her mom's photo she decided to tell her about her crazy day. "Hi mom, I'm really sorry about skipping school today" she began, "It was all Hikaru-kun's fault. He wanted to give me a make-over..." she paused, letting out a tiny chuckle. "I know, how dumb. I'm grateful for him and Kaoru, though. I think we'll get along well," she smiled. "I met his mom today. She's really... something."
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