First time writing anything let alone a fan fiction so criticism is welcomed. Hopefully nothing looks too bad and that I'll get better at writing with each chapter.
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"Mokou! Explain why this boy was passed out under the table?" Keine Kamishirasawa, the Human Village's teacher and guardian, stormed into the room with Max in tow, yanking on one of his ears.
Mokou had passed out sitting with her head lying on a garbage bin that she was hugging to her chest. She slowly lifted her head then glanced at Max. "Oh... him? He followed me home..." She said as she sat her head back on the garbage bin.
"Bullshit. After setting fire to that two tailed cat-"
"So it was you two who did that to the poor thing?" Keine interrupted Max, pulling harder on his ear.
"Ow ow ow ow. I did nothing. She's the one who did it. All I did was laugh." Keine pulled harder on his ear. "Ah, damn! You're going to rip the damn thing off!"
"Mokou... you can't be drinking at a time like this. If that vampire were to break out of her home and come here again, I wouldn't be able to stop her myself." Keine sighs, still holding onto Max's ear. "The entire village is on edge because of all the nightmares everyone is having, me included. The children are having it even worse. Some of them refuse to even leave their homes now... Mokou!"
Mokou quickly lifted her head. "I'm listening..."
"The nightmares are getting worse, Mokou. I went to the shrine maiden, but she hasn't been able to find who or whatever is causing the nightmares."
"Alright, alright. I'll start looking around as well." Mokou said, slowly standing up.
"Thank you, Mokou." Keine said happily.
"Yeah yeah. See you around, Max." Mokou said as she slides the door to the outside open then exited.
"Peace." Max said as he held up the peace sign with his fingers.
"As for you..." Keine released Max's ear then faced him. "This isn't a good time for someone from the outside world to be here."
"What makes you think I'm from the outside?" Max said as he rubbed his aching ear.
"Because it is quite obvious that you are." Keine moved her face closer to Max's.
"Damn, she's pretty..." Max blushed a little.
"Your eyes..." Keine said.
"Yes, strange color for a human. I know..."
"No, no that's not it." Keine moved even closer to his face.
"Then what is it?" Max's face redden even more.
Keine stared at him for a moment before answering. "They have a strange glow."
"Um... yeah... so I've been told." Max grew nervous. "Shit. This ain't good. I need to get out of here. Um..." Max placed his hands on Keine's waist, pulling her closer to him. She looked at him in surprise, blushing slightly. "You said earlier that you were on edge... maybe I can relieve some of that edge for you?" He said, sweat running down the side of his face. Keine's jaw dropped. She then smiled sweetly then tilted her head back and with one well placed headbutt, Max was on the floor.
About a half hour later out in the wilderness...
"Jeez... she almost cracked my damn skull." Max began rubbing his forehead as he continued to walk. "Where the hell is that lake?" He looked up into the sky. "Hmm... the clouds are getting darker and darker every day. Is it my presence or just the way things are here? Ah, I can't tell for shit." Max swiped his fingers through his hair. "Well it seems like there's some powerful vampires in this place. I'll have to go and break their sanity," He chuckled a bit. "Then sit back and watch the fun."
Max continued walking for about an hour until he came upon the edge of a large misty lake.
"It's about god damn time..." Max stared out into the misty lake. "In the center, right? Shit... how am I going to get there? I suck at flying and all this mist would not help. This is such a pain in the ass. Oh well, if I just fly straight I should be-" He suddenly felt something touch his behind. He quickly turned around, his hand covering his pant's back pocket. "The hell? Where my wallet go?" Anger flared up within him. "Who's there damn it?" Only the wind through the trees answered him. "Fine then. Be that way."
Max swiped his hand in front of him, sending out a strong shock wave with a loud bang. The wave rippled out in a wide cone in front of him, picking up dust and bending the trees, leaving cut marks on them. Not waiting for the dust to settle, Max made his way through the ravaged trees, looking for any signs of life. After a moment of looking around, he sensed fear in the air. Following the feeling led him to a large boulder. Using his telekinetic power, he lifted the boulder into the air. He saw nothing behind the boulder, but the fear he was sensing got stronger.
"The hell...?" Max said. He was about to set the boulder back down in till he spotted small footprints in the grass that appeared to vanish then reappear, leading away from him. "Oh, so that's how it is." He threw the boulder to the side then rushed out towards the footprints, reaching out with his hand. He then grabbed a hold of something, revealing three little girls with fairy like wings in front of him.
"Let go of my head!" One of the little girls cried out while trying to break Max's grip.
"Sunny, I think we've been caught." The fairy girl with long straight black hair said.
"You think?" The fairy with short gold hair said while still struggling.
"The hell are you three supposed to be?" Max asked, still sporting an angry look.
"We're fairies you idiot now let go!" The fairy named Sunny yelled. Max tightened his grip. "Ow ow ow!
"Fairies? Well this place certainly is a mystical fucking wonderland now ain't it? Anyways, I believe you have something of mine..." Max said as he squeezed Sunny's head harder.
"It's going to break! It's going to break!" Sunny yells as she flails wildly.
"We found it first!" The fairy with curly blond hair protested.
"It was in my pocket you little shit." Max said.
"Um... Luna? I think you should just give it back to him. Didn't you just see what he did?"
"Star! Help me here!" Sunny cried out.
"No way! He'll kill me!" Star said.
"Okay fine." Luna pulled out Max's wallet then pulled out all the things that were in it. "You get the wallet. We get what is inside."
"How about no?" Max said.
"You're being greedy." Luna said.
"I'm about to crush your friend's head in a minute." Max raises Sunny off the ground, who had already fainted from his painful grip.
"Fine. You get the money. We keep whatever this is." Luna said. She held up a square plastic wrapper with something circular inside.
"What is it?" Star asked.
Max dropped Sunny then laughed out loud. "Oh please. You girls have absolutely no use for that right now."
Luna ripped the plastic wrapper and pulled out the circular object. "Oh! It looks like one of those balloon things from the outside world!"
"No you idiot." Max said. Luna then placed her mouth on the object then blew into it, forming a long balloon. Max face palmed.
"That's so cool!" Star clapped happily.
"What's so cool?" Sunny said as she struggled to her feet.
"Such a waste..." Max said as he walked up to Luna, snatching his wallet then proceeding back to the lake's edge.
"Hey! Where do you think you're going?" Sunny said, chasing after Max with the other two fairies right behind her.
"Is there a mansion in the middle of this lake?" Max asked as he looked out into the mist.
"Uh, yeah. " Sunny said.
"Good to hear." Max said.
"Why would you want to go there? You going to try and get inside?" Sunny asked.
"If you want in the mansion you will have to get through the gate guard." Star said.
"I don't plan on being seen." Max replied.
"So, you are going to sneak in there? Hah! Good luck with that. Even if you got passed the gate guard, there's that maid you have to look out for." Sunny said.
"I'm good at sneaking around." Max's face turned gloomy. "I have my time spent in that dreaded city to thank for that." He thought. His face then lit up. "Oh, that's right. You girls can turn yourselves invisible. Is that just something you fairies can do?"
"Actually," Sunny crossed her arms then stuck her chest out. "That was me. I can control the refraction of light."
"I can increase and decrease the level of sound." Luna said.
"And I can sense animate objects from far away." Star said.
Max looked at the girls for a moment. His lips then formed into a dark smile. "Perfect..."
"Eh?" The three fairies said, looking all confused.
"Here's the deal." Max says as he lowers himself to the fairies eye level. "You girls help me get into the mansion and I'll forgive you for taking my wallet."
The fairies look at each other then back at Max. "No way! I heard the mistress of the mansion has been in a bad mood lately. If she catches us trespassing again, she might not let us live this time!" Sunny whined. The other two fairies nodded in agreement. Max simply gave them an oppressing stare. The fairies began to shiver as fear began to take hold of them. "Alright! We'll help, but only for a little while!" Sunny panicked. Luna and Star gave her an objectionable stare. Max smiled then stood back up.
"Alrighty then. Let's get a move on." Max said.
Max and the fairies arrived in front of the gate to the mansion.
"Holy shit. This is one hell of a place they got here." Max said. He walked up to the girl who was standing next to the gate entrance. The girl had long scarlet hair and wore a green beret and dress. "This is the gate guard? Look at her. She's frikin sleeping standing up."
"She tends to do that from time to time." Star said.
"Well whatever. Let's go in." Max said.
They walk up to the front entrance of the mansion. As they got closer the doors opened and a maid with silver hair walked out, heading for the gate. Max turned around to stare.
"Now that's an ass I'd like to tap. Hot damn!" Max said, getting all wild up.
"Hurry before the door closes!" Sunny said.
The group ran into the mansion. The moment Max ran in, his body froze.
"What is this insane destructive power I'm sensing?" Max thought.
"What's wrong?" Luna asked.
"It's nothing..." Max said as he began to walk, the fairies close behind him. "I heard there was two vampires here is that right?"
"Yeah. The mistress of this place and her little sister." Sunny said.
"Don't tell us you want to fight them?" Luna said.
"No." Max replied.
"Then what are you going to do?" Star asked.
"Let's just look for the oldest vampire first." Max said.
After walking around for a while, they came to a set of black wooden doors.
"So she's in here?" Max asked.
"Yeah, if she wasn't anywhere else in the mansion then she must be sleeping." Sunny said, the other two fairies nodding in agreement.
"Of course. It's day time." Max opened one of the doors then slipped in.
"Uh... are you sure about this?" Sunny said as she followed him. The other two fairies held on close to Sunny.
Max ignored her. He walked up to the side of a large magnificent bed. He then stared down at the girl that was sleeping in the middle of it. The girl had short light blue hair and a pair of bat like wings on her back. She wore nothing but a thin sleeveless shirt and panties. Her sleeping face was full of distress.
Max had a disappointed expression. "Not only is the vampire a girl, she's a frikin little girl. Not only that, she's not the source of that radical power I'm feeling." Max thought. He then noticed the fairies were looking at him strangely. "What?" He asked.
"Pervert." All three said.
"Oh shut up and let's go." Max said as he made his way out of the bedroom.
"Where we going now?" Sunny asked.
"To find the younger vampire." Max said.
"What?" The three panicked.
"You heard me. Let's go." Max said.
"No way! The younger sister will kill us for sure!" Sunny protested. Luna and Star nodded in agreement.
Max stopped right before the stairs. "Sounds like she's more scarier than the older one."
"She is..." Star said.
"They keep her locked up in the basement." Luna said.
"Really? Then why are we up here? Let's go." Max began to walk down the stairs. Sunny and Star glared at Luna before following him.
They arrived in front of a black metal door. Max opened it to find cold stone steps leading down into the darkness.
"We're not going. It's too scary down there." Sunny said, Luna and Star nodding their head.
"For fuck sake fine. I'm not going to argue with you. Just stay up here in till I get back." Max made his way down to the basement. The fairies stuck out their tongues at his back.
Max slowly descended into the basement of the mansion.
"Do not be afraid. Do not hesitate. You're power is yours to command, to control..." The distorted voice of a girl echoed in Max's mind.
"Oh great. The freaky voice is back..." Max said under his breath.
He came to another door at the end of the stone steps. He slowly opened it and made his way into the room which had another magnificent bed placed in the middle of it. He walked to the side and looked down at the girl who slept there. The girl had blond hair and had a set of wings, but they appeared to be made out of iron with prism shards that seemed to glow. Like her sister, she wore only a sleeveless shirt and panties. She to had a face full of distress.
"Fucked up wings she's got there... So she's the one giving off all that power. The air around her burns and her mind seems to be weakened from all that chaotic energy flowing through her." Max grinned. "It won't take much to break this girls sanity and unleash that untapped power." He thought.
Max reached his hand out to the sleeping vampire. He goes to touch her head when suddenly a knife pierced his hand. "Gah! The hell...?" He grabbed the knife and yanked it out, throwing it to the floor. Holding onto his bloodied hand, he turned his head to the direction where the knife came from. The maid he had seen earlier was standing in the door way holding another knife.
"Be happy it was only one knife. Next it will be two. Now step away from the young mistress."
"Big mistake, babe. I'll draw from you three times what I just bled." The hole in Max's hand quickly healed.
"I do not wish to disturb the young mistress. Let us take this up stairs." The maid said, her expression remaining stern.
Max smiled. "Heh, whatever."
Max followed behind the maid as they made their way back to the main floor. They walked down the hallway leading to the front entrance. Max suddenly stopped, as did the maid.
"I don't know how you got in here, but you need to leave this place. Intruders are not taken well here." The maid said, keeping her back to Max.
"I have my ways." Max said. "As much as I like to look at your behind, would you mind showing me your face and telling me your name?"
"It is not polite to ask for someone's name without giving yours first."
"My bad. The name is Max."
The maid turned around to face him. "I am Sakuya Izayoi. Now if you may-"
"I still expect you to pay for making me bleed. Since you are a girl whose job is to serve, why don't you and me go-"
A knife suddenly flew past Max's right ear, nearly slicing it off. Max was surprised by the sudden attack. He felt his ear to check for any blood.
"I will not ask you again. Leave now or you will be forcefully removed." Sakuya said as she held up a number of knives in her hand.
Max smiled as he raised his fists, preparing to fight. "This is fine to. It gives me an excuse to accidentally tear off that sexy maid uniform of yours. I'll be ripp'n them off piece, by piece."
Sakuya stared down Max. Her eyes turned from blue to red and in that instant, Max suddenly found himself outside.
"What the fuck was that just now? Something distorted. Was it... time?" Max thought. He then turned around to see Sakuya standing in front of the door way. "You..."
"Leave and do not let me catch you here again." Sakuya said before turning around to head back into the mansion. She began walking when suddenly she was frozen in place. Surprise enveloped her face. "I... can't... move...!" She was slowly turned around, now facing Max again.
Max looked on her with a cocky smile. "So, you can manipulate time, eh? You should be more careful when going outside the flow of time. You never know when you might run into the things that exist outside of time." A transparent blob formed in the palm of his hand. "Oh and maid girl,"
"Damn it. What's preventing me from stopping time?" Sakuya thought as she struggled to break free from Max's psychic grip.
"I wasn't kidding. You will repay me, one way, or another." He then tossed the blob at Sakuya.
The projectile crashed right into her stomach, sending her flying backwards into the mansion and down the hallway, startling the fairy maids and sending them into panic. She rolled a dozen times before she finally stopped, holding her stomach in pain. She quickly got up on her feet as Max sprinted his way towards her. She tossed a number of knives at him, but he merely smacked them out of the air with his hands. She then ducked as Max tried to punch her in the chest. She swiped his legs out from under him then jumped into the air, sending down a curtain of knives. Max caught himself then sent out a rippling blast with the swipe of his hand, knocking out all the knives from the air. Sakuya quickly froze time to move out of the way, placing knives to be sent at Max as she moved. Time resumed and Max wasn't able to jump out of the way in time, catching a knife in the shoulder.
"Ah! Damn bitch!" Max grabbed the knife out of his shoulder then chucked it back at Sakuya. She caught the knife then proceeded to send more at him. He then started to toss volleys of transparent blobs at her. Both quickly dodged each other's projectiles. After about a minute of sending attacks back and forth, they both stopped, showing no signs of fatigue. Sakuya then pulled out a spell card.
"What the hell are those card things?" Max thought.
"Illusion Image: Luna Clock!" Sakuya shouted.
Sakuya let lose a barrage of knives, sending them in all directions. Max began dodging them only to find himself surrounded by more knives that seemed to have appeared out of nowhere.
"Shit!" Max yelled. He managed to dodge the knives, but not without receiving several cuts from just barely dodging some of them. Sakuya suddenly appeared behind him and delivered a kick to his side. He took the painful blow then spun around to kick her back, but missed. "Damn bitch. She's going to give me just as much problems as the last one. There's no point in holding back." He thought. He pumped himself up, increasing the amount of his dark power that ran through him, causing Sakuya to falter a little.
"What is this feeling?" Sakuya thought. Max then began swiping at the air, sending a number of shock waves at her. She couldn't dodge them conventionally, forcing her to teleport in order to invade the blasts. After dodging the last one, she pulled out another spell card. "Illusion Sign: Killing Doll!" She shouted. Knives scattered all around her then rushed in Max's direction. Max merely threw out another powerful shock wave, destroying the knives. "Damn it." Sakuya cursed. She teleported out of the shock wave's way, but the moment she reappeared in her new location Max quickly jumped in front of her then delivered a powerful punch to her chest, breaking a couple of her ribs. She screamed as she was sent backwards from the blow. She landed outside the front doors, tumbling across the ground a bit before coming to a stop. She spat up some blood then yelped in pain as she held her broken ribs. Max quickly appeared in front of her, holding up his palm to her face. She could only look at him with fear.
Max grinned. "Time to wonder in your nightmares, just like the other one."
Sakuya quickly shut her eyes as she felt energy swell up at the center of Max's palm, bracing herself for what was coming. She then quickly opened her eyes to the sound of a fist colliding with bone.
"Gah!" Max yelled out as he was sent to the ground after receiving a blow to the side of his face.
"Meiling!" Sakuya managed to force out, air having not yet fully returned to her lungs.
Meiling turned to Sakuya then gave her a thumbs up. "Sorry I'm late, Miss Sakuya."
"Where were you?" Sakuya asked.
"Not sleeping! I swear!" Meiling said in a panicked voice.
Max got back up off the ground, wiping the blood from his lip with his sleeve, his expression filled with anger.
"Another bitch just had to show up." Max readied himself. "I didn't come here to fight, but I'll be more than happy to beat your asses."
"Bring it big guy!" Meiling said with confidence.
"Be careful, Meiling! He's fighting to kill." Sakuya warned.
"Really? Well then I'll have to show him the terror of the Scarlet Gate Guard!" Meiling got herself into her battle pose.
Max sprinted towards Meiling with great speed, sending out a fist towards her face. She caught his fist with both of her hands but wasn't able to stop its momentum. His punch hit her in the face, knocking her backwards. She tumbled back a great distance before stopping. Max quickly turned to blast Sakuya, but only managed to put a large hole in the ground where she once was. She appeared beside Meiling, helping her to her feet.
"Ouch! That hurt!" Meiling said as blood flowed out of her nose.
"It would have been much worse if you hadn't caught his punch." Sakuya said, still holding her pained ribs. "Listen, Meiling. He's playing by his own rules. We need to be careful when fighting him."
"Gotcha." Meiling said as she returned to her battle pose. "But will you be alright, Miss Sakuya?"
"Worry about yourself! He's coming!"
Max had leaped into the air in an attempt to crush the girls. They both dived out of the way only to be sent flying from the shock wave he created as he slammed into the ground, their clothes and skin being cut in places. They quickly recovered from his attack. He threw a transparent blob at Sakuya who dodged it. Meiling attempted to engage him in hand to hand combat, but she was caught in his telekinetic grasp then tossed right at Sakuya. Sakuya dodged Meiling, who crashed into the wall of the mansion. She then pulled out a spell card.
"Buriallusion: Phantasmic Killer!" Sakuya shouted, throwing out a horde of knives.
Meiling quickly got back up then jumped towards Max, a spell card in hand. "Attack Sign: Roc Fist!" She shouted. Rainbow colored flames covered Meiling's fist. She sent her energy filled fist towards Max's head, but he caught her fist with one hand. He retaliated with a punch to her gut, causing her to spit up some blood and then tossed her back at Sakuya. A large amount of knives came bearing down upon Max. He quickly sent out a shock wave from his body, shattering the knives. Sakuya tried to shield herself from the blast, but was knocked back into the wall of the mansion. She quickly got back up then took to the air. She tossed some knives at Max as she gained altitude. She saw him just stand his ground as the knives came ever closer.
"They're going to hit!" Sakuya thought. She watched as the knives went through Max and hit the ground behind him. "Eh?" She watched as he seemingly vanished from her sight. "What the hell?"She turned her head slightly, spotting Max who was standing a bit away from where she had thrown her knives. He made no move to attack. "What happened? Did he teleport?" She thought. She then saw that he had a sinister smile.
"Miss Sakuya! Why did you do that?" Meiling called out to her from below.
Sakuya turned to face her. "What the hell...?" She could hear Meiling, but her voice was awfully distorted. Not only Meiling's voice, but all the sounds around her was warped. Her vision had also begun to waver. She held her head as it began to hurt. "What is wrong with me?" She thought.
"Are you okay, Miss Sakuya?" Meiling said. Sakuya only stared at her.
"She's not okay you idiot. She's losing it." Max thought.
Sweat poured down Sakuya's pale face as she breathed heavily. She didn't notice before, but her body was shaking as the wavering in her vision began to worsen. "What is happening?" She thought.
"Miss Sakuya, look out!" Meiling cried out.
Sakuya looked up to see Max diving towards here. She moved to the side to dodge his kick and then tried to stop time, but nothing happened. "What?" She said in shock. Unable to stop time, she began to desperately dodge Max's barrage of punches and kicks. "I feel sick..." She thought. One of Max's punches connected with her stomach, causing her to hunch over in pain. He then dropped his fists down on her back, sending her to the ground below.
"Miss Sakuya!" Meiling called out as she ran to catch the falling maid. She caught her then sat her down on the ground, allowing her to vomit. "Miss Sakuya, get a grip!" Meiling then turned her head towards Max as he floated down to the ground, glaring at him with anger. "How dare you do this to Miss Sakuya!"
"Her fault for getting in my way." Max said in an uncaring tone.
Sakuya forced herself to her feet. "I'm okay, Meiling."
"Miss Sakuya..." Meiling said with worry in her voice.
"You won't be for long." Max said as a dark red aura began to form around him. "You're already on the verge of breaking thanks to the affects of my power." The grass around him began to die as his power increased. "This fight took way too long. I'll finish this quickly."
Sakuya and Meiling prepared themselves as Max began to charge towards them. Meiling jumped out of the way to avoid his incoming strike, but Sakuya remained where she stood.
"This can't be happening! I'm too scared to move!" Sakuya thought.
"Miss Sakuya!" Meiling screamed.
Max took aim right for Sakuya. Meiling quickly sprinted back to Sakuya's side then pushed her out of the way. Max's fist connected with Meiling's chest, sending out a powerful shock wave at the point of contact. Meiling screamed as she was blasted backwards into the mansion wall. Sakuya was sent tumbling off to the side and into a tree. Meiling quickly got up off the ground despite the pain.
"Miss Sakuya... I have to help Miss Sakuya..." Meiling thought. She bled all over from the large cuts she received from the blast. "My head really hurts... and everything is out of focus..." She suddenly heard a loud scream. "Miss Sakuya!" She called out. Sakuya was lying on the ground holding onto her head with both hands, screaming out in terror as her sanity gave out.
Max began to laugh. "It didn't take long for her to break now did it?" He then turned to Meiling. "Your mind will break just like her's here in a minute if you keep fighting me."
A cold shiver ran down Meiling's spine. "What do I do what do I do what do I do?" Terror swelled up in her face. She pulled out a spell card, but before she could call out her attack, Max charged right into her, sending her through the damaged stone wall of the mansion. She tumbled down one of the hallways of the building, slamming into a wall.
"And there goes the ball game." Max said then made his way through the hole in the wall and towards Meiling. "I guess I shouldn't have come here, but curiosity got the best of me." Meiling looked up at him as he drew closer, fear ever present in her eyes. "Your sanity is already at its limit. Time to join that maid."
"Move damn it! Move!" Meiling thought to herself, struggling to get her body to obey her.
"What is going on down here? I can't sleep with all of you causing so much noise." An aggravated voice of a girl echoed through the hallway.
Max quickly turned around to see a small girl with bat wings standing behind him. She wore a pink mob cap and a pink dress with bright red trimming.
Meiling's face lit up. "Mistress Remilia!" She cried out in relief. She quickly stood up, but fell back to the ground, holding on to her head with both her hands as she struggled to keep her mind intact.
"My... I figured there was an intruder in my mansion, but I expected it to be the usual one, not a new face." Remilia said.
"Remilia, huh? So you're the owner of this mansion." Max said as he folded his arms.
"Remilia Scarlet, yes. And what would your name be, young man?"
"Just call me Max."
"Max? That sounds like a name from the outside world, though I suppose your attire would be the main indication. What brings a boy like you to Gensokyo?"
"I have my reasons."
"I see. But it seems that you have caused a great deal of damage to my mansion, not to mention you injured some of my servants. I'm afraid I cannot allow that to go unpunished."
"Look, little girl. I'm tired and really don't want to waste any more time dicking around here anymore. So if you don't mind, I'll call it quits and leave now."
Remilia's eyebrow twitched. "I am still tired myself. You see, I have been having quite the nightmares lately, making it difficult for me to sleep well, so now I am stressed out."
"I couldn't care less."
Remilia smiled, revealing her sharp fangs. "I think your blood would do wonders in relieving me of that stress. So why don't you stay for a little while longer?"
"You seriously want to become the fif girl I've beaten since I got here?"
"Oh I assure you, young man, that I am more powerful than all the ones you've faced put together and then sum." Remilia's expression turned more devilish as her fangs seemed to lengthen and her eyes glowed.
Max sighed. "I guess I'll have to give you the chance to prove that then." He said as he readied himself.
"Thank you. Now, shall we not waste each other's time and get right to it?"
"Ladies first."
Thanks for the reviews. Hopefully I didn't leave too many silly mistakes this time.