YOU MUST READ THIS IMPORTANT A/N! IMPORTANT NOTE!

is Mai in the astral realm, but something is terribly wrong. I'm not going to tell you until the next chapter though.

2.Every time Mai feels a tremor/ electricity shock/ or shaking she forgets bits of her recent memories. SHE IS FORGETTING THINGS SO DONT PM ME SAYING IT WAS TOO REPETITIVE (look at #3)

meant to be repetitive because she is forgetting and then re-noticing the details that she recently forgot

4. REMEMBER Mai is very confused so I want the reader to be able to experience that confusion as well.

Chapter #6

Mai's Pov

Everything seemed to be too bright, too nice, too…..wait, no thats wrong. Everything is too dark, too depressing to…..no, no, no. Theres not even anything here its all just….empty. No light, no dark, no inbetween.

The back of my neck began to tingle and a violent ripple of electricity attacked my inside. My thoughts cleared to a blank state even though panic was evident within my eyes. Gripping my hand to help stop it from shaking as I began to hyperventilate.

"Mai, stop confusing yourself. Attempting to describe the astral plane using normal words is foolish. Just focus on what you do know."

I shuddered as I wiped my head around, trying to locate the source of the melodic voice. It seemed to vibrate the ground, so where would they be? Wait, ….WHERES THE GROUND? I looked down, only to find myself floating on air.

I gulped and stomped my foot nervously on the invisible surface. A current of air? No, it was something else, something…...warm.

What, where am I? What did that voice say this place was again? Astrol Plare? Astel Pl…..? I felt the shock of electricity down the back of my neck once more and shuddered until the feeling passed. As the wave passed through me, arching my back without my own consent, my mind when blank once again.

"Where am I, again?" I muttered.

After gathering a quick look at my surroundings I stopped for a minute and slapped my hand against my face. What was I thinking about again? I began to pace in circles roaming my hands through my short hair. I can't remember how much time passed by, nor can I remember why I'm pacing in the first place. But, I feel as though I'm missing something; like something important has been cleanly shaved off my concisos.

Beads of sweat began to dribble down my panicked face. Someone else is here. No, thats not right either. SomeTHING is here.

I grabbed my shaking hand as it began to elevate forwards, trying to reach out to something that I could not see. My breathing increased and panic was evident on my face.

"Stop it! I have had enough of this mess." My bottom lip quickened violently.

At this point, sobs were inevitable. I stopped holding back, stopped holding myself together, and at one moment the tears seemed to choke down throat. I almost stopped breathing altogether at that point. I fell onto the floor, and banged myself against some sort of…..of….. force below me.

"Just leave me alone. I want to go back. I want to- I want to I-" There was nothing left to say. My brain had finally iihs process what I had not been able to moment before I began to scream. 'Go where, Mai? Where is it that you plan on going to? Where else is there to go to?'

It was then I felt a new type of shaking vibrate through my entire body. Not from my sobbing, but from a somewhere else.

I grabbed onto my chest. "It hurts," I whine out loud, pushing my face to the surface below me.

Another tremor hit me hard in the gut this time. After that one, I wasn't sure where I was anymore.

Again, it feels like something's missing. Am I forgetting something important, or is it just paranoia?

Surprisingly, there was something below me. I hadn't expected there to be a strange type of warm surface below me. I wonder where it came from? Lost in my thoughts, I began to try and push myself off the warm surface; thats when the shaking came back, again.

"Mai! Mai! You have to get back to you body now. Please, you need to get back to Noll. Something's gone terribly wrong, I'm so sorry."

That voice, it sounds so….familiar? Gripping onto my chest with sweaty hands I closed my eyes and breathed out. I felt my pulsing heart begin to slow to a calm rhythm.

Thats it Mai. A little closer. Tell….Naru that- AGHHHHHHHH!

"Mister? Mister, voice guy? Whats happening?" I screamed out covering years from the error wail the voice cried out with. I have to help him, I just have to. I brought my hands to my ears and latched them onto the sides of my head, as the high pitch ringing noise seemed to travel though my bones.

"NO, NO, NO, NO, MISTER?!"

This time, when the shaking passed through me, instead of increasing my heart rate, it tops it all together. I brought my hands out in front of my and began grabbing at what I thought to be the air, desperately trying push some back into my lungs

After more than a few more second though, I fell to the surface below me.

"It hurts," I weeded and my hands fell limp to my sides. The muscles in my face began to relax until finally my body was in a state of toal, but relating, paralysis. My eyes were the last to fully shut down though. It was as though my muscles were waiting for something important, or someone.

As my breathing finally got to a point of a total stop, my eyes went with it. Im sorry, I was too weak to keep them open for what they needed to somehow see. As my mind slowly shut down, gear after gear, and memory after memory, thought after thought, fading away, only one name remained.

Naru…

OK… So, yes it was very short, and I'm sorry, but I wanted to elaborate on Mai's condition because it will be important later.

This was hard to write so reviews are very appreciated. I was trying out a new style of writing so this is my ginny pig. Don't be easy on the review and stuff though.

-Olliephantomhive2461