Okay, so are you guys liking this?
I mean, do you think it could stop there, or do you want more from it, 'cause I had a little more in mind. But, I have been re-reading this, and it's not my best work.
The characters are a little too OOC for my (and maybe your) liking, and some of it just seems clunky. Also, I've been working on some other stuff, which I think is definitely better.
So if you want more, I can definitely do more, but if not, that's cool too.
Basic lay down of what would happen if it continued on:
The demigods find out that Peitho sent them to get Scarlett (instead of just a little claiming hologram and a satyr) because Scarlett's father is, essentially, crazy, and Peitho thought that sending one satyr would just result in broken bones, black eyes, and some bystander running to the police about an animal-man kidnapping a sweet innocent little girl. However, a large team of skilled, experienced demigods would be a different thing entirely.
They would get Scarlett out of Oregon, and all would be well. Happy ever after. Until Magnus Chase and The Gods of Asgard.
So, I restate: do you want more, or are you fine with it stopping here?
Love,
The Author